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At 12/5/14 02:00 AM, Nate97 wrote: Still not perfect, but I tried :)

I KNEW you'd make it awesome!
Fan-frickin-tastic work, that's some real neat linework! Those lines are as sharp and crisp like a knife! Linework is stunning. One word: AWESOME.
Keep up the splendid work!

I really like the linework in the bottom half of your drawing, to me it looks crisp and neatly done, and there is a variation of line darkness (his pants, gloves and legs), which I think is really cool and gives the drawing more "dimension".
The upper half of the picture is nice too, but I feel it would look a lot more pulled together if you used more pressure with the pencil and added just a few more "harsh" lines around his sleeves, belt, necklace and hair (to mimic what's happening on the lower half of the drawing, to create some sort of a balance/harmony idunno).

And also, I love how you drew the chain from his belt, looks like good crisp lines, which can be difficult when you draw on a smaller area where details and accuracy is needed, but you pulled it off!
And don't be afraid to be heavier on the shading! Darken those parts up (carefully, it's so difficult to erase/fix dark areas) while looking at your reference photo, and it will be an amazing drawing, I'm sure!
Really nice work!