great job!

i might just put it on a podcast.....

great job i luv the beat....

tens across the mothafuckin' board

wow man. great stuff, i love this track and the feel to it. you should have kept it going at the end, and blew it all up. if anything i would love to collaborate with you. hit me back

Differnt

Nice tune mate, but doesent really go in trance.

Maby pop, or just dance. Maby if you speed it up a bit, make it into an rave track. with the good beats allready in the song, just speed them up a bit.

Good start on your first upload.