At 8/16/07 02:10 PM, YK-Blaze wrote:
heres my part hope its ok..:
http://www.swfup.com/file/20032
please tell me what to improve
YK man, dat was very much awesome!
Loved it very much and the sprites were DA FUNK
But like u said everyone has to be a tough critic so:
- When the dude turned round, the shading should turn round as well (always remember where the light is coming from when shading). The sunlight seems to be coming from the right, so the guys face should be shaded on the left.
- MOAR Violence - theres only two guns in it, and the people seem to die quite easily
- Needs to be a bit more fast paced
- Maybe add a bit of humor? The reviewers seem to love that
- More things in the background would be nice
- Shorter clips like this need every kill to count, so adding things like blood sprays when someone gets shot or people clutching their wounds is always a gd idea
Other than that, I have to say
- It is very original, i.e the beach
- That evil guy he fights at the end is awesome
- Nice attention to detail, eg recoil, fight in the background
- It would be funny if, for example, the guys motivation is someone stepping on his sandcastle, followed by a dramatic zoom in on the guys face (anrgy eyebrows etc) and then the fighting begins
But remember dude, you got weeks to do it in, and this already at a high level of awesomeness
So dont stop there