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At 12/20/13 12:21 PM, Felis wrote:

At 12/20/13 01:54 AM, Monoklo wrote:

Some more art on the way:

This is a minor thing, but your shell casings in this drawing lack primer. I don't know anything about RBWY, but considering the casings appear to be based off of high velocity rifle rounds judging by their necked down top, these would be centerfire rounds, not rimfire, if the technology of real firearms still applied.

This is where my knowledge of guns causes my fall. i believe there is indeed a primer on the crescent rose's (name of the rifle) rounds. I'll have to fix this eventualy thanks for telling me :) would have never noticed otherwise.

(BTW had to pay a visit to google to know what a primer was)

Here is a Kill la kill fan-art I made this week. tell me what you think about it :)

At 12/19/13 12:41 AM, ninjaslave wrote: lOOKS GREAT MATE!!! I love the hair, do you have a tablet? I hand draw myself.

thanks! and Indeed pal I use an Intuos 4 large but wouldn't recommend buying anything past medium sized tablets. Large can hardly fit in backpacks -_-; not really optimal if you know what I mean.

Some more art on the way:

Been a while since I made an update tought it was time to show what I've done lately.

At 6/9/13 04:00 PM, Spedmallet wrote:

At 6/9/13 03:48 PM, Monoklo wrote: I have a question for you did you see any issue with the text in those pages I'm always pretty akward about my grammar and stuff. xD

didn't read it lel

TT_TT

HEY I GOT THE HANG OF UPLOADING STUFF TO THE INTERNET! xD resolution is no longer a problem for me :D

Also I won't upload my comics here any longer since I made a website for it might want to check this up every saturday:
[url=http://dumb-beetles.smackjeeves.com/][img]http://img2.s mackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/banners/1/e/1e068ac45ITSV.gif [/img][/url]

http://dumb-beetles.smackjeeves.com/comics/1754259/p-1/

At 6/9/13 11:30 AM, Spedmallet wrote: My biggest issue with your comics is that the characters are generally posed lifelessly/forcefully. Dunno if you follow, but essentially they just seem very unnaturally posed and board-like. Try exploring some figure drawing and different poses. Maybe take some photos, either of yourself or stock photos, and draw human figures from reference rather than freehand. Consider getting a drawing mannequin if you don't have one; mine isn't perfect but it helps a lot. I use it before I start drawing to get a good idea of exactly what pose I want to create, rather than winging it and going along as I draw.

Great advice, I already noticed tho. I think it's a huge problem I had with page 3 (and a bit less with page 1). I'm always working on my pose improvement problem but I get to focus on things like backgrounds which take a lot of my time. You might see my will to improve on my background skills on the upcoming pages. For the mannequin advice... funny I ordered a figma a week and a half ago. I've never been a huge fan of art mannequin because there poses usualy suck but it sounds like it is not the case for those action figures.

I have a question for you did you see any issue with the text in those pages I'm always pretty akward about my grammar and stuff. xD

here comes page 3... it's sort of mediocre I'll do better on the next pages

Here's page 2

:3

At 5/29/13 09:30 PM, Banzanimation wrote: its pretty good, but i cant quite tell if its a female or a male.

But anyway good job!

yeah Ahah you are not the only one to say that...

on the other hand more stuff! my manga! much higher resolution images on my dev:
http://monoklo.deviantart.com/gallery/44062422

thank you very much for the advice :D I tought of it but I didn't know how to edit my post O.O
here is my newest drawing. :3

I have a vision my friend...
a vision that i shouldn't be held responsible for my stupidity

Feel free to comment I'm deeply in need of friends :P

http://art.ngfiles.com/images/210/monoklo_spongecazed.jpg