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Why won't anybody think of the kids!

At 12/15/12 12:43 AM, Z0nne wrote: As for proper feed back, i would focus more on anatomy and form instead of shading values and color. I have the same problem.

Thanks, I'll definitely work on that.

Also double post cause no edit button?
Yea, is hard to expect anything but Hentai with a thread name like: "Mr fap's art tread" XD

Yeah the lack of editing options for titles and posts can be a real bugger sometimes. Definitely when the art forum rules discourage making another art tread. You can't seem to change your username without approval of a mr Tom Fulp himself either so I guess I'm stuck with it.

At 12/14/12 10:16 PM, Z0nne wrote: Great artwork! but i cant fap to this! :p

I'm 100% hentai artist so far, i should change my name to Mr.faptastic :D

I guess I'll have to change my name as well if I want to get some proper feedback.
I'm not really a fan of hentai, but judging by the popular vote of the portal there's enough teenage boys out there who love it.

Bump.
This one's heavily referenced and the face looks, unintentionally, nothing like the reference.
I guess I'll have to practice me some portrait drawing.

I'm kind of contemplating posting the ref but the original doesn't wear underpants (I drew those on there. Aren't I a proper boy :p) and I'm not certain about linking to straight-up porn here.

At 12/8/12 08:45 PM, Otto wrote: I didn't time this but it was probably 5-10 minutes tops, but I wanted some seriously critical feedback on these unreferenced studies (is it a study with no reference?) I had a go at whacking out this out but I wander if anyone can point out things I need to work on that I'm not seeing. Please and thankyou, onwards and upwards.

Well for 5-10 minutes it's pretty good.
I know I'm guilty doing it myself all the time but maybe stay away from shading until you're absolutely certain about the sketch. It's a lot harder trying to make adjustments with a paintbrush than with a pencil (figuratively speaking of course, it's obviously drawn digitally).
For one there seems to be some kind of odd tense muscle between the neck and the right shoulder which doesn't look right in combination with the loosely hanging right-arm. It looks as if he's stuck in between two different poses at the same time.
Same thing with the feet and hips: The heel of the right foot seems to be off the ground which would cause the hip skew counterclockwise, yet it the hip's angle seems to be going the other way.

A neat little trick to correct these kind of mistakes is to cover up the parts of your drawing that don't look right with your hand and trying to figure out what's going on behind the hand. It's a trick similar to flipping the canvas horizontally (something you can only do digitally). But the best way to avoid them is to draw a stick figure-skeletons until you're more comfortable thinking out poses (I'm definitely not even close to that stage myself).

At 12/7/12 10:46 AM, Escalus wrote: ooooooo a hand writing competition!? my writing has a lot of curls

So do my pubes. HAAAAAAYOOOOOOO!
high-five! anyone?

Well here's my handwriting.

At 12/5/12 07:05 PM, M-Vero wrote: Tits
the key to popularity on newgrounds is tits
it literally does not matter what they are attached to.

Nope tried that. My tit-related entries actually have the lowest scores.
exemple:

• 
  Strip club. by MrFap

  Gentlemen and gentleman welcome our long time showgirl, the moment you've been waiting for.... miss Hooters! A lonesome drows...

  Score

  2.266666667 / 5.00

  Type

  Illustration

  Popularity

  1,832 Views

  Rated

  Adults Only

I'm pretty sure there's people going to the art portal looking only for the adult pictures to fap and not so much rate on the artistic value as much as how much it gets their little f*cking dicks wet.
It kind of makes me regret my username.

At 12/3/12 12:03 PM, MrFap wrote: Tried unstretching her with the transform tool in photoshop:

Oops fotgot pic. That keeps happing.

At 12/3/12 02:59 AM, Iiasminum wrote: This is one of my own works. Please critique or give advice.

Nice backround, the girl does look a little stretched out though. I know you were probably going for ultra-skinny but even models have a broader waistline and shoulders exemple, you gotta have room for the organs ;)
Tried unstretching her with the transform tool in photoshop:

tits!

• 
  Strip club. by MrFap

  Gentlemen and gentleman welcome our long time showgirl, the moment you've been waiting for.... miss Hooters! A lonesome drows...

  Score

  0.000000000 / 5.00

  Type

  Illustration

  Popularity

  14 Views

  Rated

  Adults Only

Third attempt
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/mrfap/strip-club?context=ratings:etma.user:4240327.scou ted:.offset:0

Dammit link doesn't work
second try:
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/mrfap/strip-club?context=ratings:etma.user:4240327.scou ted:.offset:0

At 12/2/12 07:38 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: That's very lovely. Although I'd recommend more expressive shading and lighting since it looks a bit bland at the moment. :)

Thanks, I added some more shading and upped the contrast.

I also fixed some derp that was going on with the face and added a background.
I chose not to render the background and keep the lines simle to not distract from the main focus and yet create the right atmosphere. So tada here's the outcome:
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/mrfap/strip-club?context=ratings:etma.user:4240327.scou ted:.offset:0

At 12/1/12 07:09 PM, Lucky wrote: ship concepts https://twitter.com/luckyde/status/275023444704382976/photo/
1

Haha cool, looks like a spin-off of the old 'wacky races' cartoon on the water.

I'm baaaaaaaack!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7MJSpgSnX24
I studied some of the anatomies, finally bough myself a tablet and I'm fired up on steroids. It's on.

So here's a new piece I've been working on. Any tips or critiques before I start adding more detail and a background?

At 11/9/12 08:18 PM, RealFaction wrote: honestly not crazy about that text either lol, it's a bit small and not much stylish. I really love the art it just needs some awesome text with an awesome font to go with it. It's ok if you ask someone for help, they cant do it for you but you can get ideas on some good fonts

This is about as stylish as I'll go:

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  Planet pulse Album contest by MrFap

  Art cover suggestion for RealFaction's latest album: planet pulse. *Edit: fontchange. *Edit: fontchange. *Edit: fontchange. *...

  Score

  2.000000000 / 5.00

  Type

  Illustration

  Popularity

  103 Views

  Rated

  Everyone

Here's the hq version without titles if you'd like to try for yourself:
LINK

At 11/9/12 03:47 PM, RealFaction wrote:

At 11/9/12 08:30 AM, MrFap wrote: This contest needs more entries!
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/mrfap/planet-pulse-album-

contest

That's pretty awesome :D i love the concept, though honestly, not so crazy about the titles. I LOVE the art though, great job :)

Thanks. I have to be honest: I wasn't entirely happy with the titles myself (suddenly reminded me of those cheap top hit album covers), that's why I also posted the picture without text.
I hope this adjustment is an improvement :)

• 
  Planet pulse Album contest by MrFap

  Budum tsjik BOOOOOOOOOOOOOW BOW padadadpa dum tsjik!

  Score

  0.000000000 / 5.00

  Type

  Illustration

  Popularity

  9 Views

  Rated

  Everyone

At 11/8/12 10:15 AM, gavkay21 wrote: I quite like the idea of the humanoid fox in the suit i think its pretty cool. Not to say you cant experiment around a little. I got this from the art portal i cant remember the users name however

I don't know how you lost his username (it's even in the file name of the image) but if you like his work you should pm him. Maybe he'll agree on making something for you.
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/gwnae/gentleman?context=ratings:etm.search:fox.sort:1.o ffset:52

At 11/9/12 12:33 AM, ReNaeNae wrote:

At 11/8/12 11:56 PM, Shayl wrote: Hey! I had this problem when I first joined.

Hmm, that makes me wonder if it isn't a problem with the new user posting filters since it only seems to be happening on recently created accounts. Curious!

I don't think so because I recently had the same problem.
I thought it had something to do with the file size because it was it was my first time uploading a such a big picture.
It eventually worked after a trying a few times though. (I use chrome)

This contest needs more entries!

• 
  Planet pulse Album contest by MrFap

  Budum tsjik BOOOOOOOOOOOOOW BOW padadadpa dum tsjik!

  Score

  0.000000000 / 5.00

  Type

  Illustration

  Popularity

  1 View

  Rated

  Everyone

At 11/9/12 06:25 AM, MrFap wrote:

At 11/8/12 04:53 PM, Flowers10 wrote: Invirted it myself this time, lets see if it turns out normal here.

I approve of this ;p
Looks like Shannen Doherty, was she a reference?
You're paintings have become amazing lately, I especially like the Kanye one!

*Your

sorry

At 11/8/12 04:53 PM, Flowers10 wrote: Invirted it myself this time, lets see if it turns out normal here.

I approve of this ;p
Looks like Shannen Doherty, was she a reference?
You're paintings have become amazing lately, I especially like the Kanye one!

At 11/6/12 12:50 PM, Escalus wrote:

At 11/6/12 12:21 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 11/6/12 06:23 AM, test-object wrote: Art is a word with three letters :3

Rhymes with tart

Start! :D

Part!

Also fart.

Toilet paper mummy is always a big hit!

Looks like it's going to be a wild party.

(sources: eyes, grass, mummy)

At 10/30/12 09:23 AM, Blud-Shot wrote: I'm working on a new piece, and so far I believe I have finished the gray scale of the image. I would like to know what you guys think I can do to improve the painting.

I'll read all your messages, it is really a great help getting feedback from the NG community (unlike that DeviantArt one) I can't improve without your input.

Let me know anything, like where do I need to work on to give the feeling of depth, what parts appear flat to you, should I increase the highlights or shadows, etc.

I also understand the girl is "beefy" looking but believe me that's the physique I aimed to draw. I'm looking for help on a technical level of the image in terms of painting. Never took lessons in drawing or painting so I look at our feedback as a mean of learning.

You may over paint to illustrate your point
Thanks :)

There's something about the legs that doesn't seem quite right. Are they dangling in the air or resting on something? Even if you don't intend on drawing a background, drawing some temporary outlines of whatever she's sitting on might help figuring out the pose. Also the feet look a bit to small and pointy but it's hard to judge with the shoes she's wearing.
I'm not a good one on anatomy but maybe if you draw the feet without the shoes you'll figure it out yourself.
Peace Out, Brotha.

At 10/16/12 05:41 PM, Tomsan wrote: zombie contest entry. its finished but I am gonna tweak a bit.

especially her huge hands are an eye sore, but I dont really know how to change this easily. I am not gonna redo the hands. Maybe I can fatten up the upper arm.

I actually got that left hand (our left) line-layered, so I guess I can transform everything in it, but I am not sure how. I tried but no luck.

also not to happy with her nails... ideas?

It looks pretty awesome. The left hand is kinda of tricky because of the whole perspective thing but maybe adding a shadow to the arm (as illustrated) might clear up the perspective a little.
As for the nails, they now seem to span the whole width of the finger. Leaving some skin next to it (as illustrated with the thumb and index finger) might make it look more realistic.
The shadow on the nose left side looks a little weak, darkening it and adding a highlight might make it pop more.
It's nice to also see some of your non-design work, keep it up :)

At 10/17/12 02:49 PM, Mownkey wrote:

At 10/17/12 02:31 PM, ForskinGump wrote: Tried the same face but larger

The breasts - they are too big. Everything else looks fairly decent.

Don't listen to him, breasts are never too big.

Nice work, I definitely like the first one. The chin is a bit too small on the second one but other than that it looks good as well.

At 10/16/12 12:05 PM, Tomsan wrote: lets not forget the result

and big (looks better)

That turned out very nice.

Silly zombie. Confused a pumpkin for a human head.

Yay, first entry!

• 
  Narwall after a fight by MrFap

  My entry for the NG 2012 ART JAM.

  Score

  3.000000000 / 5.00

  Type

  Illustration

  Popularity

  4 Views

  Rated

  Everyone

At 10/8/12 01:15 PM, Tomsan wrote: I feel that they look like they are hovering a little bit. Also it looks a bit like I edited a photo, which I didnt. probably because of the pillow. Still pretty content

Looks great! Maybe adding some sort of deformation, wrinkles and such, it'll look less floaty.
How did you do the fur? It looks like a lot of work.