1 Forum Post by "11Mo"
I thought it was great! The poem paints a picture in your head and the words are strong enough to move you. I see you being a great poet!
PS Yes the tree. Where to start about the tree. Well to be honest the first thing that came to my mind was the Forbidden Tree of Eden. But you know you are not intending to talk about the tree in that way, it's just a title. The tree of forbidden fruit. It's just a plot element. Don't worry about it. Write whatever you want and don't let anyone make you change it because they don't like it. It's not their work. It's your's.
