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At 3/7/09 01:36 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote:

At 3/7/09 01:09 PM, Vortex00 wrote: updated

Imo, it's a bit too symmetical, especially with regards to the shading. It's really nice though, looks like you've spent a good bit of time tweaking things to your liking.

Yeah, most of it is. I guess I was worried about the horizontal flip looking off, but it does anyways. Should have made her slouched a bit or something.
Thanks!

updated

At 3/6/09 09:19 AM, Ani-x wrote:

At 3/5/09 10:02 PM, Vortex00 wrote: been in max for the past few days.

bone/skin rig + ik solvers, point helpers etc.
still have envelopes to work out.
not done with the rigging, and I want to add some soft body mods.

getting there.
you may want to rotate it a bit more to the left,
this will not only give the face a straight on, more personal look.
but will also show the hip/bust of the figure better.

great stuff

will do. need to work out the eyes, like rig it so they will look in the direction of some helper.
also add stuff to change facial expressions.

thanks!

At 3/6/09 10:15 PM, Captain-Ben wrote:

At 3/6/09 03:03 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote: WOO!

Congratulations to ReNaeNae!!! User of the Year!!!!

woohoo go renaenae!

grats!

been in max for the past few days.

bone/skin rig + ik solvers, point helpers etc.
still have envelopes to work out.
not done with the rigging, and I want to add some soft body mods.

At 2/25/09 04:16 AM, Kinsei01 wrote: and a third one for good measure,

Luigi,
this one could really benefit from some cool Photoshop.
Anyway on to the critique!!!

I like this, might want to also consider extending the ring finger a bit.

At 2/17/09 07:11 PM, Jessismith wrote: I just finished another "on and off" work. Just wanted to get some opinions on it.

I don't really like the water either. I get what you were trying to accomplish though being it a spirit pond. But it's seems like if you can see the tigers feet that well in the water, you'd also be able to see the ground under the water also (unless it's blue >.>;). The purple tiger is well done. Parts of the green on seem off mainly the direction of the left ear and the arm right under that, furthest away seems to curved. Good job on this I'm not really trying to negative.

At 2/26/09 11:06 PM, Tebone7 wrote: I guess i'll start titling them

Vampire's Feast.

Perhaps add more smaller orbs and make the moon bigger and but less bright. Some color tones in the sky and add stars. And maybe put some silhouettes of trees in there in the BG as well.

At 2/26/09 07:07 PM, PsycoManiac wrote: Just wanted to know what everyone things of it ^^ took me 3 days (about 6-9 hours) to make
used Photoshop and Flash to make it :P anyway tell me what you think!

Perhaps make the feather different sizes, one or two blurred off to the side in front of the POV.
The wings don't really look like they are in the background but sticking out in front of it because if that shadow around it, and the perspective of it. Perhaps you can distort the right part of the wing to make the perspective work out. It's a pain but you might want to consider using a thin smudge brush and stroke some fine lines in the wings to make them as fluffy as the smaller feathers.

mo betta imo

mo bigga?

My character Maiko

Ugh..trying to keep my crap fairly consistent but I was rushing towards the end because I get sick of drawing and coloring these pictures after a while... so coloring in some spots look lazy... (because they are.. >.>;)

The arm pulling the pantie looks weird. I redrew it a few times but still didn't get it looking right to me. >< I think I needed to make it sticking outwards further as I look at it again. Also think it would have been better to have had her pulling with only one or two fingers.

Also I'm not good with wrinkles but I didn't spend too much time on it here.

It's like.. the opposite of what I need to be doing ><;

It's need an overall detailing, there's little white spots that aren't colored in etc.

I really.. hate how the mouth came out. I actually hated this whole picture when I started it tbh. >.>;
But I had started it to work on soft skin techniques. I had the mouth different at first but, it was actually worse.. or not.

I realized in that samurai picture I drew that the proportions in the arms are pretty unbalanced. I guess I can see it now that I have a fresh look at it.

lol... it's kinda funny because just on this page alone starting from the top you can see how this character has changed. Her eyes are still normally green though.

uncensored + HQ: here

If you notice something else wrong or some C&C feel free to rip it up. My bad about posting this, I know so much crap is wrong with it but I just cant stand to color another pixel in this pic right now.

maybe later.

At 2/10/09 08:13 PM, tmkunt wrote: I made a quickie since, um, no one else did

fullsize yo

gah.. I forgot XD

nice pic.

I'm thinking you'd still be able to see the tail on the pig from that angle.

At 2/6/09 10:12 PM, Fleshlight wrote: I find that critiques don't help me that much. I see all the major errors with my crap and I just say "fuck it." Either I leave the file and never come back to it, or I stop when I feel like it's done and I shouldn't do any more.

I find myself doing this too. But it depends on what it was I was doing and how serious about it.

also the requests.. for it to actually work you need a section on the forums. Like under video games section. Moderated the same as other forums. Generalized for any kind of art, like flash, photoshop, w/e.. The requests will have their own topics. That way a separate user page will not needed, and retarded requests will be deleted. It's easy and people are already use to making new topics etc anyways.. .. lol, wtf and I saying..

It' can work just fine the way it is. the problem isn't really the system, it's the people using it (not all of them, but many of them). For it to truly work people need to not be retarded and actually read and comprehend the first post. Also people have to be willing to provide compensation of some degree that makes it even worth doing to begin with.

At 2/4/09 08:12 AM, jagondudo wrote: i like this last one the best. you tend to go overboard on the highlights at times but that one is nice. the hair is especially good and the pockets... its that type of depth that really catches the eye...however you lost me from the dress down... there's no depth on the skirt and no shadows from the jacket so it looks flat. her legs look extremely thick making it hard to see where they would connect to the pelvis... still tho you're improving plenty.

Thanks for the crits. I wasn't sure exactly where to put those shadows from the jacket and on the skirt. Even here I'm just taking a logical guess. That wrinkle in the middle of the skirt I'll probably wind up just taking out. Good call on the legs, thanks.

changes:

no edit post FTL

so anyways.. next!
skipping the other stuff..
so after that..

I finished this today :O

Redrawing my character.

THIS picture is what I think I am capable of to this point, because.. It took me like.. several hours or what seem like DAYS over the course of days literally to finish this biotch, even though it seems fairly simplistic.

I have about 24 raw gigs of me doing lines and color for this that I'll make it into time lapse videos later (hopefully >.>;).. and update.

re-use flowers fail I know >.>;

Hi Res

getting to more recent things..

This is my Character of the week 17 which is about to get face stomped in the vote thread LOL. oh well T_T;
The theme was 'samurai'

you already know where this links to

At 2/4/09 12:16 AM, Captain-Ben wrote: why are her breasts so shiny?!

That's that baby oil action!

no but seriously that's what I was working on..

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next is another old pic I was messing with, still working on shiny here.

probably will come back and redo the hair eventually, not really feelin it..

I realize the gravity issue here, it's a modded version of an older pic.

BIG

Hmmm.. IT'S ABOUT THAT TIME :S

for an update

I've been playing around with old pics. This was a ChoW I did. Some of you may remember, if not it's in my post history somewhere.

been trying to work on my shiny skin thing yeah..
C&C on everything I post.. I'm not going to feel like cutting and pasting >.>;

still didn't bother with the hand.

mo bigga pitcha

your welcome :)

some suggestions.

I just realized i screwed up the shadow on the arm T_T;

SAMURAI

Hi Res

October 6, 2003

I have better drawn ones around that time, but I choose a crappy one. (for the lulz?)

I went for something lighter

might as well post another red chick,
because that's what's hot on the streets.

Good job guys

isn't it obvious?..

zomg chow woo.. *grins*

Nene likes to hang out with Santa during the holidays.

big jpg