i couldnt take it any more so I wrote this essay,i need feedback.
Why Most of African Americans are Ruining America
This may be a touchy subject, but it is time to voice what has been on many people's minds! About 75% of African American are ruining this country more than any other ethnic group. The other 25% are decent hard working Americans. The 25% we should be proud to have in our country. What about the 75%? Well let's just say that's different story. Before I say anything else let me state that this all refers to most of the African American population and not to the few good, hard working African Americans.
Crime in this country is skyrocketing and jails are crowded because of these black people. One of three African-American teens are predicted to be addicted to drugs, in prison, or dead. Based on current rates of incarceration, an estimated 7.9% of black males
compared to 0.7% of white males will enter State of Federal prison by the
time they are age 20 and 21.4% of black males versus 1.4% of white males will
be incarcerated by age 30. (U.S. Department of Justice)
Black people making fun of whites is racism as much as white people making fun of black people. If a white man hits a black man it is considered a hate crime. Judging it as a hate crime IS racist in itself, its discriminating. The white man could have just been pissed because he keyed his car. Why should we give money for black college funds? How long have we given blacks to rebuild and get their act together after the confederates lost the civil war? Why should we pay for their lack of commitment? Is it our fault that they can't pay for college because they spend it all on drugs and cds that demean women?
It is no secret that almost all rappers are black. Why do they get pissed off when we say n**** when they use it all the time in there songs? Why must they constantly undermine, and insult women by calling them hoes? Without women our great nation would have failed long ago because they do jobs that many men don't want to do and vice versa for men. And why can't they speak proper English. It's not like they were born in another country where they spoke a different language! The way they talk is unfortunately messing with the youth of America's head, don't believe me just watch this [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eTosQerW BzU]. After you watch that video I hope that you now under stand why most of the black population is ruining America.
now who agrees w/ me