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At 5/13/14 12:41 AM, SCTE3 wrote: Try to review stuff that has recently passed judgment in the classic portal. I'm sure a lot of those people would appreciate reviews letting them know what they could be doing better. Off to a good start with your reviews. Things I would suggest to do though is paragraphs (new paragraph every 5-6 sentences), have a paragraph of what was good and another of what was bad, check some of my flash game reviews if you want examples of how to improve your reviews.

Thank you for trying to help me it means alot to me and im trying to get up there in the Newgrounds world and its not easy alone thank you for helping me. With love -TheManOnTheGrounds

At 5/12/14 11:40 PM, tox wrote:

At 5/12/14 11:35 PM, Clamstuffer wrote:

At 5/12/14 11:21 PM, TheManOnTheGrounds wrote: what games are horrible and what games are great

If only there was some kind of rating system...

That was controlled by viewers... And conveniently made into a stars idea

Sorry that im a little noobish to this website i just wanna post my thoughts about the game and how its bad and good and tell the developer of the game what he can dp better with it if i act like i noob im deeply sorry please forgive me i will be on my way that i will learn more about Newgrounds and learn how im doing thisngs wrong and right thhank you for the feedback and im just learning. With Love -TheManOnTheGrounds

Hey there everyone im theManOnTheGrounds and im starting to go into the world of Newgrounds and help people what games are horrible and what games are great but i need your help with thati dont know what games i should review so i need you to reply to this post and tell me what games i should review thats it and by doing that your helping me take a big leap into the world of reviewing anyway guys thats it tell me what i should judge on and ill get to it thank you people of the Newgrounds community. With love -TheManOnTheGrounds

At 5/12/14 05:10 PM, whiz85 wrote:

At 5/12/14 01:51 PM, Radaketor wrote: You need to work on your grammar.

I second that. It would sound interesting, if I knew what exactly you're talking about.

im sorry that im not the best at grammar but im just starting to get into writing i hope you understand that im not the best if you understand but thats why i need some help if any of you can i will be in your honor so please help me thank you. -TheManOnTheGrounds

I wanna make a story out of this idea There are 3 tribes of loyalty and order and 3 of chaos and misery the tribes are at a war that will never stop until 6 hero's need to find eachother to make a tribe of balance where the tribes can live at peace while the 2 tribes are at war they try to stop them for they cannot see why it is needed for the hero's to go out on this world alone thats my idea if you think you can help me please comment and ill get back to it on you. With Love -TheManOnTheGrounds

Hello everyone im the ManOnTheGrounds with my first post i just need all of you guys to help me out with the site what will help me here is there an unwritten rule etc etc andway guys i love this site and ive only been playing for a few days so if you can help on my adventures then please contact me thank you people of NewGrounds. With Love -TheManOnTheGrounds