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At 5/7/11 04:32 PM, Kay-Cee wrote: Critique is welcomed greatly!

First thing I gotta say is that I like that background you got going there, as for the wolf? I like how some of the hair looks realistic, but the other hair kinda looks like scribbles. Also props for the wolf goatee.

At 5/7/11 07:45 AM, Flowers10 wrote: k but stop whining

the jaw is to small, the eyes/nose/mouth need to be lower, and the shoulders are kinda small.

Your welcome

Thank you for an actual critique, I haven't had one in a while, I'll be sure to practice at facial structure.

:Obviously your level of patience is very minimal (as you can tell from the fact that your begging for constructive criticism)

I had a thread previous to this one in which I poster art for almost a year and had a small amount of actual critiques, so forgive me if I seem impatient, and I didn't mean to beg but having it seem like no one even looks at what you draw can have an effect on you.

:all your pieces look completely rushed

I don't mean for them to look rushed, but most of my drawings I take about an hour on in school, so it's not the best environment for specifically drawing.

At 5/6/11 08:50 PM, GMoose14 wrote: Is it possible for me to request one of the mods to lock this thread?

If so I would like to politely request one of said Mods to please lock my thread. Thank you.

Is it possible for me to request one of the mods to lock this thread?

At 5/6/11 12:19 AM, GMoose14 wrote:

At 5/2/11 08:10 PM, GMoose14 wrote: *sigh*

So, umm I've been wondering if perhaps just this once I could get a critique on the above drawing?

Pretty Please?

At 5/2/11 08:10 PM, GMoose14 wrote: *sigh*

So, umm I've been wondering if perhaps just this once I could get a critique on the above drawing?

*sigh*

Exactly what i was goin for Funkay!

Duznt even matter

Stuped

Screw this

Feel Tha POWAAH!!

Also any constructive criticism would be a welcome addition.

Did this in about 15-30 mins not exactly sure on the time.

At 4/24/11 01:02 PM, Breaktroll wrote: That is the longest mullet I have EVER seen!!

Also, the folds seem kinda randomly placed.

Yeah, like 3 of them were which offset the rest but i couldn't fix it since I was using a pen.

At 4/24/11 04:42 AM, ImpendingRiot wrote: Point blank, you need anatomy practice. It's cool that you're designing weapons and what not for a story, and the weapons look okay.

But what's going to happen is you're going to have pages and pages of weapons and when it comes time to draw people using them, you're going to have bad results.

http://bbsimg.ngfiles.com/14/22604000/ng bbs4d8acc5b9301d.jpg

Not to over-analyze this, but this drawing says a lot about where you're at as an artist. You're doing a lot to compensate for what (I think) you're not comfortable with. Baggy clothing, baggy pants, and faceless. Everything to avoid the need for convincing anatomy.

You're continuing to draw monsters and creatures and weapons. I'm not discouraging that. By all means draw what you like. BUT you NEED to draw what you're uncomfortable with too. And post the results. You might get people mocking it or insulting it, but that's okay because it doesn't matter. Just keep trying.

Right now you're avoiding.

Oh yeah, umm i drew that near the beginning of the school year and found it in my old sketchbook so i thought I'd post it, here's one of my newer drawings, but its still not very good. I still need tons of practice.

Oh! the guy from Rugrats, does my drawing really look like that?

At 4/21/11 03:27 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:

At 4/14/11 06:44 PM, GMoose14 wrote: RAWR! To everyone, I wasn't online for a while since Finals are coming up and I've been busy.

Hey look, it's Reptar.

Who's Reptar?

Man, I just love being the only one posting in this thread, really feelin the love. Anyways heres a lightsaber i drew for myself in history class.

Its the attack of the sea serpent!!!

RAWR! To everyone, I wasn't online for a while since Finals are coming up and I've been busy.

I've started coloring the drawing that I posted first, hopefully it won't take too long.

Wow, you just bumped a really old thread...

I made this as an avatar for one of my online accounts, what do you guys think?

Well this guy controls gravity(hence the black hole next to him...), which essentially means that he can also control the density of objects at will. So that sword is like a paperclip to him.

Oh and this here is a concept design for a shape shifting weapon.

Also here's a character for one of the stories I've been working on.

Here's an ant that I drew, in case anyone's wondering I based it off the Saharan Silver Ant.

Hi! Can you please draw a zombie fighting off hordes of humans?

I'm not entirely sure what you mean...

Anyways here's a phoenix that I drew.

As you can tell it's a bit draconian in nature but that's just how I felt like drawing it.

I'm actually surprised I still have this, but I remember posting a bad copy of it before, so here's the original.
I call it The Siege of Metrina

I SEE YOU!

not really

Here's a sketch I did in class with a pen.