Score: 10
"Great success in my opinion."
date: March 27, 2008
Everyone's senses are different, so before i begin, understand that i don't want you to weight my opinions too heavily against your own. Especialy since you've made this yourself, you will catch things in the piece that i won't. But on the other hand, i won't be catching the smaller 'errors' because all of the goodness of this piece just mends it right up and prevents me from realizing the smallest flaws at all.
First of all, the piano is fine, don't fix it. I don't really know why anyone is mentioning it's off-time. I'm not a music expert, though. If it is off time it's just adding to the attitude of this piece. An ominous persona, a person of dark personality and mystery, to me a good piano part like defines the role perfectly. If it's off-time, in my opinion that is not a flaw but an unintended improvement.
Also this is a good quality song. Good sound levels, alot of songs i hear on here are very obnoxious with too much noise and almost screaching. You've got some guitar parts here that are borderline screachy but it's on the awsome side of that border! :)
You should be proud of yourself, this is an excellent display of skill, and i always love guitars and pianos :D It's goin on my iPod!
March 27, 2008
Author's Response:
wow, awesome.
thanks.
don't really have much to say, glad you like.