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What is it you want to achieve with this character? What context do you (hypothetically or no) plan to use it in? What relation to this character do you want people to experience? If you don't know then the first step is decide all of that and head from there. No need to be nebulous about it.

As for how similar she is to Jack Frost, I'm not seeing much of a resemblance. Maybe if I squint a little.

I think she is talking about Jack frost from rise of the guardians perhaps? only similaritys i can see are the proportions possibly, Jack frosts overall design is completely different to her character :S

(edit) One thing i have noticed is that the shoulder on the left looks broad and quite masculine compared to the right side.

Could be that
For Jack Frost mostly his smile http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mf3mi2kMJA1rbybmk.gif

At 12/5/14 09:52 PM, Lintire wrote: Critique it in relation to what? How similar she is to Jack Frost?

Critique is a two-way street - I could criticise based on what my idea of what good character design is, but it probably won't be what you want it to be. Maybe I think it'd be better if it had more crazy bullshit on her, or maybe I think that anything that isn't practical has no place in character design? You don't know that.

What is it you want to achieve with this character? What context do you (hypothetically or no) plan to use it in? What relation to this character do you want people to experience? If you don't know then the first step is decide all of that and head from there. No need to be nebulous about it.

As for how similar she is to Jack Frost, I'm not seeing much of a resemblance. Maybe if I squint a little.

Not trying for nebulous, as I said I think its her face. There is something about this piece as why I am asking a larger audience on feedback on what it is. There is nothing catchy about her. Should she be more realistic? more anime? I'm just now sure and staring at her isn't helping what I find so off about her. I don't care what the audience response are, thus why I'd like it so open. Tell me where you think it could improve. Random crap, isn't useful, have more, have less, all good feedback to me. :)

I'm not happy with this. I know I can do better. Please look at the link to her upload and write what I should do.

I think its her face?
I wanted her to look a little like JackFrost, but meeeeehhhhhh

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Happy Birthday Art portal! You're what has kept me active on NG for years. :3
Without you, no body would know me :P

At 6/17/14 01:50 PM, SCTE3 wrote: Oh, well, if you were put down as "Inspiration", the piece won't show up in your Audio, Flash, or Games because you technically didn't make the piece. Sometimes, for things like this, would be nice if it did show though. Have you checked here for it?

Thank you so much for your reply! But no. It was just cover art for the music.

No sorry, it was not PM. It was an approve or deny request. That I clicked approve too.

My art was used to inspire a song, and I approved them requesting to use my art, however, after I wanted to listen to the song, but I cannot find it. Is there a way I can look at everything I've approved or declined? Or tagged in? It doesn't show up in my audio portal

At 3/24/14 07:22 PM, D-Nightmare wrote:

At 3/24/14 07:18 PM, Zakuga wrote:

At 3/24/14 06:55 PM, Shadowu wrote:

'sup?

My day has been fine, thank you.

Gooda

Here you go.

Bless you.

At 3/24/14 06:55 PM, Shadowu wrote:

At 3/24/14 03:00 PM, Zakuga wrote: just wanted to say 'sup.

'sup?

My day has been fine, thank you.

Gooda

At 3/24/14 06:33 PM, ChickenChips wrote: Hey I'm the coolest

Yes you are.

At 3/24/14 05:12 PM, Entice wrote: Just perusing Newground's latest shit threads

Welcome, my brother.

At 3/24/14 03:44 PM, Boomstick wrote: leave now, before things get violet.

But that's my favorite color. So I think I'll stay.

just wanted to say 'sup.

'sup?

I'm making a web comic, it's going to be a flash comic, so it won't be able to be uploaded into the normal arts section. Would you guys like to see my web coming here? I'd have to upload it into the flash animation section. You'll click next and back to change page, technically it would be a flash...So would the ng community want me to upload or not?

Bloop,

This is the main character from my comic. It's called "Monster".

I'll be making an alternate ending comic to an anime called "Princess tutu", I'm looking for light-hearted, Japanese cutesy, happy, or chill music. If you'd be willing to let me use your song that would be awesome. Credited of course.

Poundcake? Hell Yes, count me in! I'll PM. You can check my art here or DA, but I think I'm def your girl.

Historically YES. Females did have armor. Joan of Arc what did she rush out naked? I've actually done reports on this for college blah blah, SO yes its the same as male. After you place the armor padding and belts it hide the form of a body so there are no noticeable differences. A typical thing for female armor like Hilde from Soul Calaber is wrong, where it slopes inward to show off her tits is SO HORRIBLY WONG, not only would sloping in for the boobs make it weaker in the in grave it also slopes in toward their heart making every move the enemy makes whether it be by arrow or sword they will hit her heart by the angle of the shitty ass armor making everything tilted to their hearts.

Now I know no one will just take my word for it, so read up on your own from this guy who makes armor for a living:

http://kotaku.com/5868925/the-problem-with-womens-armor-acco rding-to-a-man-who-makes-armor

At 11/10/12 05:28 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 11/10/12 04:18 PM, Zakuga wrote: Where on your profile does it say if you are still scouted or not?

On your profile, go to the art tab.
At the bottom, it will say if you're scouted or not.

Ah, thank you.

Okay, I tested out another file and that worked http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/zakuga/bleep it seems to be that file.
Case closed. Thank you all for your help. :3

Firefox doesn't work either

At 11/10/12 04:32 PM, EJR wrote: What browser are you using? Maybe try using a different one.

Im using chrome, I've also tried ie. Ill dl firefox and try. I read another post on the art forum; this couldn't be because I've been unscouted could it? (I don't even know where to check if you'er scouted or not).

Where on your profile does it say if you are still scouted or not?

Nothing worked, waited longer than a minute and get this "ERROR - Sorry, there was a problem with your request. Please try again later."

I can't upload to the art portal anymore. I get an "error - " I cleared everything on my browser; tried again, same thing. Left it alone for 3 days tried again still get an error. Who can I talk too?

Thank you for your help, and not sounding like you want to slap me irl for asking.

I read posts and such from the forums, but it seems like the art section is just clogged with art threads. Which brings me to my question.. What do you use art threads for? Why not just upload to NG Portal?
-No disrespect intended. Honestly just curious.

Making a SWF picture (kinda like a gif) I have a picture drawn out of a guy looking out at space on a hill out of a futuristic city. I need a Jazzy easy listening song, maybe like the cowboy bebop songs. If you have a song I could use that would be sweet. Of course links to your profile and such.

I can do art. You can look at some of my work here on Newgrounds. I'll send an email too.

Thats easy, I can. I'm not a dude tho.

I can help someone out with female voices. :P or art.