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Yay, thanks for the advise! I'll look forward to improve myself that way

It's just a title I gave to it.
It could have been something else, but since this one was my first thought, I decided to keep it.
And if you can't construct a useful and positive review about the style, lines, details to excel, you shouldn't post at all.

The monochrome blue art and the first picture posted are my favorites so far!

It's like o_O you grasp someone's face and magically put it on a piece of paper.
No advises that I can remember to give you, only that you did a good+ job!

Hmm yes I was trying to put all the images in one post, but I guess I couldn't.
For the final product, the part that came out best, in my opinion, was the wrist and the arm part, not the hand itself

The first sketch was something like this:

It's nice of you to post and defend your own style.
And yours is particularly funny, as it is very "cartoonised"
Like me, you don't use much colour, or at least on all the images you posted.
You could give even more life to your character by creating a story for it.

Last day I was on a critical boredom level, so I decided to burn out some time by doing what I didn't do for a long time: drawing stuffz.

I stared at the Paint icon, and it gazed back. "Oh yea? Well I'm going to click you!"
Every image below was made on Paint.

http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/3212487_st op_right_there.jpg

It was mostly a sketch at the beggining (as it should)

Anyhow, I started clearing some now unnecessary lines and made a self-perspective in which the hand is seen through a window or other glass-type surface. (with a weird track on the fingers)
http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/3212488_st op_right_there2.jpg

I gave up the track idea >.>
http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/3212491_st op_right_there3.jpg

At the end I made my signature, yay^^
http://tempupload.ngfiles.com/3212493_st op_right_there4_Razraal_.jpg

Well, please do feel free to criticize, leave some tips or advises, etc.
Thank you for your time!

I was on the Flash Portal, giving score the files under judgement, when I came across this:
The Clones
I thought to myself, "This will most likely be blammed". It somehow passed.
After that one I ran on this:
Hotdog Adventures
And again I thought it wasn't strong enough to pass... But somehow I was wrong again, and I don't know how.
Ironically, after that submission, I checked this one:
Dad Party
and this:
Nic Parties Again

Similar? RIGHT!

Now please, I don't give a f*** if I'm trespassing rules by making a topic about this, but I couldn't just stand and do nothing while sh** like this gets through the judgement.
And honestly it's not just this "spam" example, I scored 0 a few submissions that were worse (yes, worse) and somehow they passed too.
What's your opinion? Is NG better with crap like this filling it?

PS: After those submissions, two more showed up with the same song and similar animation.

At 1/18/11 12:06 PM, TheDragonBoy wrote: Here. Hope this is okay.

You should work on the tail, it seems everything except one.
Keep working

is it scanned? or did you fotograph it? if you did, then the image might be a little twisted, and it justifies the proportions.

If not, consider doing a smaller head, although the body seems fine

The forearm with the hand pointing to the face is perhaps too long.
And maybe her feet are too big for a woman.

I prefer the first shirt, don't like much the one with the bear on it.

Nice draw. I love it when my hand draws get well