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Response to: Help Me Improve This Picture Posted September 17th, 2013 in Art

I have a few comments I thought I'd share. First of all, the shape of the figure is not clearly defined. What I mean is when I tried to outline the silhouette of the character I ended up with a blob, more or less. I'd suggest you should try to have a good understanding over what shape your character is before you start clothing them up. Make the clothes fit around the character, not the other way around.

Another thing is the image has two "layers" so to speak, and nothing inbetween. The front layer is the grass and the character, while the background is the gradient. The problem is then that the image lacks depth and ends up looking flat. If you're aiming to draw so that it seems like a three-dimensional space, you might want to try to avoid flat "layers" like that.

Thirdly, the colours are glaringly over-saturated. Since you've picked a dark blue for your sky colours, I'm presuming you want it to look like night time. The problem is, the bright green grass breaks against that idea, and makes it look a bit cartoony and silly. I'd recommend doing a quick read on colour theory, and work on integrating different brightness and saturation in your compositions.


I believe stuff like the shading and inconsistent style will sort of work itself out with enough practice. I'd also recommend starting on new stuff and try to work in whatever comments you get on that instead of picking away at the same thing for too long.

Help Me Improve This Picture

Response to: NG Alcoholics Anonymous Posted September 17th, 2013 in Clubs & Crews

Homebrew

NG Alcoholics Anonymous

Response to: Post Your Instrument Posted September 16th, 2013 in General

Looks like this

Post Your Instrument

Response to: mental health awarness contest Posted September 15th, 2013 in Art

Here's this, inspired from this

mental health awarness contest

Response to: Let's Madness Day 2013 Posted September 13th, 2013 in Art

I liked your colour scheme so here's a quick, shameless copy

Let's Madness Day 2013

Response to: Fav horror movie psycho Posted September 13th, 2013 in General

Maybe Andrew Scott's Moriarity

Fav horror movie psycho

Response to: Gumbys Hideout Posted September 12th, 2013 in Art

More pixels

Gumbys Hideout

Response to: What Posted September 6th, 2013 in Art

Battle royale reboot.

For the love of god, make it a rule that every non-image post will be deleted after a day or so. I think some form of communication is good, but when a page is 28/30 it just gets in the way.

If someone wants to impact the story, they should draw a response, not post "I have everything-proof-shield1!"

Response to: Good way to get inspired ? Posted September 5th, 2013 in Art

Free Artistic Inspiration Here!

Response to: "Do you have a job?" Posted September 5th, 2013 in General

I work as an assistant in Doping Controls, as well as a gas station employee.
Otherwise, I do volunteer work at a jazz forum with all kinds of fun concerts and everything.

Response to: Ice Posted September 5th, 2013 in General

Freeze coffee to put in ice coffee

Response to: Gumbys Hideout Posted September 3rd, 2013 in Art

Something I'm working on

Gumbys Hideout

Response to: Art Forum Lounge Posted September 3rd, 2013 in Art

At 9/3/13 09:55 AM, Havegum wrote:

If you (rightfully) think that messing with the colours with the three single colour layers is tedious, you can achieve the same effect by using a gradient map adjustment layer, and putting it on top of your layers.

The "Create Adjustment Layer" button is at the bottom of the layers panel, and "Gradient Map..." is towards the bottom of the drop down menu that follows.

The gradient map is simpler to understand and alter than the blending mode layers. Dark colours will be replaced by the left side of the gradient, and light colours will be replaced by the right side of the gradient.

Art Forum Lounge

Response to: Art Forum Lounge Posted September 3rd, 2013 in Art

At 9/2/13 11:39 PM, Absinthe wrote: Hey guys, I was wondering how do you set up a uniform color palette window in photoshop?

You can create a layer on top of your drawing, fill it with a solid colour, and set the blending mode to "Colour". Additional solid fill layers with blending mode "Darken" and "Lighten" can be used to shift the light and dark tones respectively.

Art Forum Lounge

Response to: Gumbys Hideout Posted September 2nd, 2013 in Art

Doing some manual anti-aliasing

@Carrion

Gumbys Hideout

Response to: Your love for water Posted September 1st, 2013 in General

I like the waters of March

Response to: User Icon. Posted August 31st, 2013 in Art

http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1292621/30

get yours here ^

Response to: Feedback on music album cover? Posted August 31st, 2013 in Art

I notice a few issues you might want to work out.

The motif inside the text is disrupting the legibility of the text itself. I'd suggest using a more neutral and uniform composition so the text is easier to read. You most likely want to avoid using black in the drawing so you can more easily separate the background from the text. In addition, the black line between "L" and "M" in Almagest is missing, so it's almost impossible to recognize it as "Almagest" unless one knows on beforehand what it's supposed to read.

You should also consider adjusting the leading so it matches either the kerning, or the space left inside some of the characters. You may also want to align the text in straight lines.

As you can see below, it's much more readable once you clear out the insides and put in the line between L and M, and I daresay it works fine on its own without anything inside taking up attention.
If you need anything inside, make sure it doesn't make the text hard to read.

Feedback on music album cover?

Response to: Atheists Posted August 30th, 2013 in General

At 8/30/13 08:23 AM, Earfetish wrote: [locking threads, redirecting to politics]

I think the whole locking threads for being in the wrong forum is a bit dumb. In these times when people complain about there not being enough interesting threads, you'd think locking threads that could potentially lead to some interesting discussion, would be a bad idea.

Response to: Your plans for the 3-day weekend Posted August 30th, 2013 in General

Gonna see Kaizers Orchestra live tomorrow.
Gonna participate some in this thread sometime during the weekend.
And I'm gonna enjoy the product of my last batch of homebrew.

Response to: Newgrounds Sig Makers Posted August 29th, 2013 in Clubs & Crews

At 8/27/13 02:06 PM, Embr wrote: Thanks, do you happen to know the color code for NG's Forums background?

The NG background is the texture Asandir linked, but the closest colour you get is #100c0d

I remember it as "one-hundred - call of duty"

Not using anti-aliasing will lead to pixely edges (which can be cool in it's own way). If you want smooth edges on your text, or in subtle glows or fading effects, you'll need to mess around a bit.

Since .gif only supports binary transparency, and no gradient inbetween, you'll need to fix the levels of transparency yourself. There's probably multiple ways of doing that, and the most correct techniques would have to take into account that the background is a texture rather than a solid colour.

However, the way I go about it is fairly straight forward. Working in photoshop, after you've readied your document with a transparent background, go File -> "Safe for Web ..." (ctrl+alt+shift+S). Make sure you select file format GIF, check on transparency, and select "#100c0d" as matte.

I think I've went on for longer than I intended with this already. If you've got questions about the technicalities feel free to ask.

Newgrounds Sig Makers

Response to: Welcoming to new users? Posted August 29th, 2013 in General

I guess it has something to do with the kind of people that show up here.

NG being primarily a flash showcase hub, you'll get mindless consumers as well as some creative people looking to make their own stuff. The latter will gather in the creative forums, while the former might find general and video games forum more attractive.

Response to: Romans vs. Aztecs Posted August 29th, 2013 in General

I guess it would depend on how early the combat would take place. If the Aztec can find the Romans right off the bat, the Romans are fucked since the healing bonus jaguars gets can be pretty insane. Now, bare in mind the Romans will most likely go for rapid expansion, so look out for sneaky settlers as you take their last city.

Now, playing as the Romans if you get a good defence going to protect against the inevitable Aztec DoW, and manage to stall it into the classical era, you've got a good shot at fighting back. Efficient use of the legion roads, as well as the added attack strength in both ballistas and legions means you can easily siege back once you've taken care of most of the Aztec units. Three or four ballista shots on a city hits pretty hard, and afterwards the legions can just walk in and puppet/annex!

Romans vs. Aztecs

Response to: Since reality is illusion so... Posted August 28th, 2013 in General

At 8/28/13 04:25 PM, Havegum wrote: Psychoactive drugs might affect your perception temporarily

Admittedly, I don't know very much about the subject, and the general tone of the thread seems to suggest there can be permanent changes to way of thought. I don't know if that's for better or worse, but eh.

Either way, if you're looking to break down your perception of reality, or get to the bottom of your illusion, I'd suggest reading psychology related literature. Hypnosis could possibly help if you're looking for something specific, but I suppose finding people or resources for that can be a bit tricky, and sources may or may not be dubious.

Response to: Since reality is illusion so... Posted August 28th, 2013 in General

At 8/28/13 03:05 PM, Nonako wrote: If using drugs helps me to see, to hear, to feel what I always want, I would use it

If you're looking for an excuse to yourself to use drugs, this is not a particularly good one.

Your perception is your reality. If your perception is based on an illusion, it's still your reality. Psychoactive drugs might affect your perception temporarily, but may not be a healthy endeavour in terms of literal health and eventual run-ins with the law.

Response to: Since reality is illusion so... Posted August 28th, 2013 in General

The question is, even if reality turns out to be an illusion; So what?
Your perception of reality won't change, and everything you feel and perceive is very real in that sense.

I don't know where you got "Reality is an illusion" from, but does it really matter either way?

Response to: Save Tom Fulp! Posted August 28th, 2013 in General

Easy, just hide him behind all these posts complaining about the thread!

Save Tom Fulp!

Response to: What is NG listening to? Posted August 28th, 2013 in General

Stacey Kent - Les Eaux de mars (Águas de Março (Waters of March))

Beautiful voice, beautiful song, beautiful language.

What is NG listening to?

Response to: What is your homepage? Posted August 28th, 2013 in General

NG General BBS, Reddit.

Response to: What if threads could be blammed? Posted August 27th, 2013 in General

It'll pass judgement after about four weeks!