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Topic: Coder Wanted for Epic Shooter

Posted: 02/18/08 11:13 PM

Forum: Flash

Seems you are having trouble getting this noticed. Don't think I know anyone that could help.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 01/30/04 08:58 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Hello people.
I'm on "vacations" and posting from a public PC.
I'm happy knowing that the thread is alive again :).
I only have one question. Aren't we supposed to do something for the crew because we are a "club", I mean, together?(This is if I'm still part of the group :( ¬¬)
We could make a story, and have some people animate it, there are animators in here, aren't there?(2nd or 3rd time I say this :P)

PS.- Alkador, your sig pic is ready, but I'll post it when I go back to my PC, I don't have it on the one I'm using. And, does anybody wants one? Not necesaryly of Perfect Dark, can be other styles to, just ask for it :).


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 01/15/04 11:56 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Hey, Alkador, I was bored and I saw your Sig with the Perfect Dark thing. Want me to make one reading "Alkador"? I make them allright, I think. And if anyone could like one, post it here, I'll try my best :D.

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Here's an example of Perfect Dark Letter, of course it would be more "dark".

writing club


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 01/11/04 11:37 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Hey guys, page 4 again?
I think that everyone forgot about this. Still i will come here every now and then if I can.
Here is my part for today.

"I want to get away,
to stop to dream I live,
to live in dreams........."

Very short, eh.


5.

Questioning

Topic: writing club

Posted: 01/07/04 12:34 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Well, I think that it means (fanfic) to make a story, for example, about characters of a movie you like a lot (that you're a fan of it). You can make a story using the original characters of the movie you like.
That is what I think is a fanfic.


6.

Questioning

Topic: writing club

Posted: 01/01/04 11:39 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Hey people. We are on page 3!
Now, i wanted to ask everyone. Do you give me permission to make a flash movie of the club?


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None

Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/29/03 12:52 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Nadia hid her face on her hands, Draven waited to evade, Blade stood preparing to counter the light, but the light never touched them. Dippet had appeared in front of them and conjured with his staff a light shield around them.
“Run!” he shouted “You’re the only hope! Princess, do you know where the temple of the earth stands?”
“Yes.” Nadia answered.
“Go there, you’ll find something that will help you all understand what’s happening, but be careful, after the seal of this reign was broken, monsters lurk the lands!” Dippet said.
“Are you going to be alright?” Blade asked Dippet.
“I’m going to be fine,” he answered “Go on now!”
“Yes.”
They followed Nadia until they reached the coast. They didn’t encountered any monsters on the track.
“There!” Nadia pointed at a building that was standing on a small island not to far from the coast.
“How do we get there?” Draven said.
“With these.” Blade said pointing some boats on the shore.
They started their way to the island but at the middle of the trip something happened. The boat started to shake and then to strange creatures emerged from the water.
They were mermen.

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This is all Chapter 3 of Soul Quest. Sorry for the time I didn't came here, but when I last came I didn't found this at first page. Now, the question is, where's everyone? Everyone went for holiday? If that is it, does anyone knows when everyone will be back? Only two new posts I found since my last visit. So, that's all.
Now have a very good past Xmas and a very happy New Year 2004,(if it comes XD).


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/29/03 12:42 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

A few seconds later something weirder happened, on their backs an explosion had started, but no simple explosion, it was a catastrophic explosion.
“Run!!!” Blade said taking Nadia by the arm and forcing Draven to let go of Daniel. They dashed so hard that their feet started to hurt; it was until they reached a palm tree when the explosion seemed to have reached a limit. Blade suddenly turned around and stopped dead on the spot.
“Mom!!” he shouted and started to run to the energy shield that the explosion had left. Nadia grabbed him from the arm and said.
“Blade! There’s nothing you can do now, maybe if you go there the energy will hurt you!”
“But...”
“There’s nothing we can do,” Draven said “We can only wait for the smoke to disperse.”
They waited a while. Then finally the smoke disappeared, leaving only chaos and ashes behind. Blade started running to where Galia used to be. Nadia and Draven followed him.
“Does this can possibly be happening?” Draven said when they reached the slums of the magnificent castle that used to stand there.
They reached the central part of Galia. The explosion didn’t finished completely the buildings from that part. They could see many walls of places Blade knew to well. There was the house of Mr. Brownie, the town’s best baker. Blade remembered one very especial cake. Chocolate with vanilla filling, he made it for him when he was 7. Now he could see the body of the man that had made it. It was now lying dead on the floor, with almost no flesh on the skeleton. There was the flower shop, and Miss Florinda dead on the floor. Blade stopped searching for dead bodies, he didn’t wanted to continue remembering all the things they did for him. He walked through where the casino was. They reached the market zone finding the store where they were going to be killed by a shot gun, completely destroyed.
“What the hell happened here?!” Draven said.
“This is a catastrophe!” Nadia said.
“My mom...” Blade said.
“Sorry for that, but it was impossible to survive that explosion...” Nadia said.
“Yes my friends, it was impossible to survive.”
“Who said that!” Blade had stopped crying and stood up quickly taking his sword out.
“Don’t worry, I’m a friend.” the voice said and a little man with a long beard and carrying a staff appeared from behind a stone “It was impossible and yet you escaped death twice already.”
“Who are you?” Draven said.
“My name is Dippetilokuf Pirlen, member of the group of the wizards told to guard this world.”
“What?” Draven asked.
“Call me Dippet.” Dippet said spotting that his introduction didn’t amazed them.
“Well Dippet, you also survived to the explosion.” Blade said.
“No, I’d arrived right now.” he said.
“Good of you to arrive, Dippet.”
“I know that voice.” Nadia said.
“It’s Lucius!” Blade said and Lucius appeared in midair.
“Thanks for making the things easier for me, now I don’t have to go and look for you.” Lucius said.
“You’ll never complete what you’re after Lucius!” Dippet said.
Lucius turned around and saw Blade. A wicked expression formed on Lucius face, between horror and madness.
“So,” he said to Dippet “this is one of those you’ve been searching for? He is supposed to be dead.”
“You’ll never kill them!” Dippet said.
“I’ll do.” Lucius said with a diabolic smile on his face “TAO!”
The same purple light of before flashed from Lucius hand.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/29/03 12:38 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

“Oh not again...” Draven said.
“Run!” Blade said “Stay here!” he said to the princess “You’re safe now!”
“Forget it!” Nadia answered “I’m going with you!”
“You’re persistent, don’t you?!” Draven said as he started to a stairway to the right.
“This takes to the south tower!” Nadia said.
“And what?!” Draven asked.
“We can climb down to the bridge on the back”
“A bridge?” Blade asked.
“Yes, it crosses the lake on the garden wing.” Nadia answered.
“Lake?” Draven said stopping in shock, then he started running again.
It was true, at the end of the stairway they found an edge where vines were growing; it was easy to climb down. Next moment they were running through the bridge.
“Where does this take us to?” Blade asked.
“It takes to...” but Nadia was interrupted by a voice.
“Freeze where you are!” he shouted. It was a soldier accompanied by other two. “You’re not taking the princess out of the boundaries; I’ll take her to the king, right away!”
“I don’t want to return!” Nadia shouted.
“Maybe you’ve convinced the princess like that, but you’ll have no chance against us, we’re the members of the elite force of Galia.” the soldier said and he launched with his sword against Draven while the others at Blade.
“We can’t stay like this after what that bum said us!” Draven said “Let’s fight!”
“Yes.” Blade answered taking his sword out.
The soldiers started attacking with simple slashes. Draven evaded easily the attacks. Blade didn’t had problems countering the attacks. Finally Blade ended finishing off the soldiers, he went to help Draven but the soldier slashed him away.
“Don’t get in what doesn’t matters you.” he said.
“Yes Blade, this is my fight.” Draven said.
“What?” Blade asked.
“It’s a long story...” Draven said.
“It all started when we were friends...” the soldier said.
“You were friends?” Blade said.
“Yes, and we thought we were best friends, until one day, on summer, we found the first thing we will fight for.” Draven said.
“Yes, it’s true, but that fight wouldn’t had happened if you didn’t waste time trying to win her, you knew she will be mine, but you were hard to convince.” the soldier said.
“What are you talking about??” Nadia asked.
“Jasmine wouldn’t like anyone like you!” Draven shouted “Why did you started that, she will now live happily!”
“It wasn’t my fault and you know it! Don’t be that cowardly! You know she loved strong guys!” the soldier replied.
“It was your fault bastard! If you wouldn’t be using that weapon instead of your own hands she will had not found that terrible fate!”
Meanwhile the conversation took place Nadia and Blade stood asking themselves what was going on, what they were talking about?
“Yes but if that bitch wouldn’t had interfered, she will not have died!”
“No one calls her a bitch!” Draven shouted.
“I’m not no one, I’m Daniel!” he said.
Draven, full with anger launched a fist against Daniel and punched him dry on the face. Daniel fell to the floor, the punch was to strong. Draven started another attack but something really strange started to happen, the floor started to shake so strong it seemed a much empowered earthquake.
“An earthquake!” Nadia said.
“It isn’t, this is stronger.” Blade said.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/29/03 12:35 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Here is Chapter 3 of Soul Quest.
hapter3
The explosion.
Bang! Bang! Bang!
“We barely made it.” Blade said.
“He was using a shotgun!” Draven said “He is mad, I tell you, that thing can blow up your head immediately!”
They started moving when they spotted that some soldiers were patrolling the streets.
“Damn. We can’t go through there.” Draven said.
“The only option left is to hide in the Market square.” Blade said.
“Then let’s go.” Nadia said eagerly throwing her crown away “Move!!!”
She pulled Blade to the entrance of the square. Nadia seemed to enjoy her surroundings. There were more stores than those you could count, as though many people. It was very hard to get through the bunch of people surrounding them. There was a casino, a weapon shop, the potion shop, where they were, and many more buildings Nadia had ever seen.
“This is such fun.” Nadia said happily.
“Fun? Princess do you notice we are escaping from the soldiers of your father?” Draven said out of his mind.
“Yes I do, and please don’t call me princess, call me Nadia, just for a change.”
“If you say so, your majesty.”
“Now where do we go” Draven said “The streets are so over populated by soldiers!”
“What if we go to my house?” Blade said “It’s near.”
“Let’s go!” Nadia said.
They started walking to Blade’s house. Sometimes they had to hide of some soldiers that were near them. When they finally arrived Blade got a very bad news.
“Mom is gone!” he said “Bet she went with Rose.”
“Don’t you have a hidden key or something?” Draven asked.
“You’re right!” Blade said and went to look under a flower pot on the window.
“She took it! What do we do now?”
“Sorry Nadia, but we’ll have to escort you to the castle; we can’t afford anything bad that could happen to you.” Draven said.
“I’M NOT GOING BACK!” Nadia shouted so hard it hurt Blade’s and Draven’s ears.
“Just tell us why?” Draven asked.
“You don’t know how hard it is to live in the castle with my mom...”
“What’s wrong with her?” Blade asked.
“It’s always the same story,” she said angrily “Nadia your piano lesson, Nadia time for tea, Nadia the committee wants us to go, and many other boring things a princess is supposed to do...”
“Ahhh, and what, is it that bad?” Draven said.
“Yes”
“She wants it for your own good.” Blade said, “You better go, they’re worried for you”
“Do you think so?” Nadia asked.
“Crazy or what?” Draven said exasperatedly, “Don’t see those cops over there, searching for you, and don’t you remember what problems we got when they found us with you?”
“Well...” Nadia said.
They walked to the castle. They didn’t encounter any soldiers from that point. When they arrived at the castle the doors were open, they entered with no problem, and outside the sun had started setting at the horizon. They didn’t had any problems until they reached the main stairway. A soldier jumped on them.
“Freeze there!” he said “You were caught in the act!”


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/22/03 12:08 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

“Where are we?”
Nadia jumped backwards with surprise, Draven immediately started clearing his face of the tears that had started in his eyes.
“You’re alive?!” Nadia said surprised.
“You weren’t playing did you?” Draven said now with a menacing lo
ok in his face. “Cause if you were playing, you’ll be wishing to be dead.” he finished
“No I wasn’t, well it’s hard to explain, I wasn’t alive, but yet, not dead.” Blade said “Yet there I was, floating in mid air. There was a voice, it was telling me ‘You should start your Soul Quest, go now and find those chosen...’ and he mentioned something about some guys that were supposed to be the chosen to defeat evil, kind of weird if you ask.”
Draven stood there bemused of what Blade had said, Nadia stood up and cleaned her eyes and slapped Blade.
“Never do something like that again!” she said angry. “Any way, how is it possible that you survived that power that Lucius used upon you?” she said “It is known as one of the most powerful black conjures of the past; it should had removed your soul and destroyed it.”
“Well it didn’t, so we don’t have to worry any more.” Blade said still rubbing his face.
“Is someone in there?” said a voice coming from behind the wall.
“We forgot, where the hell are we?” Draven asked.
“I think were in the back of a store.” Blade answered.
“If you don’t show yourselves, I’ll enter the room shooting without mercy!” the man said.
“He has a gun!” Nadia said scared “What do we do!”
“This way, follow me” said Blade.
“Where are we going?” Draven said.
“This is the potion shop of the market square.” he answered “I worked a while in this store years ago, there’s a door near, it will take us to the park square.”
“Stop talking, the man is counting from three to zero!” Nadia said.
“We’re almost there.” Blade said.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/22/03 12:04 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

He grabbed his sword, getting ready for attack, but it was almost late, it seemed that Lucius had finished summoning the power and getting ready to launch it. In a moment of stupidity, Blade dashed against Lucius and stood in the middle of Nadia and Lucius.
“What the hell?!” Lucius had launched the attack and it blasted completely on Blade.
“No!!!” Nadia shouted.
“Is your will of her living that strong?” Lucius said.
The blinding purple flash had ended. Blade fell on his knees on the floor. Blade was dead.
“Well, you sacrificed in vain, she is going to die anyway.” he walked to where Draven laid unconscious, he lifted Draven and threw him next to Blade.
“Why?” Nadia said “Why did you do that?” tears were coming out of Nadia’s eyes.
“How cute, but let’s finish this quickly. I don’t want to hear rubbish of love, friendship, or nothing.”
“NAKX KXO FENOH A XULO…” Lucius started to summon again.
“Why did you did that!!!!” Nadia shouted and a white light surrounded her. “Why did you sacrificed for me!!!”
“What the hell is this?” Lucius said “Is it a very powerful holy magic?!”
The blinding light around Nadia was now strong enough to leave a person blind.
“WHY!!!” Nadia shouted now bending on Blade
When the white light faded Nadia found herself in another place, not in the dungeons. It didn’t seem to have any importance. Draven started to recover consciousness. He opened his eyes and then jumped up with a start.
“Where are we, what happened, where’s Lucius” he asked, but Nadia didn’t paid attention. “Blade where is...” Draven started but stopped abruptly spotting Blade on the floor cold as ice, completely dead.
“What the hell did he did?!” he asked to Nadia.
“He sacrificed trying to save m...” but she didn’t finished because she drowned into more sobs.
“Why did you did that Bastard, why” Draven said punching the wall next to him making it shake.

Blade wake up, it’s not time yet, your world needs you, the souls need you...
“Who are you, where am I?”
You are in the middle of life and death, but your place is not here, not now...
“Am I dead?!”
No you are not, you have to return now to the living world...
“That the world needs me? What..?”
The world needs the protection of those five who will defeat evil, because, he had risen again...
“Those five, what do you mean?”
You’ll understand everything at its time, don’t worry. You will have to start a quest.
“A quest?”
You will have to travel and reunite the chosen and then confront one of the greatest battles of all history, you should start your Soul Quest. Go now and find the chosen before it’s to late...


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/22/03 12:00 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

“The golem, where is it?!” she said “Who are you?” spotting Blade.
“We saved your life and you don’t even recognize us?” Draven said.
“You’re the ones up at the castle hiding from the soldiers!” the princess said hugging Draven very hard. “You saved my life!” she said now hugging Blade. “How did you find your way in here?” she finally asked.
“Well, it’s kind of weird.” Blade started when something behind them started saying.
“Well, well, well.” said a cold high voice. “So that golem didn’t finished with you princess?”
“Who are you? Show yourself!” Blade shouted furiously.
“Insolent boy, you and your friend are lucky of surviving that golem.”
“We said you to show up!” Draven shouted and the next moment a man tall and thin, with long white hair, wearing wide pants came out of thin air.
“Who are you?” the princess said.
“That isn’t of importance to you, but if you want to know, I’m the master of the creatures that live within the veil of darkness, father of desperation, slayer of holy creatures, I’m Lucius.”
“Good intro, now, what the hell do you want man?!” Draven said.
“I’m here to murder princess Nadia...” Lucius answered.
“If you want to murder her, you’ll have to murder us to!” Blade said. Draven gave an expression of “What the hell?”
“If you want to, it’s okay.” Lucius said and Blade took his sword out and launched against Lucius.
“NAKX KXO FENOH EV TUHBDOJJ A JIMMED TOUKX!” Lucius murmured and a stream of light sprouted from his hand and smashed on Blade. Blade was thrown about twenty feet in the air and crashed into the wall.
“Bastard” Draven launched himself against Lucius.
“TAO!” and Draven was smashed to the floor. “Now it’s your turn dear princess.”
The princess stood there completely frozen. She turned to run, but she fell flat on the floor.
“You’re persistent. I don’t know why I sent that golem instead of coming myself.” he said getting near the princess, which was fighting to stand up.
“Don’t worry I’ll kill you fast and painless.” Lucius said then throwing a victorious laugh.
“Get away from her!” Blade said still lying on the floor.
“You’re still alive?! You’re more resistant than I thought.” Lucius said with sarcasm. “You’ll have the honor to see your dear princess die.” He laughed
Blade didn’t knew what to do. He laid there badly injured. He could barely breath, the pain in his chest was bigger than any pain he could had felt before. While he laid there thinking, Lucius raised his hand and started summoning a power again.
“NAKX KXO FENOH A XULO...”
Blade saw how the princess laid on the floor with an expression of deep fear, like if she was shouting, but no sound came out of her mouth, and then he turned to Lucius who was standing with a smile of supreme victory in his face and with power charging in his hand ready to blow the princess into nothing, when it hit him. This scene was very familiar; maybe he saw it on a fairy tales of evil guys and magic things. Then he remembered, this scene was the same of the one in his dream, the dream where he saw that man killing that poor girl, he then realized that the man of his dream was Lucius, and the poor girl the princess. Blade remembered the many nights that nightmare made him to wake up and have insomnia. He didn’t wanted to see it again now in real. Some how he gained enough strength to get up.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/21/03 11:52 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

That was good Mina, but it is hard to understand (I think, don't laugh). Well, now, anybody said nothing bad about my story (in fact, none gave an opinion, except james) here is chapter 2 of Soul Quest.
Chapter 2:
The Nightmare.

They were now on a dungeon. Some torches were lit on the walls. There were cells in some places; some of them still had their bars. Blade and Draven walked around them.
“Seems someone thought that this dungeon was going to keep secret.” Draven said moving a skull out of the way. There was a long pause that became total silence, but the silence was abruptly broken by a shrilling sound. A scream.
“A girl is down here?” Draven said.
“Yes,” Blade said while he dashed forward. “And she is in danger.”
“What the fuck are you doing?” Draven said running behind Blade “there’s no time to act like a hero.” there was another scream when they reached a fork path.
“It comes from over there” Blade said pointing to the left path and running through it.
When they completed the path Blade saw a thing that he had only heard from in fairy tales. A two meter high golem was standing in front of them and seemed to have no interest in them turning up; he seemed to be concentrated on something lying on the floor. Blade immediately recognized her as the princess. He launched against the golem before thinking of it.
“Wait man! You don’t even have a weapon to use!” Draven shouted at him.
“Oh yes I have.” And Blade retrieved a broad sword from his coat. There was a hard tug; he had slashed the golem with enough force to catch its attention.
“Come on, try and hit me.” Blade said.
“I’m going to help.” Draven was standing next to him.
“But what can you do?”
“Fists,” he answered “I remember their belly is weak.” And he launched a punch at the golem’s belly. It worked, the golem backed up.
“Good one.” Blade said and slashed the golem in the belly to. It was true, Blade was able to slay the golem. The golem gave a long howl and ragged against Blade. He evaded it and waited to the golem to stand up for giving him a finishing blow. It was effective; the golem gave a loud growl and fell to his knees, beaten at last. Blade ran to the princess. She had fainted.
“Better take her up to the castle.” Draven said.
“Yes, I think so.” Blade said picking the princess up. They turned to the direction where they had come up when they heard a loud crack. The golem had collapsed completely and made the earth tremble with such force the rocks fell from the ceiling closing the path to the stairs that took to the castle.
“Now what.” Draven said.
“Think we’ll go the other way then. Hope there’s an exit.” Blade answered taking care of every footstep. Any sound could mean danger, they kept alert. They found that it was easier to go through there because there seemed to be no more skulls around. They walked for a while when they arrived at a clearing, with a scene more satisfactory than the one they had just passed. It was an underground garden. There were many colored flowers and there was a water fountain. In the ceiling were some minute holes that enabled sun light to pass through. The more interesting about it was that it was so beautiful that it seemed that someone was taking care of them. Blade went and laid the princess on the flowers. She was so beautiful to him; he thought that every painful thought had been removed from his mind. The princess started to wake up. Finally, she jumped forward with an expression of terror on her face.


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Questioning

Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/21/03 12:11 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Hey it's good.
Hey, do you think I should post Chapter 2 right now, or wait?
First of all, did someone liked it? Cause if not, to stop posting it.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/20/03 11:44 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Hey, Alkador, do you have any hand drawings of SoJ?


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/20/03 11:31 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Hey people at writing club, how would it be if we work together on a story? It would be great, having everyone working on it, and, is there someone that know Flash very good on this section? We could even make a movie out of the story. And I was asking, is there any Writing Club Logo?


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/20/03 11:13 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Well, that's all chapter 1 of Soul Quest.
By the way, here is the logo for the story. I drew it time ago.

writing club


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/20/03 11:06 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

“That was a cool one!” said the guy to Blade, which looked at him with the scariest eyes “Sorry for the things I said inside there” he said “I was worried. I’m Draven, what’s your name?” he asked.
“I’m Blade,” he answered “Now move, or you want to get caught?”
“Umm, no.” Draven answered.
They started running through a corridor, they didn’t know where they were going but it seemed safe until soldiers started appearing everywhere.
“There are many soldiers just when you don’t need them.” Blade said every time they needed to give a rough turn to avoid a soldier.
They walked for a short time and found that they were on a very familiar corridor.
“Blade!” Draven said. “This is the corridor that takes to the water fountains!”
“Yes, maybe we can get safely out of this castle.”
But Blade started to think about what will he do after escaping, he couldn’t go back home, Queen Fleur knew where he lived. Maybe he would have to leave Galia forever.
When they turned the corner they were suddenly thrown to the floor with a great force.
“Ouch”
“Princess?!”
It was he princess.
“Be quiet!” she said and she pulled them into shadows.
“You got to help me get out of here!” she said. “Please.”
“Oh no, you want to get us into trouble” Draven said grabbing her from one arm “We’re taking you to the King.”
“Wait!” she shouted “I don’t want to go there anymore, I’ll call the guards if you don’t let me go.”
Draven let go of her arm and the princess hurried across the corridor and disappeared almost immediately.
“She needs to improve her temper.” Draven said and he and Blade started running through the corridor. Every now and then they found more and more soldiers. At last they were forced to find a way out when they arrived at the kitchens, guards had already seen them. They found it hard to get through a gap in the kitchen wall, but they did it at time.
“Better start a diet...” Blade said to himself.
“Yes, you’re a little big don’t you think so?” Draven said hearing Blade saying that.
“Hey Draven!” Blade said seeing at the wall behind Draven “There’s a gap on the wall, we can jump over there!”
Draven turned and looked at the darkness in it.
“But it can lead to two places, one, another room full with soldiers or two, outside.” He said with a mater-o-factly sort of voice
“Better try, don’t we?” Blade said walking to the hole. It was large enough for them to fit.
“God...” Draven said and he entered the gap.
They walked for five minutes or so trying not to hit the cave’s ceiling. There was a dim light ahead. Draven and Blade started thinking that the passage was taking them to the middle of the earth. Finally they reached a stairway heading down. There was a torch perch nearby and was holding a lit torch.
“Looks like we have a lot to walk.” Draven said looking at the darkness in the stairs.
“We better take this one,” Blade said taking the torch of the perch; it seemed that some one took another one because there was another empty perch “it seems that we could make with some light down there.”
The stairs seemed to be eternal. There were more and more steps every round. They were there for almost half hour when they reached a place where the floor was soft.
“Soil.” Draven said.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/20/03 10:58 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

This is a part of chapter 1 of my story, I didn't post it last time cause of time. Well, hope you like it. Note: I made some arrangements.
Blade was dreaming he was on a not well lit dungeon. He was exploring where he was when he heard a scream, a woman scream. He started running toward where the scream had come from. He turned a corner to see that a girl was lying on the floor petrified with fear, and there a few feet from her was a man, a man Blade thought he knew from somewhere. Yes he did know him, and then the man started muttering something. Blade knew, when he saw this that the man was going to kill the girl on the floor. Blade didn’t want this to happen, he wanted to do something. Then without knowing what he was doing, he launched toward the man. There was a sudden flash of light and then Blade thought he was falling on a deep abyss. Then he heard someone calling him.
“Man wake up, man I know you’re alive!” said the voice “snap out of it!”
Then he felt like if someone had poured a big bucket of cold water on him. But he didn’t imagine it, they did showered him with cold water. He suddenly realized that he was dreaming. He was dreaming the same thing he had dreamed all the week, but this was a different scene, now he could see their faces. Not wanting to remember all of it he now thought about what had woken him up. He moved his body upwards. He opened his eyes to found that he was on a dungeon cell with one of the guys that were imprisoned.
“Good lord!” said the man “I was starting to worry.”
“Thanks.” said blade.
“Thanks?” said the man “For what, oh, you thought..., I was worried about me not you! I was starting to think, ‘I’ll live the rest of my life in a cell with a corpse.”
“Oh, really?” said Blade furiously.
“Yeah, and don’t start thinking of me like a cell friend or something like that bastard.” He added nastily.
“Who are you calling a bastard?!” said Blade jumping up “I think the bastard here is you!”
There was a knock on the cell’s door.
“Stop making noises in there or I’ll make sure you both get executed.”
“See?!” said the guy next to Blade “now you got us more problems.”
“Me?” said Blade angry as he walked to see through the window bars. He could see the garden where he was training earlier; he felt that anything more could go wrong. Then he saw something that made his head shake. He saw the princess jumping to a tree a few feet from the floor. She was escaping. He stood there, thinking of what the heck was going on when the door slammed open and two soldiers entered the cell. One of the soldiers asked.
“Well you better tell me who did you worked for!” he snapped at Blade’s cell partner.
“What the hell are you talking about?” he asked with a face of astonishment. “I don’t work for no one!”
“Don’t lie!” he reached his belt for his stick.
Blade was starting to feel anger flowing on every bit of him. He caught the stick when the soldier raised it in front of the other guy.
“It’s enough to be in this cell without doing anything.” Blade said.
“What the?” the soldier said. Blade knocked him off. The other guy that was with Blade seemed to have woken up of a shock and punched the other soldier. Blade bent over a soldier and picked up some keys.
“This will come in handy.” said Blade.
They threw the soldiers in the cell and locked them.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/18/03 01:50 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Hollow Illusions
Someone,
somewhere,
told me I shouldn't care of you,
but it wasn't true...

I've benn taked away from you,
now when you need me to be at your side,
now that I wanted to see your eyes,
remembering illusions I had
before they were emptied by time...

Now they are just there,
empty inside my soul,
these hollow illusions
would never fade away,
would never cease to hurt
and they will allways remember me of you...


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/18/03 01:43 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

The thread is dying!


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Topic: Yu-Gi-Oh Crew

Posted: 12/16/03 07:38 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Here is the sacred pack!
Try to find them on malls!

Yu-Gi-Oh Crew


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Topic: Yu-Gi-Oh Crew

Posted: 12/16/03 07:26 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

At last!
I've opened my first Dark Crisis Booster Pack Yesterday and I got just what I needed!
Woohooo!!!!
Now it is serious, who wants to douel? :D


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Topic: Yu-Gi-Oh Crew

Posted: 12/14/03 12:34 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

JGelzer,
I want to duel you on MSN!
my email is blade_ecliptickstudios@hotmail.com.
Can we?
And also, whoever wants to duel me this way tell me.
I'm ready anytime (that I'm online) and it doesn't takes anytime.
But one thing.
Never use cards that still doesn't exist, like Dark Chaos Magician, or Dark Sage, or God cards, and no, you won't fool me, I know all the cards in existance in America (though this sound arrogant, it is true, I've studied it veryclosely :P)
Tell me if you can duel.

Yu-Gi-Oh Crew


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Topic: Yu-Gi-Oh Crew

Posted: 12/14/03 12:19 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

200 cards?
Thats awful!
You should better try and make a 40 nice card deck (or even 45 but 200?).
Try to have a especial type deck (like mine, I'm trying to make it Spellcaster-Warrior/Eart-Dark-Light (Here they call me the Warrior from the Darklight land :P))
There are also other types, like the:
Burnup deck - Your Life points up
Beat Up deck - Destroy Oponent before he does anything and much more.
Another thing, does anybody lives in Arizona?, near douglas or Sierra Vista?
I want to have duels with foreign duelists.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/14/03 12:13 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

This one of the stories I have started. Until now I have 7 chapters. The main chracateris named Blade because I liked that name. Don't think I gave him that name because I'm Blade_ecliptick.
I really got this name after writing Soul Quest 1 (yes, I've started SQ2 and SQ3), I was called BlackLight before this.
I know it is very bad writen (just like everything I write), but that is because my language isn't English, it is Spanish.
Please tell me what do you think about it, I started this for a game I was doing on Rpg Maker 2000.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/14/03 12:08 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Blade dashed to the first obstacle. Fifteen minutes later he had reached the goal. The course was a lot longer than he had thought.
“Five minutes rest!” shouted the soldier.
Blade, who was very thirsty, went with other two men to the fountain to re hydrate.
They didn’t walked very far when a girl knocked into them. She was the princess.
“Sorry” she said quickly getting to her feet. She made an attempt to run but the other men grabbed her form one arm and hold her there.
“What’s wrong with you two?!” Blade asked furiously.
“What’s wrong? Are you mental friend?” said the man wearing a red bandana in his forehead “the king hasn’t seen her since they kidnapped her!”
“Nobody kidnapped me!” shouted the princess, but nobody heard her.
“They’ll give us a lot of money if we give her back! Maybe they make medals with our names on them!” said the other guy placing the princess on his shoulder.
“Then you shouldn’t treat her like that!” Blade shouted. The princess was kicking furiously the back of the guy carrying her.
They started walking to the king’s chamber when a whistle sounded on their backs.
“Freeze there!” a soldier shouted.
The moment the soldier started at them they started running, but it was to late, about five soldiers seemed to appear from nowhere. They were led to the king’s chamber. When they arrived the queen gave a loud gasp.
“Your majesty, we’ve caught the ones that kidnapped the princess.” said one of the soldiers.
“Are you sure these are the men?” the king asked spotting Blade.
“Sure they are dear! They were caught in the act, Nadia escaped from them and they came for her!” the queen said.
“But Fleur, this cannot be!” said the king.
“Don’t talk nonsense! Sorry seeing that Blade was in this dirty work,” said Queen Fleur turning to Blade “How dare you, after all the things my husband has done for your family.”
“But...” Blade started
“Silence!!” Fleur snapped.
“Guards take them to the dungeons!” said finally the queen.
“Mom they...!” the princess started to say.
“Don’t worry my dear, we will make sure they get their punishment.” said the queen.
Blade couldn’t believe this. He was been taken to prison without doing anything, was it wrong to accidentally knock a girl onto the floor? He couldn’t believe how his luck changed just one hour after saying that it would be a perfect day. The last thing he could remember was that one of the guys that were with him was trying to get the soldier to let him go.
“Gerroff!!” he shouted “You’ll see big mother fucker!”
Then the soldiers knocked him off.
“What’s wrong with all of you!” shouted the other guy.
He was also knocked down. Blade, not wanting to have he same fate didn’t say anything. But then as though he was being drowned on a deep barrel he felt a great hit. The soldiers had knocked him down too.


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/14/03 12:04 AM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Soul Quest: Chapter 1
The Interview
It was a cloudy day in Galia, a well known reign of Briney. The people in the villages that were in Galia were known by their enthusiastic work on everything, from blacksmith to dress makers. You could find everything in there. There, of course, was a castle, in the far north of the reign. That fortress was something to be amused of. It had its own story, but that’s not what we’re talking about, our story has to do with a youngster in his late teen, his name was Blade. It all starts the morning Blade was going to an interview in the castle for been admitted in the reign’s Warrior Force.

<‘JAJAJAJAJAJA’ a blinding purple flash.>
“Damn” Blade said as he woke up with a start “I had already had that nightmare over 9 times, that girl been killed by that weird guy.”
“Blade are you awake?” his mom shouted from the kitchen.
“Yep!” he stood up trying to come on all his 5 senses.
“Then hurry up! You’re going to be late!” she answered.
“Late for what, mum?” he asked
“Don’t be silly today is your interview up at the castle!”
“Oh shit!” Blade said half through his food.
“Fye muf!” he shouted as he hurried to the entrance door.
“Take care and good luck!” she shouted to him “I’m going to Buldapolis for a trade I’ve managed!” but Blade couldn’t hear her because he was already to far from her.

“11:00 your majesty should I let the solicitors enter?” said a soldier
“Yes make them enter.” The king answered.
The next moment about a dozen men entered the chamber. It was a thing you should see. There was a red rug in front of the king’s throne. Next to him, sat the Queen and next to her was an empty chair decorated with the most beautiful ornaments of gold and silver, apparently, where the King’s daughter, was to sit.
“Nine, ten, eleven...”she counted pointing at all the men “You said that there were twelve, didn’t you?” she said turning to the soldier.
“Yes your majesty. One hasn’t arrived.”
“He is late again dear, what are you going to do, we can’t afford that time on him just because he is your dead friend’s son, do we?” the queen said exasperatedly to his husband.
At that moment the oak doors opened slowly and Blade came in, hurrying to the row, where he was supposed to be.
“Late again, Blade. How could you think...” but her words were cutted by the king.
“There is no problem. We haven’t started yet, but you do have in mind that to be at time is an important part of a warrior, do you?” he said to Blade.
“Yes sir.”
“Well then let the tasks begin.” He said turning to the soldier next to him.
“This way” the soldier commanded the men through a door that leads to a garden big enough for 7 houses to fit.
“First,” the soldier said to the men as they stopped, “you’re going to test your physical condition with that obstacle course.” He added pointing to a course filled from mud ponds to walls with grease you had to climb.
“On my whistle, Johan!” he sounded the whistle and a man with brown hair wearing a red tunic dashed forwards the obstacles.
“Michael!” he sounded the whistle again as Johan gained distance.
“Draven!” he continued “Merik!” “Tamel!” “Richard!” “Bob!” “Blade!”


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Topic: writing club

Posted: 12/11/03 10:21 PM

Forum: Clubs & Crews

Hey I'm here. Sorry Mina_Sol but I can go online at certain times only. I was reading the posts on page 2 and 3 and I understood we are also going to write stories, or I understood wrong? If we will, I have some good ones I've started, just tell me. Well, here is my short poem for today:

If I could
If I could,
I would line up for death before you,
If I could,
I would hug you all day and night without stoping to talk,
If I could,
I would stop the tears from your eyes,
but I can't ,
I can't because your far from me,
and I can't bring you back,
to me...


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