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...And here is the second page.ok,i realized that the first page came out worse than i thought it would,so i'll write what the characters are saying on both pages.

Page 1

Caption:On the Pikmin planet...
Olimar:Hey!i just thought of a way to increase my life support system!
Olimar:Hmm....
Blue Pikmin:Hey!Master is dead!
Yellow Pikmin:How?
Blue Pikmin:His life support was set to one nanosecond.
Yellow Pikmin:Quick!Lets get him to the onions!

Page 2

Pikmin:Puff.
Blue Pikmin:Hey!Your not meant to be here until Pikmin 2!
Louie:Aww...
Red Pikmin:Yay!He's one of us!
Blue Pikmin:So,uh...how do we get him out?
Yellow Pikmin:You just pull this...
Red Pikmin:Uh...
Yellow Pikmin:Oh crap!
Red Pikmin:Idiot...
Blue Pikmin:Look what i found in the grass!Nector...beer.
Caption:PARTY!!!
Caption:And so the Pikmin partied,but incidently got killed...

hope that helps.

Hey guys!I gave it some thought,and i decided to scan one of my comics and post it here on the forums!as some of you may know,im a fan of Pikmin,and so i did a comic about it!(i did this comic a few months back.)i realize its a little hard to read in places,because my scanner messed it up a little.also,there are a few things you may not get if you have never played the game,such as a joke i included later in the comic.anyway,here is the first page...

At 4/22/09 11:09 AM, flash-ninja1 wrote: i might start putting some artwork into my favourite topic (this one) :D
but ive never drawn anything on paint anymore complicated than a stick figure.
can anyone give me some pointers? cos i can draw pretty well with my hand.

Great!it'll be cool if you also contriute to this.seeing you said you draw better with your hand,(i do too,but im good free-hand too.)then perhaps if you have a scanner you could scan some of your hand-drawings.if you can't,then i suuggest you practice with a drawing proggramme on your computer.^^

Here are the things i do when i get frustated at a game:

*Swear alot.
*Throw my controller on the floor.
*Punch my controller.
*Stamp the floor.
*Swear somemore.

Which then my sister would come in and get all angry with me and turn my game off,making me more pissed...>:(

At 4/21/09 02:59 PM, threadwood wrote:

At 4/21/09 11:19 AM, Deadclever23 wrote: ...I mean comics aren't really art...

SO wrong.

Seconded.comics ARE art.they can be in multiple ways too,in either having a great storyline,or just having great artwork.(or both!)

At 4/21/09 03:09 PM, fishboy121 wrote: and lo' god diddeth get bored with the generic sonic rip off
and lo' he doth squasheth the orange dude with his mighty fist
and it was good

The thing with the beeguy,(Jamesb1995)is not the orange sonic the hedgehog rip-off.i was the guy who drew him,aswell as the orange thing with Jamesb.(her name is Spii.)The Sonic thing was delibrately meant to be that way,as it was a joke i did.he was only a minor character,and has now disapeared from the whole thing.but by that,i hate recolors.

At 4/21/09 12:12 PM, flash-ninja1 wrote: let's see.....
we have the big black guy looking for his kitty (wtf with him? hes scary D:)
we have zoid i think was his name.....
we have the construction workers. we have that marshmallow guy. we have that bee guy.
we also have the guy with black hair and his pokemon.
that canada women and indian man.

did i miss anything? didnt include names, would have taken me forever going through it for all of them.

(edit) i forgot the contruction workers, the french terrorists, the guy in the tower and the guy with the 2 guns.

You forgot my other character Spii,(the cute Pokemon/Digimon-like thing that is orange and looks a little like a combination between a fox and a cat.)and Maximus,the villian guy the Peanutman27 did.(the one with the huge yellow head,and a tiny body that has a gaint robot later in the story,and then dies shortly afterwards.)

At 4/20/09 03:00 PM, idiot-monarch wrote: It's not often that a person gets worse as time goes by :/

Dude,thats harsh!if you ask me,i think these drawings are decent.

anyway,i notice a diffrence between the two,but i'd say i think the second one is better.i can see the improvement,even though they are two diffrent styles.

Well,the joke was pretty good.made me laugh a little bit.the artwork was incredibly simple.however,i liked the background,as its like a piece of lined paper.i hate comics without backgrounds,so i thought the background was good.(i always include backgrounds in my comics.)So,i thought it wasn't too bad.keep going,and keep practicing,because you'll gradually get better,even if you dont notice it at first. ;)

At 4/21/09 11:20 AM, idiot-monarch wrote:

There are too many uninteresting characters. If I were you guys, I wouldn't add anyone else and work with the characters you got.

If you look at page one of this thread you'll notice that there were about 5 characters everyone worked with, and each drawing progressed the story significantly.

I'll piss off now, since, like you said, I shouldn't really post if I don't like the thread. It's just a shame that such a brilliant thread (where mah kitty, construction zone etc.) went to hell so quickly.

Yeah.Im not adding anymore characters to this,and i'll admit that Boxman,(as some people have known him,or my freind says he is "muscle Spongebob.")Aka:Lightrin,is maybe a basic character who isn't as interesting as some others,not how he is drawn,more with the character himself,seeing he doesn't show much personnality.

but anyway,im keeping in mind about the level of characters,and like i said before,i will only use Lightrin and Spii.

At 4/20/09 05:16 PM, Zelldoom wrote:

At 4/20/09 03:34 PM, idiot-monarch wrote: I fucking hate how all of these threads start out really fun with lots of cool participants, and then gets hijacked by some unfunny ten year old assholes with their Pokemon drawings, and make the story so bland that they're the only ones who enjoy it.

Hey man, Its Not Our and My Fault That all Other Participants Havent Done Anything This Days, Have You conisdering they are Working or studying For exams These Days? Yeah A really good Drawing can Take Hours to Make, Even More than a day. But With school, Jobs, and Homeworks, Makes it Hard to do something For this thread.

For Me man, Im Just an 16 Years Pacifist Guy. Now Im making exams all this week, and I think I can Only Do something at nights, When my mother brings the charger for my laptop, so i can work on a drawing. Im also An Manga and Anime Fan, and one anime i enjoyed in my Childhood Was pokemon, and My first Pokemon was a ralts, i never played any game of pokemon except Sapphire, Im sure you have also Played the Game, and enjoyed Something in your Life.We are all born different Man, im not your clone nor anyone else clone, Please undertand. ;)

Too right.of course,during the easter break i had alot more time to do my pics,but now im back in school,i have less time to do them for this thread,especially when i have some homework.and Idoit-Monarch,if you dont like this thread,then just leave.there is no point of you being here if you just rant about how crap you think this thread is.so yeah,also,to what Flash-Ninja said,i will admit maybe the story is getting a little complicated,seeing as some of the characters have ended up in 2 diffrent groups.but i have an idea to re-unite the characters,so when i get the chance i'll draw the pic.=)

At 4/19/09 06:48 PM, Zelldoom wrote:

Welll, Im Back, I was going to Curch, and I was late By doing this Drawing, I will explain,After Nyu Rescued all The group, It was time To Know where they Were Going to, So Zoidz Went To Find an exit Of that Dark Room, In which Then Finds a Red Button, he Press it and then a Big gate Opens, Revealing Their Location... , They are in the North Atlantic Ocean! (the Ocean Between America and Europe)

Wow, This is really Getting as A world-Tour now, What Next?

Yeah.thats ok.this is really getting thrilling now!

Jamesb1995 and Spii had both flew all the way to the outskirts of Paris.they were both tired from flying that length,and from a message Lightrin had sent Spii on her PDA,he described where they were.(after Nyu rescued them of course.)but little did they know that the rest of the gang were at the north altlantic ocean.incidently,Jamesb1995 and Spii were confused...

At 4/19/09 03:40 AM, dmansland wrote: I got one! Recently I was at a Gamestop and this kid went up to the clerk pon his own and said "Do you have Grand Theft Auto Vice City Stories?"
Dumbass, but it gets better
He then asked "Can you play PSP games on a DS?" Fucking 12 year old

Heh Heh!god,what a dumbass.rofl.

Yeah!i agree with Zelldoom that this thread is awesome,and is getting better and better!

also,Zelldoom,that Pokemon you used is cool.=D

At 4/18/09 04:41 PM, Zoidz wrote: Meanwhile back at Canada, more French terrorist appear and captured the gang and putted them into a truck. (Unfortunatley, the terrorist had to shot Chuck because of his addiction to giving people pancakes. And the black guy was too big, that they had to put him into a special truck.) Tuscarora told them that thses terrorist were offended that Quebec was part of Canada for a very long, and they called themselves as "The French Nazis". Zoid looked down sadly, since his best friend Jamesb was too far away from them, and he hopes that he is surely okay. He also doesn't know where these terrorist are taking him and his new friends.

Meanwhile,Jamesb1995 were still fighting the gaint robot,and they then noticed that their freinds had all been kidnapped by the french terrorists.just as they were going to fly down to react,the robot had grabbed them both in it's claws,and they were unable to escape.the robot then started heading towards the same destination as the trucks their freinds were in.Jamesb1995 and Spii screamed for help,but they were as helpless as the others.

sorry if this is a little rushed,i have to go now so i made this quick.also,tommorow is the last day of my holiday,so when im back in school i won't be online as much,but i should still reguarly be.

All of those drawings are excellent.i especaillt like the brain-tank one.he looks badass.reminds me of one of the drawings i did.=)

anyway,keep it up!

When i was listening to my I-pod,and i changed the song,and when i did it changed to the song i was thinking of at that very moment.(it was on shuffle btw.)

The BBS.i have had alot of lol moments while i have been here.

At 4/18/09 12:21 PM, physicsman09 wrote:
You're doing it wrong, it needs to be larger and more obnoxious.

Like this.

'nuf said.

XD my freind has that pic on his phone.

Holy crap!Your freind takes it all too serious.i don't like anime much at all,but i know some guy who i used to be freinds with at school who is obbsessed with a bunch of animes that nobody has ever heard of.and he also spends his whole life on Youtube.he acts like a total asshole,and he once said to me i don't do anything worthwhile.well,look who is talking! i have a life.he doesn't.then at school there is a bunch of Naruto fan girls and Naruto fan boys.(well,mostly fan girls.)they call each other the names of the characters,and they come in wearing the head bands.0_o

At 4/18/09 11:03 AM, Matt2k8 wrote:

Thats a decent one for Ms Paint, good job.

Like my mothers IPod Touch :3

Thanks!i have an I-pod Touch,so i felt like drawing one.

Yep.i saw the flash when it was under-judgement.i clearly noticed the clips were from MC9,and i highly doubt Krinkels himself would do that.

Well,here is one i just did on MS Paint.i tryed to make it look decent,and its kinda meant to look more cartoony than realistic,which is what i genrally focus on.anyway,here it is,and its meant to be an I-pod Touch.

Here is a game that is underrated:

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  Phrozenflame RPG by Blackan

  Click to view.

  Type

  Game

  Rated

  Ages 13+

and here is another flash i think is overrated:

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  Narwhals by TheWeebl

  Click to view.

  Type

  Movie

  Rated

  Ages 13+

I heard in some movie called Ben Hur(i think that's it.)that is a film set around the time of the romans.apparently,there was a chariot scene,and during it a small red car could be seen in the background.

Well,if you ask me,i think the International Moron Patrol cartoons by Roger are extremely underrated. they have good artwork,(which was part of my inspiration for my cartoon style.)great humour and good animation.(well,the animation isn't too good in the earlier episodes,but it improves in later episodes.)

I think Portal Defenders is very overrated.its a good game and all,but have you seen how long it has been on front page?such a long time...but its still a good game.

At 4/17/09 03:37 PM, Zelldoom wrote:
Well Everythong Going Well On this Story, But I Think there Must Be a Limit Of Characters For each Account, Because Everyone Will be adding More Characters and Will take More time and Effort to do them. For Me, It Will be Well 3 characters Per account.

But of Course It depends on Zoids Decision

I agree.im not going to add anymore characters,as the only characters i'll be using are Lightrin and Spii.and yeah,it does take time to draw characters,so its best to keep it to a set limit.

At 4/17/09 12:38 PM, Zoidz wrote: If anyone wants to make a signature for this thread, feel free. It's always good to have an advertisement.

Anyways, not only did the French terrorist, Jacques, had a colorful tank. He also send in a flying machine which was made in Quebec, to kill the gang. To Lighthrin's surprised, he saw the same man who was near the 4th Street street lamp, in that machine.

Yeah.im going to put in my sig,as i love this thread,and it needs more people like us.

anyway,Spii and Jamesb1995 were able to fly,both having wings,so they flew towards the flying robot,ready to intercept.

At 4/17/09 10:26 AM, Zoidz wrote: Wow, now that's how you use MS Paint.

Also...200th Post. :P

Yep.im guessing Zeldoom used a tablet.tablets are a million times better than drawing free-hand.

At 4/17/09 06:04 AM, Zelldoom wrote: Well My second Submition Added Decter 300 Character Sonic, Wellm This time was made on Paint , because My Mother forgot to bring her Charger for My laptop and I couldnt Use Flash, So i only stayed with Paint,

Very good job!here is the continued picture...lol