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At 10/29/12 06:39 PM, fmn335 wrote: Well I still got reading to do and pleanty of room for improvement. Mind if I grab a copy of your shading Mownkey so I can study it?

Sure.

At 10/28/12 07:10 AM, fmn335 wrote: Hope this one is better.

Nope. Instead of using the airbrush tool, you could've done something like this.
I wouldn't recommend using the airbrush tool for shading, 'cause it will make the character look hairy.

At 10/26/12 02:40 PM, GiuseppeCiampa8 wrote: I drawing very well, but I can't draw anime style.

You no drawing very well seeing your artwork on Newgrounds and you no needing draw Anime you also need improve your English, son.

At 10/25/12 01:02 PM, GiuseppeCiampa8 wrote: THE LEGEND OF KALI has been canceled.

Why, if I may ask?

At 10/24/12 05:15 PM, smulse wrote: What if you cut your finger or something?

Then you most likely fucked up or something?

Resize it?

Adobe Flash CS6 can be a huge bitch with symbols.
Try the "automatically convert object to symbol button", I've got it circled down on the pic below.
If that doesn't solve the problem either, try re-installing CS6.

Looking at the motion of the characters, I'd say you used Anime Studio. That may be the reason why the file won't upload to Newgrounds - NG only accepts .swf, .mov and .mp4 files for now. I may be wrong though.
Looking at your movie, I really can say that you did put a lot of effort to get it done, there still may be some stuff to improve, like, why not try to get around some lip syncing?
The fight scenes looked very good. You figured out how to have more actions at the same time. Bravo!
One more thing - the proportions were a bit off, but I suppose you did it on a purpose?
Cheers.

Wow. This artist has broken ALL POSSIBLE rules of the Art Portal. It's so obvious that most of his work are traced pics, and if it's not traced (it's really done by him), it looks like bullcrap. You sir, you have a bright future on your way.

At 10/23/12 04:12 PM, zeebrafication wrote: Just a suggestion, why don't you shorten the walk cycle... Or maybe take out the walk... You need to just look at what would be more entertaining for the viewer :]

Oh yeah... didn't think about that... May do it.

For reference on a walk cycle check out these links
Walk Cycle with dip
Walk cycle 2

Wow thx.

At 10/23/12 09:50 AM, Mownkey wrote: Wow that sounds even better than my idea. Going back to work! D:

Argh trying to polish the story a bit cost me too much frames. Oh well.

The only animated part in this short film was probably that dude running. Everything else is just text which is even misspelled at some parts.

At 10/23/12 04:24 AM, zeebrafication wrote: @Mownkey: I know it is still a work in progress but try adding some character to your walk cycle, make the head bounce, the legs bend. And the concept could be a little more entertaining, maybe the guy gets sucked in and gets blasted into space... Keep up the good work :)

Wow that sounds even better than my idea. Going back to work! D:

At 10/22/12 10:29 AM, Fearneh wrote: No its not i painted this, i swear i cant do hair, the program i use doesn't have the brushes i need to do good hair.

It's still hard believable that your art style has changed from mediocre to good for 5 months. Have you taken an art class or something?

Unpolished work in progress: storyboarding
I'm so gay.

At 10/22/12 07:31 AM, Hyptosis wrote: more sketches

Practicing anatomy?

At 10/21/12 04:30 PM, GiuseppeCiampa8 wrote: The game I'm designing is called "JOSH AND KEVIN"

Reading this thread your game is meant to be called "THE LEGEND OF KALI", and is meant to be a shooter. And now what, your game is now called "JOSH AND KEVIN" and is a platformer? Are you rapidly changing your ideas?

At 10/21/12 07:17 PM, Sketchy wrote: Not to sound like a dick, but may I ask what your part in this will be?

He first thought he is going to do the artwork, but then he probably realized that his drawing abilities aren't very good and then he decided to be a writer or something.
To OP: not to be rude, you may ask for experienced people to hire, but have you got enough experience to keep this indie game development team ongoing? I don't think so.

At 10/21/12 01:39 PM, RainDash wrote: A tablet with pressure detection

...or you use the eraser tool to taper the lines. This way is tedious, so I'm seconding that what RainDash said.

At 10/21/12 07:40 PM, DillonBrannick wrote: Turns out, you had to be from ireland to vote anyway, also we managed to get through the first part.

Contact Speedo.

At 10/21/12 09:24 PM, Fearneh wrote: Coming along WIP

I don't think the face is painted by you. The nose looks too good together with the eyes and the mouth, and looking at your artwork, your nose and lip drawing is unique, but this...
I suppose you just took a picture and used the smudge tool to make it look like it's painted (that's what Escalus said) and then you colored the eyes white and put some blood effects near the mouth.
Also, this artwork looks like you just smudged over a picture, because the hair is unfitting.
Now: Is that what I and Escalus said true?

Okay. Now show some of your work.

At 10/21/12 11:48 AM, Mownkey wrote: And why not show something of your work?

*some
Grrrrrr.

At 10/21/12 11:40 AM, AlbinALinder wrote: Sorry if im in the wrong topics form im a new NG user :)

Unfortunately, you are, but that's okay. Something like this fits better the Collaboration forum.
And why not show something of your work?

Drawwwww sumthinggggg originallllll dudeeeeeee.

At 10/20/12 11:45 AM, BB-7 wrote: Will anyone speak to me?

Hi I'm lonely too. See? We have much in common already!

At 10/20/12 03:04 PM, HiryuGouki wrote: Let me know what you think of this design:

Pretty detailed. Oh and her right hand - it may be a bit smaller than the other one though.

At 10/20/12 01:11 AM, Oscilliate wrote: Hi, I'm new. I have a bad habit with anything requiring regular posting but I will try.

Why?
God your art is freaking amazing! I like your irregular color choices!

Collaboration forum.

Have you been importing the image to stage or to the library?