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At 10/11/14 07:48 PM, walterwagner wrote:

At 10/11/14 03:54 PM, DarkFrostPoet wrote: A touch of Alpha for the wolf in me

Keep developing your skill!

I agree with walterwagner's comments. I enjoyed the poem, but also think the line he mentioned could be improved. In regard to the title, I think you're the only one who should really decide. I tend to leave my poems untitled because I'm a hipster that doesn't think titles are very important. Sit on it for a while and maybe you'll think of one.

Also, you should consider checking out the thread I made yesterday. I'm hoping to get a thread going where people can post poems and provide feedback to one another. It's all explained in my post, so check it out if you're interested!

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At 10/11/14 07:48 PM, walterwagner wrote:

At 10/11/14 03:54 PM, DarkFrostPoet wrote: A touch of Alpha for the wolf in me

Keep developing your skill!

I agree with walterwagner's comments. I enjoyed the poem, but also think the line he mentioned could be improved. In regard to the title, I think you're the only one who should really decide. I tend to leave my poems untitled because I'm a hipster that doesn't think titles are very important, so the only advice I'd really give is to just be content with it remaining untitled. Or you could be like Stephen Crane and simply number your poems as you add them to your collection.

Just sit on it for a while and maybe you'll think of one.

Also, you should consider checking out the thread I made yesterday. I'm hoping to get a thread going where people can post poems and provide feedback to one another. It's all explained in my post, so check it out if you're interested!