well

it was good music
i wish there were some vocals awell so you could get a record dealio

Not bad!

Some advices though. What are you using for the drums? Beatcraft I assume. It sounds like that. ^^ The drumbeat was nice, catchy with the guitar. Though, I only hear your guitars "ones". Lemme guess you recorded a guitar track but centered it? To me, it sounds like that.

For a more decent sound, record two tracks or copy the track you did and pan your guitars to left and right. Also your guitar tone...not a good tone for metal, more distortion man! :)

Overall, it's not a bad tune, needs some polish though. Oh yeah, if you really use beatcraft for the drums, could you send me the project file from your drum beat? I wanna play with it a bit if it is ok for you. ^^

I like the beat and you did well with the drums...sooo...4/5. ;)

Thanks for your vote, DarKsidE_666! You voted 4 for Corpse Terrorist in Rapeatory, raising its score from 3.60 to 3.67.

Nice

Ok, i apologise in advance if i seem a little critical.
Your guitar tone isn't very powerful, it was being drowned by the powerful kick. Also it was centred. Try double tracking (ie - recording the same part twice, one panned left, one panned right) it will improve the quality some. Also there was a lack of any noticable bass. Add some to give the song more power.
The song itself i found a bit repetitive, a bit too much like generic metal. It also didn't really build up to anything, it just kind of ended like it started...
You got a nice drum sound going though.
Sorry to be so harsh, you definatly have talent, keep it up man!!

- Joe M.

Awesome

This is some heavy ass shit. I'm not a big fan of Metal, but this is AWESOME. You rock man.

cool riff

very cool id love to use in a game or flash movie some time with this track after getting ur permission