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That has to be part of the animation. It just has too. It'll make up for her strange boobs. Lol

Looks better. The torso still seems off, or perhaps it's the boobies, they look like they are being held up by the wonder bra from hell. The arms are much better. Still a face only mom could love.

At 6/8/10 08:58 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: Go vote and review Damn it!

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Ok, I gotta be honest. And it's weird because you have been very helpful and I know very little about 3-d. Here goes. Her arms are too long. her arms almost reach her knee. The arms to me look a little spindly. The fce looks like it got mashed in with a shovel. Her hair looks off to me. Maybe it's the color choices and style of sweater but her torso looks a little long and off. The texture and colors are really good. But the girl herself looks.. off. I wish I could explian better or not sound so harsh. But that's what I see. To be honest I like your other stuff better. This is not what I expected from a "Kinsei Job". Again sorry if I sound like a dick. I'm trying to be helpful.

Looking good so far guys. Keep em' coming!

At 6/6/10 10:02 PM, Ashman wrote:

At 6/6/10 09:50 PM, MajesticBob wrote: Please crit my robot, be mean if you have to, but I want to put my best foot forward for Robot day. The pose is static 'cause he's "powering up" I think the lines coukd use some work. Anything else? I also went for a steampunk look/

first i gotta say are you colouring on the same layer as the lines, dont, colour underneath them, from what i can see it needs a bit of a clean up, much of the colour is spilling out of the lines, also are you using gradients for the shading, also dont, do it by hand, it gives you much more control with shapes and light sources

Actually Lintre has it more accurate. I did indeed color UNDER the lines, not within. But otherwise your right. Thanks for the advice. Both of you.

Please crit my robot, be mean if you have to, but I want to put my best foot forward for Robot day. The pose is static 'cause he's "powering up" I think the lines coukd use some work. Anything else? I also went for a steampunk look/

Beware the two headed puppicorn!

Puppies

Horns

Still working on it, what I got so far.

My vote was for Raenaenae BTW

At 6/6/10 01:50 PM, Sockembop wrote: PROOFS! (may or may not be edited... you decide)

Danopus: lol yesh im a total fag
Sockembop: wow.
Sockembop: You said that.
Sockembop: Copy and paste to notepad...
Danopus: im not really.
Danopus: NO DONT TELL THE FORUMSSSS
Sockembop: lol
Danopus: my rep man
Danopus: my REP

Lulz, was that before or after he did the Hamster booty show? Yes I said hamster booty.

Oh shit tacos I forgot Kweaks with Morgan Freeman Butterfly.

At 6/6/10 07:09 AM, ReNaeNae wrote: lol, silly, bob. This is week 9.

I vote for lundsfryd's freaky mantis thing... BUT!!!! his is a perfect example of labeling links as NSFW! >:(

Dog, Wings, Horn

3:30am! I warned you I was loopy. Also major Lulz on your dog.

That's right kids theirs a new sheriff in town. I'll be doing these from now on.
Last weeks winner: Tomatofox Jessica Pug
J-QB came in close second
Ashman got a vote.
Congrats guys!

This week's challenge: Puppicorns (Puppies with horns)

Rules:
Must use at least 2 images
Must link ALL stock photos
Not sure how it would'nt be but must be safe for work
Deadline Sat june 12th

Also don't forget to vote on week 7
Raenaenae Buttergirlfly
Havegum Fugly Baby
Lundsfryd Mantigirl
Majestic Bob Insectiod Invasion
Newgroundsisdabomb Trogdor fly

Sorry for the lazy link, but it's 3:30 in the morning. i'll post better links on the morrow.

Narwhal
Puppy
Grass field

At 6/6/10 12:20 AM, Kinsei01 wrote:

At 6/5/10 10:15 PM, MajesticBob wrote: I suppose your right. I'll work on that. Very valid point. Thank you.

another good point that has been sad thousands of times before, make use if your layers when coloring.

I always do.

At 6/5/10 10:09 PM, Ashman wrote:

At 6/5/10 10:08 PM, MajesticBob wrote: So I started coloring, still long ways to go. Do you see where I'm trying to go with this Kinsei?

you should really start off colouring the background, it helps establish the light source, then move onto the character so you know where shading and highlights go

I suppose your right. I'll work on that. Very valid point. Thank you.

So I started coloring, still long ways to go. Do you see where I'm trying to go with this Kinsei?

Ok here's what I got so far for robot day. Still kinda sucks but I'm trying.

So ronery.

Ignore the above post. You fixed most of what I was talking about lol. Although I do say it looks more like a splash page and should not be broken up into panels. Also sorry for the double post. Had to clarify.

It's well drawn, The girl is great. However, your layout doesn't tell the story very well. I get the girl is hiding aand scared. But the robots are kinda jumbled in the action. It's explosions and scared girl. As I said it's very well drawn, but I think the action could be toned down a little. Like one of the bots looking in another building while the other destroys something. To me the pic is just too busy. The girl is the only clear image and am drawn to her first (which is good for a single pane pic, but bad for a multi pane pic) It looks like you took a splash page and broke it into panels. Either use three panals to explain the story or have a single splash page. Lastly, your a way better artist than me. I only give the crit 'cause you asked :)

Ok so I kept the gradients, but made the pic Black and White. Then I recolored over the pic, to give it a more subdued look. The Optimus Prime colors were unintentional.

At 6/5/10 04:52 PM, BizarroJoe wrote:

I'm starting to be really fond of these characters... Will there be more misadventures of BizarroJoAnneand M-Veronica in the tough reality of the Art Forum?

...Who knows...

I vote for more drunken adventures of pirate and ninja lol.

At 6/5/10 03:33 PM, BizarroJoe wrote:

At 6/5/10 11:25 AM, Dalenbourg wrote: A ninja drinking heavily with a pirate, cause there's no reason they should be fighting all the time...

At 6/5/10 11:38 AM, MajesticBob wrote: A Ninja girl and a pirate "Getting Caught" Ah, forbidden love...

So much EPIC win!! And you added lesbian action to boot.

Goku wearing a wig to fool his enemies or something?

At 6/5/10 01:34 PM, ReNaeNae wrote:

At 6/5/10 01:06 PM, angryglacier wrote: I think Nae wants to get yelled at.

Yeah, nothing completes my day more than some pm's filled with rage and ignorance! Love it! :D

It's like coffee for the soul.

Wow, and here I thought I abused the filters a bit much. Looks like a rush job. Got anything else to show?

At 6/5/10 01:18 PM, BizarroJoe wrote:

At 6/5/10 12:17 PM, M-Vero wrote: Draw veronica there on a coffee break after a hard first day

Which Veronica... This one?

Just in case...

I think he meant M-Vero going with the joke when you called vero M-veronika on his first day of whoring.

At 6/5/10 02:53 AM, Kinsei01 wrote:

At 6/5/10 12:58 AM, MajesticBob wrote:

At 6/5/10 12:56 AM, Kinsei01 wrote: well I'm going to watch this tonight, lets hope it goes well...

It's Bad. Really, really bad. I recommend lots of whisky if your going to try and sit through it. Whisky will help. I like zombie movies myself but this one is just bad.

oh god bob..... I wish I had taken your advice... wow..... just wow..... I oculd have even turned it off at about 20 minuets and it could have been good.... but I didn't.... the horror...... oh god the horror.....
Really the first 20 - about 25 minuets are decent, kind of weak on the acting, but ok... after that it's a slick slide down hill to a bed of razorblades and salt while its raining lemon juice..
I took 5 pages of notes over it.... 5..... I have taken less notes in class....

I told you. I mean come on the cover art was a red flag, you even mentioned it! Well that shit storm is behind you now. As long as you NEVER watch the movie "The Mangler 2" your golden. I...I never saw it myself. I was... uh ... Playing video games. Video games I say!

Sorry for double post, forgot pic.

I made a roid rage squirrel. Not a serious submission. Just felt I had to submit something for drawing day.