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Run towards the buildings waving your sword around and yelling like a lunatic WITHOUT pants

Don't worry. Only finished work will count. You have to link a .png for the submission anyway. J-qb an Renae have to accept them in anyway.

As far as WIP spamming. I don't think anyone cares too much. Rule of thumb only post a WIP if you genuinely want feedback, not just praise.

ok thanks.
and i try as hard as i can not to appear like im fishing for praise.

Will you count a posted WIP as one of our 3 submissions. even if we make it apparent that we just want feedback to assure us that we are not moving in the wrong direction.

I hope this will be okay. as long as we dont treat this as our personal art forum and continue to spam our WIP. maybe a limit? like 1 WIP post per piece. so a maximum of 3 per artist.
Thanks

thank you guys so much for reviewing my work.
I have taken what you guys said into consideration with other poems i wrote.

haha
dude im digging the first one (not the one with your face slammed up)
even though that was pretty funny.

At 5/3/10 09:33 PM, RoastySmith wrote: How's this?

Here's the dump link.

i thought the rules were: no black(s)
jk
but seriously i thought we couldn't use black

your style would defeintely make for some good animation.

the composition is excellent.
the colors are also very nice.

new stuff.
marine form Star Craft 2... or 1 doesn't really matter.
quality not so good, done on binder paper, and the paper started to crease because there was so much. :P
ah well

reviews comments
-Joe

**Better version here**

blah
i figured as much.
thanks for your help.

ill try new stuff.

been awhile.

i need help with this character im making for a flash movie.
i feel like it's almost too complicated to be the main character.
if you could tell me what you think that would be extremely helpful.

cool

i like the kite head and the organs especially.

you could add more shading. so far his skin is basically one color so it looks flat. Either add shadows to his skin or marks on the skin that conform to the curve of his arms, torso, etc.

hmmm...
there poses seem about stiff.
also seeing them in more positions would be helpful.
unfortunately character design is something were you cant just draw one picture and cut your losses in hopes of saving time.
dont be afraid to invest time into this design and explore it.
you are also likely to get more valuable feedback this way too : )

anyway
i like the like quality.
it's not sloopy.
the pose is stiff
the arms are long (this could be the style) -this is where having multiple sketches would help me determine what is unintentional and intentional.

is that action script?

I was wondering how you make separate scenes in one movie.
so the viewer can right click and press next/fast forward and it will skip a scene.

thanks
-Joe

haha!
i love it dude.
major talent
excellent sense of humor.
Relate-able in every way.

it is only possible to get one piece in the collab right?
and if 2 are resonable enough to put in the collab can the artist say which one he/she would rather be used?

all of this confusion is making me worried.
Im doing mine in oil paint.
ALL im doing is picking one color, sticking with it, and adding white.
NO black
NO other colors.

the quality is crap because it is a photo. And this is just the background.
but as far as the colors go...
is this correct?

At 4/24/10 02:20 AM, Spac3case916 wrote: bonehead question
is this still going on?

yes : ))
had to ask
im in

bonehead question
is this still going on?

it kind of is :P

could it be abstract?
as long as it's good and not just scribbles?

At 4/14/10 11:41 PM, ornery wrote: boring ass frickin cell phones

the composition is nice atleast :P

this is an animation using some of my doodles as animation.
inspired by "Drawn Dream" by JewelToons
you should take a look at my animation or his.
-Joe

the lines are really sloopy, the hands need work, and the lighting effect isn't very good.

you should use references, study big daddy and maybe even study lighiting

i like them.
i dont exactly find it surreal.
except for maybe the tree one. but it's so sketchy it's hard to get an understanding of the mood.

At 1/26/10 10:23 PM, HOLIMOUNT wrote: im new in this and i just wanted to say that i got some artwork if you want to check it out

this is good.
the hand looks a litle awkward, but whatever.
nice.

these are really cool
you inspired me to make my own
awesome work

At 4/14/10 10:56 PM, JorNcar wrote: the tribal man

it's alright
it seems like the torso is very well done/defined/confindent and the rest of the picture is lacking.
his hands for example.
which makes me think that you used a reference for the torso (there is nothing wrong with that)
but try to match all apsects of the drawing to the quality of the torso.

At 3/30/10 11:37 PM, MPoulter wrote: Whoa don't overwhelm me with feedback all in one go! I kid, of course.
Anyway, here's anew picture I'm working on. I'm still considering it a work in progress because I'm not sure if I'm satisfied with it yet. If anyone has any suggestions I'd appreciate it. It's called Food Chain

i love the food chain alot.
this could end up being a really cool loop for a flash.