Well.

This is just great.

Intro/Outro: I, for one, love the high-pitched sound. And the ending is pretty cool too.

SFX/Beats: Nice high tempo you got going there, like how the sound alternates from side to side, and of course, the odd squeak, very nice.

Other: Well, really no "progression" with the song till bout' 2:33, a small intermission, but hey, love the repetitive beat.

Conclusion: This is the kind of thing I stay up till' what time is it now, 3:56? Well, anyway, this is what I stay up most of the night to find, and while others don't understand, I do find nice jewels of internet finds, including this nice little beat. Thanks for making this bro.

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WOW...

It's like there's a party in my head and EVERYONE'S EARS ARE BLEEDING!!! But they like it... a lot... great job. Keep it up. The little high-pitched sound is tolerable at worst, ingeniously used at best. I'm not sure which, though... XD

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the high pitched thing in the very start and out sounds like a 303 thing on crack... I don't really like it. The other bass you have at the same time sounds pretty cool though, grumbling and deep.

You seem to have a lot of different basses here, I liked the building one with the wind on it. And the more clean synth bass sounds pretty good though.

I liked the lfo'd thing you got in there after a while. Sounds good as a middle thing.

The break is really wonderful... you got something calm into an otherwise incredibly energic song, without a single problem. Great job!

this is good stuff except for the little super high-pitched thing. ^________^_^_^_^_^_^_^^^^

hmm... strange...

This is a strange one. I kinda like it. Gets me pumped up... I think you should work on some things and make a loop out of it.

Very interesting synth you got running the show. I have to say its just on the verge of not being annoying though. Just too many high pitch frequencies for my taste.

I like all the other synths too. If i could point them out individually and tell you what I liked about them I would, but they're all good in their uniqueness.

I'm liking the break down type of thing you did. Contrasts the song very well when the main theme comes in.

The drum work does nothing to impress or implore interest. Although it works, it could work better.

The outro you did may be a bit overdrawn. Interesting and definitely different, but it really has no point.

I think thats all I have to comment on. If the main instrument wasn't so annoying and you cranked out some more interesting drums, this might have been better. You hit a lot of good points in it though, so it kind of evens out. Keep at it, I think you got some ability that requires some more effort.
-HybrisHybrid

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I like that synth at the beginning.. cheesy, but whatever. :P I'd spread it out a bit more stereo-wise.

The drums are really powerful, but they lack the punchy snare. You can go different ways in dnb, but I think this track would be best with some more definition to the snares.

The break near the end with the pads and pianos was cool... Try to keep the levels down, cause there's some crunchyness in between the big booms and bassdrums.

You did a nice job; just make sure everything flows correctly. ;)

~cornandbeans