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At 4/28/09 02:31 PM, Jin wrote: So far it seems like something that belongs to a children storybook. Simple drawings, simple storyline. That's not bad. There are too many comics out there trying too hard to be funny.

You have to improve your handwriting.

Thanks!yeah,i was kinda experimenting a little with my cartoon style,so it looked a little simpler.when i draw backgrounds of inside rooms of buildings,(as you would have gavered in this comic,there are none.)but i draw the backgrounds simpler.
i was trying not to make this comic try too hard to be funny,like you stated.part of this comic was a request by a freind of mine,who is as much a big fan of Pikmin i am.(my freinds like reading my comics.)as for what you said about the storyline,i wasn't really planning to make it complicated,although some of my other comics,such as my series RiRiRi have more complicated storylines.

the handwriting?well,parts of this comic were a little rushed,and it actually took me a lot longer than i thought,as i was quite busy at the time.

but thanks anyway!=)

Page 4...

Page 3...

and here is the second one.i'll upload the other pages later. =D

Ok,like i said,i cut the panels out and pasted them onto another paint.you should be able to read it now!(if you can't,i dont know what will lol.)

These drawings are very good.i especcially like the Robot guy,he reminds me a little of Nemosis,a character from my comic series RiRiRi.

At 4/27/09 12:42 PM, KittyKat87 wrote: Too hard to read. And why is the name of the person it's drawn and written by blacked out? Also, the artwork could use some work.

I understand what you are saying.yes,i know its hard to read,but hopefully tommorow i can cut out the panels of the comic and place them on another paint.as for the fact the person its written and drawn by,i blacked it out because i dont want people knowing my full name.(hell,im 12 years old.)and yes,the artwork could use a little work,but i did say i wrote this a while back,and i have improved a little.(i improve quite quickly,i practice alot.)if there is anything you would like to say about how i could improve the artwork,then please do so,as i appreciate advice.=)

first the crown,then the shit and then the thumbs up.

The ending to Earthworm Jim 3D where as Jim walks to the exit,he randomly gets crushed by a fridge.XD

Hey guys,at some point im gonna scan another one of my comics to post here.i'll try and make sure it wont come out pixellated.=)

in the meantime,here is a random pic.

At 4/27/09 01:06 AM, masterchef56 wrote: Good Lord, make this a flash movie. This is incredible.

Fortunatly my freind,as far as i know,Flatthead is on the case!not sure when it'll be done though,he said he's working on other projects.

At 4/12/09 08:05 PM, portalwarpedJP wrote: sirtom93 related:

not again...

Rig has a mustache?!

Here is another one i did.i put a little less time into this compared to my other MS Paint pics,but here it is anyway.

it is of Captain Olimar from Pikmin,(as you probably will have gavered.)and for some reason he's strangling a Blue Pikmin...XD

At 4/18/09 11:56 AM, psychicpebble wrote: What if the person who created this thread is an alt? How don't I know if all of you aren't all imposters, how do know if Krinkles is actually TomFulp, DanPaladin,Stamper,bob, and the rest of the newgrounds staff, and running newgrounds all together!?....

Yeah,but did you know Jerry Jackson is actually David Firth?

"...@_@;" Thats was my reaction when i found that he really was Jerry Jackson...

I really know i mention alot about Rayman and Pikmin,but hell,i really like one of the songs in Pikmin 2.The music in the hole of heroes,which is on sublevel 6 were there is a small lake with water enemies such as Wollywogs,Water Dumples and Hermit Cramads.

Well,i have came across some cheap games in the past.i got Donkey Konga and the bongos for £10 at my local game shop.(yeah,and it was new.)

Platformers.Too bad there aren't many decent ones today,as they are obselete to a FPS and graphics obssesed world.='(

I dont think i remember a PC version of it being released,but i think you may be confused with GBA version.you said the PC version was only released in Europe,but there was a GBA version only released in Europe,and not in America.

I like it,looks kinda like a demonic dragon thingy.

At 4/22/09 04:07 AM, CypressDahlia wrote: moar stuff~

Cypress,you are an artist man!!!that is possibly one of the most amazing pictures on MS Paint i have seen in my life!your pictures are brilliant,and are the best in this thread!you rock dude!=)

Ok.here is one i drew on MS Paint.i drew it freehand,and i spent time on it.i would have spent even more time on the picture,but im in a bit of a rush at the moment.anyway,its meant to look cartoony,and as you probably gavered,the dragon on the right is robotic.^_^

Draw An unrealisticly fat man wearing a hockeymask,and holding a chainsaw in one hand,with a cheeseburger hat looks like a grenade in the other.(please don't ask,i always think up random ideas...)

Looks very good,it has the atmosphere you'd expect in somewhere cold.

At 4/23/09 11:06 AM, JoeTheToucan wrote:
What I mean is, it's as bad as doing a sonic fanfic. You haven't made the characters, and they're best left to the original creators. Rather than spoofing other's work, you'd be better to develop your own humour along with your own characters/concepts, otherwise people won't be interested in your stuff for seeing it all before.

Well,i have my own concepts and characters actually,and i have wrote about at least 6 series in the past,which were all my own ideas.(with the majority have inspiration of certain videogames/cartoons etc.)

This comic i wrote here is not part of one of my series,as it was actually just a comic i wrote when i had recently got Pikmin 2.and yeah,as you said about the humour,i have developed some of my own humour,and in this comic a couple of the jokes were actually based off somethings from the game.(i.e:Pikmin going through grass to find nectar.)but still,i see what you meant.

At 4/23/09 11:04 AM, Dexter3000 wrote: Ok.guys,i have altered it and hopefully you'll be able to understand my comic better now.if i scan more of my comics in future,i'll make sure they dont look bad.

And here is the second page.=)
if you can understand it now,please can you tell me what i can improve on?i'll appreciate it.=)

Ok.guys,i have altered it and hopefully you'll be able to understand my comic better now.if i scan more of my comics in future,i'll make sure they dont look bad.

Also,i have a had a few people say this comic is a rip-off of Pikmin.for the love of god,its not a rip-off! sure,its a parody of the Pikmin game,but that doesn't make it a rip-off.if it was a rip-off i would have drew the characters and gave them diffrent names and stuff.whcih i didn't,and i wouldn't do that ever.

Anyway,hope you understand it better this time:

At 4/22/09 04:52 PM, JoeTheToucan wrote: Please try to be original, there's really enough character- taking shitflickers 'round here.#

Hey!!!

i didn't steal anyone's characters!this comic is a spoof of the game Pikmin.it has characters from the game in it,but of course i haven't claimed them as my own characters.

Thats a good drawing!lol i used to love that show when i was younger,along with Dexter's Laboratory and Ed,Edd,and Eddy.

At 4/22/09 02:27 PM, GreenFury wrote: Sorry about breaking the rules before :(
i spent more time on it this time :)

Seeing that everyone felt the air-ship stop,Lightrin decided to go to the roof of it to check out what happened,only to find the creature in the sea...

At 4/22/09 02:01 PM, FullFistMaria wrote: Any chance you could link to bigger ones?Its really hard to see.The first one is illegible and the reading the writing then looking down to the comic is just annoying.

At some point i'll see if i can re-post it.i made it smaller as i was worried that it was too big for the size limit of images on Newgrounds.when i get the chance i'll try and see if i can get it to look any better.