At 7/25/05 02:32 PM, BlackmarketKraig wrote:
Them apples are pretty good, are they Fuji apples? I really like Fuji apples.
The art is clean and well done, nice use of gradients for the hat. I like the charater, he reminds me of "The Critic."
The animation is also good, particularly the facial expressions.
There does seem to be some color inconsistancy between the two sections of each of his legs. It appears that there is a gradient on the upper leg and none on the lower leg, that looks a little strange to me. Also there is a little fill gap in his shoes on the top, it's a bit distracting. You might also want to consider doing some shading on his face and hands.
All together it's really nice, so good job. ^__^
Thanks, I appreciate the criticism, and I'm willing to fix everything, except for the shading and the FBF word switcharoo. Shading is not my bag, man, and i am too lazy to work on morphing words. On another note, "Yayyyyyy! I look like 'the critic'!!!" I was trying more to look like '"Bucket Hat" Bobby', but this is good too. Ha!
Anywho, I fixed it , and i like it better this way. Thanks, guys!