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Another WIP, customizing a bow. The base Bow. The green one.

Custom Gas Mask.

Got another one for ya. Boosh!

At 7/14/11 11:21 AM, Kashi wrote:

At 7/14/11 01:38 AM, MajesticBob wrote: Sorry for the double post, But I need to get this up so I can sleeps.

Idk, it isn't bad, but...
I think you should draw more inspiration from actual swords; it seems like you were going from memory.
For one, sword handles, even shortswords, have more room to hold it. I'm not even sure if I can fit one hand on that... making it longer would fix that issue. Plus the shape of it isn't very efficient, cone-shaped (see links below for a more realistic shape). Its also going diagonally a bit, which is noticeable and distracts from the piece. I think the star "gem" is a nice addition, but only if it is set in the sword, i.e. this or this or this.
Idk, you can always touch it up with a brush (or photoshop).

I'm not sure what more I can do to it. Maybe the design is too simple. Honestly, Knoc if it doesn't meet standards then in a few days I'll recall Dibs and try again. If it squeaks by due to It's a sucky medium and fits the style of the last piece then good. (I doubt it'll make the cut judging by reactions. I just don't have the time or oddly strength to keep working on this one.) A lot of shit happened recently. So If you veto it, I'll try again in a few days. Like it or hate it, this horse is dead.

At 7/14/11 04:10 AM, Kinsei01 wrote:

At 7/14/11 04:09 AM, MajesticBob wrote:

At 7/14/11 03:26 AM, LegolaSS wrote: loving that wheel of fortune WIP... the strengh card looks a bit to much like its been filtered to death with images and what not... im not to sure about it myself, but im staying open minded

Filtered to death? The only filter used was drop shadow. I'm totally confused by what you mean.

D'oh... You mean that wasn't raised.....
How.... how did I miss that.....
I'm such an idiot....

See? Kinsei thought I really raised it, so it wasn't obvious it was filtered =P (kidding, Kinsei just missed that for some super strange reason.)

At 7/14/11 03:26 AM, LegolaSS wrote: loving that wheel of fortune WIP... the strengh card looks a bit to much like its been filtered to death with images and what not... im not to sure about it myself, but im staying open minded

Filtered to death? The only filter used was drop shadow. I'm totally confused by what you mean.

Sorry for the double post, But I need to get this up so I can sleeps.

WIP 4

WIP3

Another WIP

WIP for Tarot Collab.

WIP3. I like this one.

At 7/13/11 04:18 PM, MajesticBob wrote: WIP2

I'll try and work on the Gaurds a bit, next.

Shit! Wrong damn pic! Sorry for the double post.

WIP2

I'll try and work on the Gaurds a bit, next.

At 7/13/11 02:53 PM, Kumakun4 wrote:

At 7/13/11 01:07 PM, MajesticBob wrote: WIP for Strength.

Well, I'll be perfectly blunt, even if I feel kind of like a dick for doing so: it looks sloppy. I know you put an all-nighter into it, but it looks all squiggly and bumpy, and just... I dunno. Maybe it's the spraypaint medium, but I honestly think it looks too... simple. It just doesn't really stir anything inside me.
Sorry :c

Hey man, that's your opinion and critique. No reason to say sorry, or think you were a dick. You weren't mean about. That's the whole point of posting WIPs. Problem is I'm truly unsure how to fix it, or even if I want to fix it. I like the simple style. I'm a simple man. Not an excuse though, I'll go back and change what i can, and if more people agree it's sucky I'll just try again with a new piece.

WIP for Strength. This was tough. I didn't want to do a body builder or something, so I thought what is a common symbol fo strength? A sword. More specifically the sword in the stone which symbolizes both inner and outer strength. Again with Spray Paint and a little brush work trying to keep the same style as The World card. It's good. But it was really tough to make. Basically an all nighter.

Bump

At 7/11/11 11:43 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: you know... I just realized that when you say double duty, it me think of a 3 some...... good thing it isn't triple, cause I think that qualifies as a gang bang.... o.O...

I have gotta put a leash on my wandering mind....

Lol. I gave a response that's almost as long winded as yor reviews lol.

At 7/11/11 11:32 PM, Kinsei01 wrote: lol I just mentioned that you should upload the tarot version in the last review :P
But since its the same art, there isn't much I can else I can say. The only major differences is the cropping and he overlay of the vines

True, But thanks nonetheless!

Sorry for the double post, But you been drafted for doble duty. If that's Ok.

I'm calling it done then.

Kinsei! You got some whoring to do!

Latest WIP

Sorry for the double post but Zane is a GENIUS! WIP3. This might be the "One"

WIP without the vines.

WIp for said collab

Earth. Done in spray paint. For Knoc's Tarot Collab

It's hard to do WIPs in spraypaint. But Uh, WIP? I'd like to call it done, but Suggestions so Knoc doesn't knock me out. Did this with spray paint took a picture and touched it up in Gimp.

I call dibs on the world.

Well that was a complete waste of my day. Last time I don't make someone pay up front.