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At 12/14/12 01:04 AM, MisterAce wrote:

At 9/7/12 11:59 PM, MisterAce wrote: My recent art felt a little rushed even after I felt I was done with them; this one and onwards I'm hopefully gonna try to move away from that.

A re-do

Another

At 9/7/12 11:59 PM, MisterAce wrote: My recent art felt a little rushed even after I felt I was done with them; this one and onwards I'm hopefully gonna try to move away from that.

A re-do

At 12/10/12 02:38 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 12/10/12 10:35 AM, Morthagg wrote: Anyway though.
This is a cyborg Spinosaurus.

If only this was in Jurassic Park 3..... would've made the movie a whole lot better.

Similar rumor Idea for 4, plus they would've been armed.

Pretty good detail, I like it.

At 12/10/12 02:01 PM, MisterAce wrote: hips the same length as the shoulders.

Width, sorry

People usually want to have figures about 7 heads tall. The horizontal lines in the torso could help with keeping the hips the same length as the shoulders.

I also read it and I think it helped me focus on my anatomy.

Definitely music for me, and it could be completely random. Even genre that I don't listen to; if it gets the gears turning it's fine.

Very colorful. I like it.

Welcome to the forum.

Make sure you take a look at the rules. The pic looks pretty good, looking forward to see more.

You can adjust the strength and size of the smudge tool. I kinda had the same blurriness problem and you could try outlining it with harder lines, and shading at a higher opacity over a solid color. Then work in the lines with the smudge tool so that they don't pop out so much, but keep the picture sharp.

The perspective of the hole in his mouth on the first picture doesn't match the perspective of the head. I think you should work on the lines of the second one. The third, the arms seem crooked, the hips are asymmetrical.

The anatomy of the face of the 4th and 5th looks uneven. The ghost spider I like. you should try using more solid lines. The last one the anatomy of the face doesn't look right. I think the face is too big, and he wouldn't be able to chew the fingers since the jaw isn't connected on one side.

I think you should practice a bit more on anatomy. Try drawing a portrait or a figure from reference, then "zombify" it from there.

At 11/3/12 04:17 PM, Mabelma wrote: I'm not sure why I love masks so much maybe it's because they can hide the beauty or the ugliness of everyone in a single second. It just makes people in human, it makes you not want to be close to them but at the same time it inspires imagination, anything can be behind that mask, I just love masks...

I think the shading is pretty good but there are some mistakes in the anatomy. The right hand thumb, the breasts, the legs the feet, the left hand fingers, and the hips. The overall pose looks a little uncomfortable. The line work should be a little more solid.

At 11/3/12 08:36 PM, JoseFonz wrote: had a second go at the female face.
Keep in mind it's a wip

I think that you should bring the nose up a bit. The neck looks a little uneven and you should clean up the lines. I think everything else looks good.

My recent art felt a little rushed even after I felt I was done with them; this one and onwards I'm hopefully gonna try to move away from that.

Another~

What helped me get used to the tablet was to use it to surf the web instead of the mouse. I'd say that would help with your coordination a bit.

At 8/19/12 11:02 PM, MisterAce wrote:

At 8/16/12 11:25 PM, MisterAce wrote: WIP update

Thus far~

Minor additions; just gonna touch it up more from here on out, starting with the fence. Any suggestions welcome.

At 8/16/12 11:25 PM, MisterAce wrote: WIP update

Thus far~

WIP update

3rd Wip~

Wip 2, gonna focus one at a time. Some foreshortening-

3 WIPs Incoming, basically redraws of my earlier pics in my profile with a little more dynamic poses to them. After these I'm gonna focus on the flash, but I'm gonna post art updates on that and maybe do a pic or two in between.

At 7/27/12 06:07 AM, ImpendingRiot wrote: Another update. Still chipping away at it.

I like what you did with the TV screen. It looks like the border of the TV on the right side is a little thicker though. I think that screen might cast a brighter light in the dark, but its been awhile since I've seen it. Looks great.

At 7/26/12 12:58 AM, Kashi wrote: Ugh why am I putting so much time into this he's gonna be wearing clothes anywayssss..... >:/
Refs: 1 2

I admit, I took my time finding refs.

That left foot might be a little too long. Looks good

It's better to just focus on one pic at a time lol, I'm ready to end this one. >.>; Anyway, finally putting this one together, I had to revert back to an earlier save because my efforts to resharpen the picture made it worse. Almost done, excuse the quality because I had to shrink this reeeaaall goooooodd this time.

At 7/24/12 05:35 PM, MisterAce wrote:
Does anyone know how to fix this? If not, I think I can just redo the lines to sharpen it manually.

I think I found it. > filter > sharpen I'll try that...

I figured out what causes some of the blurriness; its from resizing the pic. I had been accidentally fixing this problem with my last pic by undoing image size after I upload it on to here, but I saw some small mistakes on my pictures that I wanted to fix real quick. So image size would be gone from the history and unable to get rid of. When I re-size it manually it gets blurry.

Does anyone know how to fix this? If not, I think I can just redo the lines to sharpen it manually.

WIP update. Some cleaning up, more color, background soon.

Her left leg looks longer the other, and the right hand fingers are a bit too slanted. I think that the whole hand should be turned to the right, so that it matches the fingers facing that way. This looks good overall.

Alrighty, put in the background (Used a stock photo for an idea of the layout of the ceiling), harder lines, fixed the shoulders of the guy on the left and middle, fixed the hand (I think), put in some minute details...not quite finished yet, just a little more touches here and there and back to WIP 1.