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At 7/30/14 02:31 AM,
tnx for the overpaint! i appreciate it A LOT. i will study ur overpaint and attempt it over and over c:.i had no ref, and i was winging it real hard with no sense of what style or way to do it. (suchascrubq-q)

At 7/29/14 08:55 PM, SubliminalVirus wrote: Hm... I'd work on some of the placement and proportions of the features. My art teacher actually had me draw skulls, then all the muscles of the face before I had to draw lots of eyes, noses, mouths, teath, ears, yaddayadda. I think it would be worth your while to try that.

thanks, i think i saw a video on jazza's stuff about skulls

At 7/28/14 10:52 PM, dumbclowny wrote:

At 7/28/14 04:49 AM, MetalWings wrote: iron me out newgrouds

I'm not sure if you did this on purpose, however the lines look very jagged, put more confidence into the lines make them nice and straight. The face doesn't look very smooth for that same reason therefore lacking realism. What you tried to do with the nose simply didn't work it just looks like she has some weird shadow on her right eye. Her skin is a tiny bit too pale if you ask me, and you didn't try to incorporate any other sort of shadow besides under her eyes and neck. I'm assuming you're trying to make a fan art of the character in your profile pic, in which case her head is a little too tall and you gave her a hair cut.

In conclusion smoother lines would do quite a bit to improve it, and maybe making it look like she's not a vampire.

yeah i didn't use a real program to do this, hence the ms paint, should use ps/illustrator, this is my attempt of orignality to create my own style. and the long-gation is a habit because i like thin.
-tnx for feed back
-need to work on shadow i guess
-not fan art(my pic is), no reference( i wanted my own style)
- need to stop doing work on "mspaint online" and use what i have....
-stop making things too thin and tall

iron me out newgrouds

At 6/26/14 04:20 AM, artoffredskov wrote:

At 6/26/14 02:52 AM, MetalWings wrote:

I'm new to NewGrounds, but seemingly the majority advices new people to reate an art thread here on the forums and go on from there with a humble tone. I have no idea as of yet on how to scout people, but i'd love to see some more of your art to give some contructive criticism.

Regards
- Fredskov

well i found something about scouting just now:
http://ornery.newgrounds.com/news/post/388624
-Apparently, I guess i did something wrong for kinda asking for it.

At 6/26/14 02:52 AM, MetalWings wrote: I haven't really did anything big, as of yet'; but I can say I really mimic other artists easily( if it's flat), as of realism, I'm a bit of scurb
( check my dumping grounds image: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/df0f026dcda9bb2a26262f836e1ae7ff ) <my digital realism attempt, i never really did a good realistic drawing as the time of this post> thats saying i really wana improve.

I guess if really want to get up there, i really need to create plenty of refined art.

I haven't really did anything big, as of yet'; but I can say I really mimic other artists easily( if it's flat), as of realism, I'm a bit of scurb
( check my dumping grounds image: http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/df0f026dcda9bb2a26262f836e1ae7ff ) <my digital realism attempt, i never really did a good realistic drawing as the time of this post> thats saying i really wana improve.

At 6/25/14 05:04 AM, ThaFallenOne wrote: It seems that way since i haven't been scouted yet but people like THIS have.
Here's some of my work...... and no, I'm not asking to be scouted.

from what i seen, you are shy from proportion , u leave out an eye, or u do actually mess up on proportion, and from that pic u posted, i think its okay, but its obviously shy( cuz hiding) Just observations,

Just work on proportion, youtube skeletal structure /body figure / w/e helps + proportion

At 6/22/14 10:21 AM, odditiesbyangela wrote: I'm new and honestly I have no idea how to actually use this forum at this point--

So I am either going to get bashed or people are going to just show me some of their art and also take a look at the small bits that I've uploaded on this site.

Looking forward to seeing some of your guys' stuff.

~~~ i usually stick with easy flat stuff, still need work with tablet, its a cheap one, but i can eventually work with it.