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At 10/30/08 07:31 PM, PeterSatera wrote: lol. Pity on anyone who actually attempts to give constructive crits here. You'll get slated for saying anything against anybody.

Not necessarily. You shouldve tried a different approach.

And Gwan I don't need to show any artwork to justify my comment, whether im crap or good it's still a valid point. Why not try improve dramatically on your piece Hammi? Like really work into a great piece of art. From start to finish, sketch to final colour concept. You have the talent afterall.

You would reflect the point better if you had any artwork to showcase, otherwise we have no choice but to believe that youre just presenting a point without having any past time experience to base off from. Improve dramatically? I think you mean drastically. Well i sure wish i could but a drastic change would require my absolute full time. Which would mean i would have to imprison myself in my own house... as if the house wasnt enough stressful for me. And when it comes to working on a single piece every day... ive just started doing it so, ill see what i can be able to pull off in that tempo. Just hope it wont make me go crazy. And you are one of many who enter this thread eventually saying that i got talent. Should i really take the word on it? Anyway thanks :)

Like...That froggi guy was cool, you should have finished it, coloured it in, make it look sh*t-hot. U'know?

Yeah i guess so... i would love to. Well its gonna take its sweet time. Right now im aiming at taking my skills up a higher notch. Maybe some another time. Thanks for encouraging :)

At 10/29/08 09:18 PM, PeterSatera wrote: Is it just me or does it seem like you are churning this stuff out because you want the thread to continue?

Fine.

Lets lock this thread, and throw the keys away and im off.

There happy now?

Why don't you make a concept that takes you 5 Hours instead on 30mins?

Because i dont have that much time. Also because i suck.

The art is not bad, but I have a feeling if you really worked at it you could have produced one really great piece of art which people go' wow' at in the time y ou have created alot of okay pieces.

Oh silly me... i shouldve thought of that. Im sorry that my artwork isnt any near of pleasing you guys. Shame on me. Im too incompetent.

At 10/29/08 08:53 PM, g-kwan155 wrote: ha ha I love this drawing it's funny.

Hehe thanks :D

I'd have to say you've hit that digimon guy head on.

What do you mean by that?

I like your art too. It's pretty good. Do you have a DA account?

Thanksss. This is starting to get exciting.

Just follow my sig, and itll take you there :)

fffff.

I forgot.

Cropped: 3 votes

Uncropped: 2

Anyone else before i make a final decision?

At 10/28/08 09:48 PM, MegaMelmo wrote: I like the first one better. Nice drawing by the way.

Thanks.

At 10/29/08 07:00 AM, Chymo wrote: Haha, good 'ol Hammi =P
The first one looks better in my opinion. I dunno what else to say about it. Hey if you wanted, I could ink it for you.

Well thanks, but no thanks. Its cool. Thanks for the offer though :)

At 10/29/08 12:40 PM, Fatchaos wrote: This one's better, and might I say, that looks good! Acctually, in a way, I kinda get that odd, amusing karaoke feel in it, I dont rightly know how & why, but I like it.

Awesome. Thanks Phat.

Good work!

Thanks!

And glad to see you guys are all safe & sound & something.

Yeah i guess we are... and welcome back. Nice of you to drop by for a while.

At 10/28/08 09:08 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: it's because you don't constantly pound the living shit outa people with her....

Well maybe i should start doing it from now on. After 2 years of break from drawing her... i will take my throne back. >:)

I'm sure there's some people who want to beat the shit outa me for drawing her soooo much

Dont deny it, you know they love ya

YIFF CRAZE

yes... yes we know

at least me, princeflea, Fatchaos, and hellknight know better..... you dirty renamon fan XD

;]

and you didn't take my comments seriously before??? <:(

Thats because i used to doubt on almost EVERYBODY around me, including myself. But now things are starting to loosen up. Nuffin but luv... and whole lot of ass whooping.

XD... nah, I'm pulling you leg

your welcome : )

:)

Lmao.... it back-fired XD

dont you just hate it when aslhgjghj

I knew what it was right on the spot..... but I guess some have never seen a mic like that

I guess so... people watch too many cartoons. ITS NOT A DILDO PEOPLE. GODDAMN IT.

hey, Np ; )

I would love to submit the raw sketch, but right now im out of time. :O

Good night!

At 10/28/08 08:30 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: but theyz was attacking my renamon XP

...

in that case

DIAMOND STORM

DIAMOND STORM........ you earned 15 Exp points XD

Btw ive only played Battle Spirit 1 & 2 on GBA. :o

OF COURSE ITS GEKOMON

sorry, I haven't seen one in over 6 years ROFL XD

You... RENA FREAK. Wait, im a rena freak too but PEOPLE JUST DONT SEE IT ASHFGHJKFAJH

i hate them

well, it sure as hell worked

* gives you a pat on the back *

Great :D

the way you hatch / Cross-hatch is like something right out of many manga's I've seen. Not to mention clean lines ( I don't think I see any stray marks ).

You know, for once i actually take your feedback seriously because ive never heard anyone saying this to me before. Thank you, im very pleased with this defining post. Its making a good deal of impact on me :)

not necessarly, you just .. " over-detailed it "

That, and probably most of us are use to the mic with a head, sphere-looking head.

Hm... yeah probably that. I actually dropped the idea about a round mic in the first place. Now people cant even see what its supposed to be. F

Thanks for the tip though :)

At 10/28/08 08:00 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: Lmao

holy crap, I haven't seen one of these in years.. ahhh the memories of slaughtering hundreds of them in Digimon world 3

why you

I will say, that's exactly how I remembered them. ( it looks just like em. Maybe alittle different due to your style, but it still looks just like Gekomon [ it is gekomon.... isn't it? )

OF COURSE ITS GEKOMON

it also looks very " completed " with the background of the audio line ( or whatever it's called )

I wanted a concept that would show gekomons musical ties, made in a very simple but comforting way.

It seems like something right out of a manga book ( minus the dialouge XD )

Excellent job ;)

Are you serious? Manga book? Thanks Scorp, im glad you liked it :D Well the mic on the other hand...

At 10/28/08 08:03 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: It's a microphone..... or at least, that's what I assumed ( the detail is so small, it makes it hard to tell )

It means that i fucked up, again. I cant even draw a friggin mic properly. f oh well.

oops... I forgot

I personally agree with Hellknight, the un-cropped one looks better

Ok, 2 votes so far. Anyone else?

At 10/28/08 08:04 PM, Drakenyaze wrote: haha that thing is wicked good job i loved it

happy face............. :D

:D

Thank you, you even love it and all... didnt expect that.

At 10/28/08 07:50 PM, Hellknight1000 wrote: I hope I get a smile...lol XP

I always keep my word :)

:D

This one's sweet! :D I like the pose and the face you gave the character. Looking good!

Thanks! Good to know. :)

Err...I think I like the uncropped one a little better. It's really hard to choose to be honest! XD

Hm yeah maybe youre right. Well, thats one vote. Thanks.

Well, I like it! I'm just curious as to what he's holding. What is that?

Its a mic. :\

And heres the uncropped one. And please do leave comments and i will kindly respond back with a smile. Or, be a gayass about it and ignore it. In that case, fuck you.

People, i need your help. I am really conflicted with myself right now. This pic that ive made here got 2 different resolutions. Im not sure anymore which one looks better.

Heres the first one. (cropped)

At 10/27/08 02:41 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: hmm... so far... it's pretty dark actually... but It'll probably brightin up when I get to the bottom

and it's quite odd too.... the way I paint.... actually looks like pastel X_ X

Almost sounds like something acrylics would do. Acrylics are fun soon as you know how to use them and how to overlap with them.

anyway, so what exactly do you want for your pic? ( please don't say " supprise me " XD )

You know, ive been thinking... hard. And... i accept your unfinished piece as the one. Even though its relying on an existing concept, it still reflects all the things that ive gone through. What you mentioned. Freedom from a constricting past, a new sign of hope, for a brighter future, risen from the dark. Not least, you took your time to make the pic just for me without any other purposes and thats what really means a lot to me.

As for the existing request you owe me, ill get back to you later about it. Sorry about back there, you must be really confused right now why i suddenly changed my mind. It was just wrong of me to turn something you personally made for me into a request. :( Sorry. I hope it isnt too late!

At 10/27/08 08:03 AM, ScorpianX0 wrote: Of course..... Painting class calls for another painting XD

I have a feeling you had a grin on your face when that day came

so this time I decided to do some sort of underwater sceane....

I've already started the painting, and I've made a couple of changes, but it's basically gonna look something like this.

Interesting.

Im sure you will turn it into a marvelous piece. Like that doodle you painted over, with nice and bright contrasts. Well, ill just have to wait and see.

At 10/26/08 09:15 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: I know, but I've already gone over the lines in Dark graphite too.... which will leave a nasty smudge

Oh, well in that case. I know how smudgy they can get. Especially 4B.

< : (

errr.... I'm feeling like a bastard again........

now finishing seems more of a waste now........ its lost it's purpose if the one I'm making it for doesn't like the concept of it.....

there's no point to it now, even if the others want it finished.........

!

Ugh, dont be silly. I mean come on, you were supposed to take it a level higher and now youre dumping this because... ok so i didnt like the approach of having a 2 in 1 concept but, i thought you were doing this to get better. How can it be a waste when youve already demonstrated your improvements? THIS SHOULD ALSO BE YOUR BOOKMARK OF IMPROVEMENTS. And i seriously like this pic, and i dont think you should stop. Even though its not completely reflecting me as a person/artist, discontinuing this would disappoint me even more because it was turning out so good.

ff

You know what

im the bastard here. You know why? Because i told you to surprise me. And i never thought you would make an approach like this when you said different. And here i am knocking you down >:/ So... could i make this into a request instead (remember you promised me one if i did a rena pic :P)? Do my dedication later when you feel like you got time. Or, you could drop it if you dont want to do it anymore since i stepped on your expectations... :\

At 10/26/08 07:49 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: heh, thank you

HEH no problem

Lmao.... not really.... I just made sure they all seemed the same size, and I gave them a metallic look

asfggsadadfjhkkkkkkkkk

Lmao......

Youre starting to like that word dont you

but I do see what you're talking about.... and I don't think I can fix it...( The lines for that part are nearby the right arm which is already colored, and as you already know, you can erase colored pencil )

if you erase right on the line, yes. Carefully rub the eraser sideways as you move up on the lines. Be cautious.

I was, but that was at the moment where I stopped : /

hmmm.... ok, I'll be sure to touch up those areas if I can

DONT MAKE IT TOO GOOD

you know... you're right ..... I can make this work..

thanks Hammi

YOU GOT THE POWER

both..

riiiiiiiiiiiiiight

it's a follow up of closer, AND!........ it's for you

oh really

it symbolizes freedom from a constricting past ( Chains are no longer bound to her, as you can see )

And ( when I add the back-ground ) A new sign of hope, for a brighter future ( Light was gonna be shining down, + the butterflys from the last one)

I see...

so yeah, it's both.... is that ok?

Sorry but im not satisfied with this concept. Its already depending on a past one from before and therefore i have no part in it whatsoever. It would almost be the same as if i randomly drew renamon and made it a dedication to you, without reflecting the thought behind it. Maybe the ideas "connect", but itll always be seen at only as a successor of your previous pic.

Just finish up your test pic and move on.

Goddamn Scorp, that really is an improvement from Closer. I love the face, and the way you draw the chains (have you been studying chains a lot?).

Im just a lil bit tiny skeptic about how her right thigh is starting off. That "white" area of hers shouldnt take too much space. Let the thigh have some elbow space, if i have to put it metaphorically. Give it a good grip on her lower body. And thin the white area out as it lines downwards her... vaginal area lmao SHE DOESNT HAVE A VAGINA PEOPLE OK BAAAAAAH. And that exit hole of her left glove (where the hand sticks out of), you should give it some more depth.

I suggest you keep on working on it. From my experience, even if you make mistakes... you should rather try pushing on and just continue working on the same piece. Shape it up from where the mistakes happened. Take advantage of the mistakes, improvise it to make it look better. Wash it off. But, if youve really tried and youre really stuck... then you might consider scrapping it.

But this one... im seeing really good achievements waiting to be pulled off with it. Dont give up quite yet.

Btw is this a follow up of Closer? I thought you were doing A PIC FOR ME. >:V

dot dot dot dot dot

SPONGEBOB!!!

fff

At 10/26/08 03:53 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: please don't bring that back up.....

Sorry. Whenever theres talk about doodles these days, i cant help it but getting super sarcastic about it and you already know why. Soz.

Another link to Hammi? :O

heh.. thanks

Frightening but true. Thats why i got your back. :)

And I do the same for you...

looks like we both will have our hands full with trying to get better.... if not already

This is gonna be an epic cinematic thriller, starring Scorp and Hammi in: DOUBLE DRAGON

ok ew that movie sucked, fuck that shit

anyways yeah, best of luck man. Keep it real, and give everything.

At 10/26/08 03:24 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: I failed at Spiderman..... it seems about right that I failed on Venom as well.......

If you guys think other wise.... idk, I might shade it

I already know, Proportion is mostly what killed it....... or that's what I think

Thats not really bad. But it looks rather unfinished. Doodle?

If there was something i would point out, it would be his... thighs. A bit too enormous dont you think? OH WELL SILLY ME ITS JUST A DOODLE ANYWAY, IT NEEDS SOME OF THAT HOME-MADE QUALITY DONT CHA THINK

Other than that, i really like the fang details and that slippery tongue. The line style in this drawing reminds me a bit of myself back a year ago. Good nonetheless. I look forward to see your new level.

At 10/26/08 03:12 PM, ScorpianX0 wrote: * sigh * < : /

Why does it have to be me.......

Thats because youve been submitting a lot of rena drawings for the past months since you joined (making you the rena star and the most rena related around here), a ton more than ive ever done in 2 years lmao.

ILL CATCH UP TO YA OH JUST YOU WAIT

At 10/26/08 01:56 PM, Hellknight1000 wrote: New post! And it's RENAMON! OMFG HELLKNIGHT1000 DREW RENAMON! XD
Yes I did, and it's because of me drawing for the ArtRap on ScorpianX0's style. After that, this idea just ... ... ... clicked.
Had to toss about three tries before getting the pose right. I think it turned out pretty good.

Well this is certainly interesting.

Coloring pencils? Looking pretty cool.

Although, her knees are quite... not on the same level in consistency. Cause it seems like shes taking a step forward with her left leg, and that knee isnt quite getting along with the other knee in terms of perspective. In short, you need to adjust her knee caps. Also her arms are a bit long. Try picturing her elbow point reaching to the end of her ribcase before you draw the rest of her arm. Even though youve succeeded in doing that with her left arm, the other half part of her arm is still too long.

And i gotta say, thats some really awesome shading youve done there :) I can really see the depths here. Keep it up.

Oh yeah you do know that, SCORPIANX0 ISNT THE ONLY OBSESSIVE RENAMON FAN HERE YOU FFF STOP GIVING HIM ALL THE CREDIT ASDJHGAFSKJG

At 10/24/08 09:02 PM, Badgerattack wrote:

At 10/24/08 09:00 PM, ZiggyZack99 wrote: The GIMP, free software.

Will try it :'D thanks

You were nervous for a minute there werent you

anyway this is a breach of the rules, so if i was you, i wouldve made a search on the forum instead of making a topic.

Youre also lucky. I couldve been in a shitty mood :)

At 10/24/08 06:18 PM, Chymo wrote: Sorry Hammi. =[

Lmao its quite alright Chymo, the best moments you share with someone is when you get wasted. Your post touched me.

Hey Tom um

a friend of mine linked you to Charlie & the LOL Factory and School Fool at last years treasure hunt

how come you never saw them asflknaglnm

oh yeah, HIS NAME WAS FUNKYSKULL/WASIM

GO AND APOLOGIZE YOU MEANIE

At 10/24/08 04:45 PM, Cereal wrote: Pretty bad ass

Ooooooh

lovely walking pose, dat zombie got style

Its been a mighty long time since ive seen this thread :o

At 10/24/08 08:26 AM, Chymo wrote: Yeah man, of course we're cool =]. I'm not one to take a grudge. I understand that it may of seemed like I was having a go at you, and that I was trying to stir shit up. I'm sorry for causing confusion. It's good to hear that your coming through it ok. I look forward to your forum rape, my ass is truly yours ;P

Lmfaoo

i think i got a long way to go before i can rape your ass. Ive seen your bitey pics, and those are pretty impressive. Very nifty sketches too and good lines. You got a solid style goin on. Keep it up good sir. :)

Its pretty obvious what people would do with me

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