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If you are interested in getting into drawing, work on your basic proportions, and perspective. If you compare this guy to a normal human, you will notice he has midget arms, tiny lower legs, and is holding what appears to be a giant vibrator. I would also suggest darkening your lines, unless you want a more realistic feel, in which case work on developing your forms.

The mere fact that you had to describe your picture to explain what the content even was is a very good sign that it's crap, bro. But try working on your basic perspective, shape, and forms. Also, bump yourself up a level and at least work on copy paper instead of lined.

NEVER! I LOVE HER!

I can draw everything besides feet.

This is my OC, Bakka Bakka Anime Desu Chan. She is my OC. Plz dnt stl. She is my Waifu and OC and I love her. Don't steal. I am totally serious.

Do I win the prize now?

My character is Generic Slime Monster 14. He dreams of one day becoming the super bad guy. He enjoys being slaughtered by noobs and eating pickles. His super power is dying.

Soooooooooooooo, do I win now or something? What did I win?

Well man, it's nice. But I think the entire thing could use a bit of work.

The anatomy beyond the hands is off, and the lines are wobbly. If I could make a suggestion, try drawing with reference. Trust me on this, it isn't cheating or anything. Eventually you will be able to slowly stop using references, and soon be able to just freehand it. It's just part of a learning process. You'll soon realize that hands aren't just five lumps in a row, and have unique and complex structures.

Also, your shading could use a little bit of a push as well. Shadows don't just outline shapes, but rather define them, and creates the illusion of a third dimension. I've attached an example to show you just a basic way of shading. The first picture is similar to what you have done, and for the most part should be avoided. The second just shows you sort of how shadows should actually lie. The third uses multiple tones to further define the shape and add some more depth to it. A lot of artists shade in different ways, so its worth looking around and finding a style you like.

Sorry about the examples crappiness as well. Only had a trackpad to work with. Anyways, I hoped I helped. Just keep practicing man.

I can give it a shot if you'd like. I'll just link you to my gallery. If you like it, let me know.

Here's my gallery!

Just pm me if you're interested.

hejy gusy u gusys r so dummmmmmm

ok so liek basikly u r al makkenign herro chiricters and liek not evry1 is herro so liek maek sum villsina becuase it addz balincs witch iis gud and niec and stuff XD

so liek i maed a chicirter named socks who is a ninja goat master who trained socnic the hedgoephoig and u can haev him trian ur chirciter toos if u gets my permisions ok

so her r his states
majik: (IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII) MAXIMOM
intelighents: (IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII) DUBBLE MAXIMOM
Sternth: (IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII......) ALMOST MAXIMOM
dextarity: (IIIIIIIIIII...............) HE IS OLD SO FAR FROM MAXIMOPM
speshall: (IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII I) REEALLLY MAXIMOM
speshall attk: spinning hyjutsin whirlwing double spin ball kick
cooking: (IIIIIIIII..................) NOT EVN CLOSE TO MAXIMOM
firemaking: (IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII ) ABOVE MAXIMOM

Yes, sure. I'm working on a draft of the characters now. I'll message you on Skype in a bit.

If I may, might I suggest giving the public a general idea of the art style that you are aiming for? I mean comparing music to artwork is fairly hard, since it is not a visual. Just an example of a style of artwork.

Also, just for the sake of it, what type of game is this? I know an RPG. But is it a top down, side scroller, etc. It will help the artist know what they are getting into.

Perhaps if you clarify, I might be willing to draft something for you.

Hmm, you are paying? I have included a sample of my work. Of your character that is. Just something I whipped off in a few minutes. I'm in a bit of a rush, so I didn't take too much time.

Anyways, if you want to see more of my art, you can find it here

Just drop me a PM if you are interested.

Here. I did this for fun.