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You really do need to stop making a new thread every time you draw a new piece. Other than that it does look rather nice, could use a little more detail.

Fingers always look better than circles.

Here is a Picture of The Guyver that I did for Intro to Drawing at college last simester.

I like the contrasts of this piece. It is well balanced but could use a few more different shades of gray. And you really need to post your artwork on one single thread and not make multiple topics for the same thing.

You should have just put this in your other critique my abandoned city thread.

I like this one better than the first.

At 4/13/08 11:30 PM, Luis wrote: finally got around to makin somethin... i think i prefer the train. this was fun... imma make some more

You know if the Robo Bloods see this train there is gonna be a war pop off!

Man thats a lot of detail, crappy scan or photo quality though. How big is the piece?

There are several. try programs like gimp, coral painter, photoshop. you can get 30 free trials on most products and some come with unlimited access, but have limited abilities. just google free digital photo or paint programs.

why is the anime one so much smaller than the rest of them? I like the portraits they are very nice.

because there is no tone or color to this piece it is hard to tell that this is an abondoned city. If you hadn't posted the title as such im sure most of the posts would have been "it's nice... but what is it?" without definition it looks like a lot of scribble on a page. darken some areas, define building outlines, add tone, some color, something to make it look more like a picture.

Mine is just a simple picasso. its under the name seraph.

I think if you just added a little tone to this it would do wonders. hard to see the city through all the lines, if you get what i mean.

I like this. while it is nice the outline overlaps make it a little hard to see the images until you look at it for a while. the other pieces on DA are good as well.

I like it, but when doing pointillism, when you add color the color should be done the same way.
i.e. the lips instead of coloring them red with black pointillism you should have made the points red with a like black highlight. as far as the no solid colors thing, i think that is wrong. it's a matter or personal perspective. different texture values make the piece stand out, if it had all been point then it may have been serious overload.

I clicked the link just because i wanted to here the song again.

Here is my name. It a crop out of a photo of a larger piece i did for graphic design.

Rules?

I think you should call that last one the screaming yeti lamb goat thing.

Those are all pretty sweet. You have a great style, and i love the marker work too.

The mouth makes it look like he's pouting. "What happen to my career? WAAAAAAAAA!!!"

Why did you make a new thread for the same art that you could have put in your other one?

That is a pretty decent application to have fun with. I think whoever designed it should have at least made the options to change the canvas you could paint on. And i would somewhat have to agree with mindchamber, if you had done that on an actual canvas that would have been amazing. I did a quick 5 minute one, its in the gallery.

I like all the drawings. I liked the Optimus Prime better as a black and white.

It is a good start. work on it a little more and try to finish it.

Awesome. I like that it is very clean.

That is very nice. Looking forward to seeing more.

yeah your friend has some pretty snazzy art. i liked Ghostriders in the Sky and High Noon the best.

Man I'm really digging you stuff. I'd like to see some more large scale battle pieces. Your detail work is excellent.

the drawings are pretty good. you should darken them a little.