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That's a nice pic there. Could use more darker emphasis on certain areas to stand out, but it's on paper with pencil, so doesn't really matter. A bizarre type of style emanates from this one, it does!

Only thing I can suggest is you put more emphasis on softer edges on things, however thats just me. The real thing is that its YOUR style and YOUR choice. Scores can mess up if the first person who voted gave it a really low score. Than the averaging messes it all up. As someone else said before me, It's the reviews that matter, they're the people who actually took the time to observe your art more and comment on it.

Just keep working on art, despite other peoples opinions even then. Atleast several hundred people in the world will love your art, they just haven't found you yet :P