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Reviews For: _-={Wrath of a Broken Soul}=-_

(40 Reviews • Avg: 9.70/10)

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Score: 9
Knifethrower

"whoa"

date: February 19, 2008

really powerful stuff here.

so worth downloading :D

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Score: 10
Ridel

"Amazing"

by: Ridel
date: February 9, 2008

I can totally see the story you made when I listen to this song Lemartes, amazing work on the story, and of course amazing work on the song Maestro, Loving every song 10/10

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Score: 10
Holy07

"WOWWWWW"

by: Holy07
date: February 8, 2008

wow lemartes, short but moving
a great description to this song, someone should make a flash (with both maestro and lemartes permission of course)

it would definitely be moving and epic

once again maestro, capturing the perfect moment of battle!!!

great job 1000/10

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Score: 10
Lamazar1

"wow!"

date: January 19, 2008

Hey maestro I'm back after a couple of weeks has it been? i lost track anyways if you didn't get the story i sent you sorry...my computer erased it. But i can write you one right now!

Onitsukay fell to his knees, he couldn't believe he'd been tricked. His village was now being destroyed by hellspawn demons, and it was all because he misinterpreted what the demon's pact was.
He stood and rushed down the hill seeing if there was anyone he could save after his terrible mistake. He pulled a few shurikens away from his belt and was getting close to the village gates.
He immediately knew what was and why the place was being destroyed so easily. What had happened to the militia? He discarded the thought and ran down one of the dirt roads kicking up dust and crunching the gravel beneath his feet. He turned a left saw a giant stomping on a house, and a few people screaming and trying to get away.
He jumped up on a roof, threw five shurikens in the beasts back, and jumped on its back. It knew he was there and was trying to crush him with mighty and huge hands. Each time he struck his own back shockwaves knocked Onitsukay off balance.
Onitsukay drew his sword and began stabbing the monster's head. As the monster fell and the people escaped another appeared and said, "Well, it seems that even my most trusted genaral stood not even the slightest chance against you. So try me!"
This creature was about the same size as Onitsukay, but was alot faster. Onitsukay tried throwing shurikens at him, but they either thinked into the ground or a wall of a nearby building.
Then the monster made the mistake of going in for the kill by trying to stab him straight on. Onitsukay grabbed the hand of this weird creature, holding the monster in place, but keeping the blade in his stomach.
He remarked, "Bet you weren't expecting that!" and decapitated the thing before him, let the hand go and the boody fall.
"At least I may have made up for what I did." And with that he went to go fight more demons while bleeding to death from the wound in his stomach.

As usual another Maestrorific piece from you! Keep up the great work.

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Score: 9
reigningdarkness

"Sweet"

date: January 10, 2008

Another great piece by you, MaestroRage. In your mission to help give people ideas and stories, you succeed with flourish. Listening to songs as powerful and moving as these brings a vision or idea to me every time I hear them. Great work, and keep it coming. :)

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Score: 10
Shelbilanders

"wow"

date: January 5, 2008

btw LemartesDCC great story perfect music for that type of flash great

January 5, 2008

Author's Response:

He did write quite the epic monstrosity! Quite loved it! Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

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Score: 10
LemartesDCC

"Well, here goes!"

date: January 4, 2008

Two armies clash on a broken field. The air is full of gunsmoke and the screams of dying men. The two generals, once united in their quest for world peace, are now turned against each other in a desperate bid for power. So caught up in the rage of battle are they that neither man sees his fate coming. From the north, a third army marches. Ancient steel gleams muderously in the morning light. Neither man shall take victory. The Emperor, thought lost, has returned.

January 5, 2008

Author's Response:

Indeed a powerful and image invoking story Lemartes D:!!!

I absolutely adored the sentiments. When the choirs jump in I can see the Emperor's army gleaming in the light!

Well written, well written indeed! Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

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Score: 10
Blood-Raven651

"I have once again a story :D!"

date: November 7, 2007

In the Ancient ruins of the once fabled Sliver Knights with gargantuan statutes of dead heros walks a man. A man with his head hung low and walking with a small stride. As he reaches the middle of the ruins he feels its power surging through his body feeling young once again. Going through the hallways with every step bring back gruesome but pleasing memories. He reached the object he has been looking for ever since that day. He gazed at it with great anticipation waiting for that power he once held many hundreds of years ago. The ancient man slowly stuck his arm forward, and grabbed the artifact. The rush of power went surging through his veins making him young once again. At the kingdom of Gershum a decaying king looks out his castle window in his royal quarters. He sees the beacon of red energy for the spot he remembers so well. "NO this can not be! i killed him hundreds of years ago!" The ordered his most trusted knight
to get him his old armor. The knight returned with the shining armor that was so brilliant that even the king was stunned by it. Once had gotten his armored boots on he felt his legs turn young again. After he had gotten all his armor equipped he said to himself "I had hoped that i would never have to do this again..." The king once again looked outside his window. He was horrified, he saw rivers of blood from his loyal subjects and he spotted the his very own brother in the armor he was in on the faithful day. A tear slid down the kings cheek. He ran down into his mighty hall see the doors on the entrance blown away by his brother. The king slowly walked towards the genocidal maniac "So you came back from the dead brother?" he said in a furious tone" Nye i was only waiting." as he said will walking towards the king. "For what?" and in an instant the kings brother was in front of him. The king looking at his face was shadowed but he could still see the fain red glow in his eyes. " For this" and he slid his demonic sword into the kings gut piercing his body. He pulled his sword out and watched the king fall to the ground, and with a murderous smile on his face he let out a demonic laugh. Well what do you think :D?

November 8, 2007

Author's Response:

Everything about this story just clicked one scene after another :D! I could see the frantic movement, the approaching darkness at the beginning, and then the brother rushes in, gives his awesome speech, and then the second the blade impales him, the choirs come in. Slow motion death, reaching for stability, falling to knees, and then to his side, the king dies.

Murderous laugh scene cut! Ending cue entrance.

Like a movie :)

thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

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Score: 10
bucky-the-squirrel

"hmm..."

date: November 5, 2007

I can definitely see your story of vengeance, but to me it more symbolises a battle. The commanders are brothers, then in the fight there is a clearing and they see this. The two fight, and end up killing each other in a stalemate, as well as their armies. WOOOOOO! Narrator wins with checkmate!!!

November 5, 2007

Author's Response:

A valid story, and an entertaining one. It is often most moving when two people who once shared great bonds raise their arms to try and destroy the other. Brothers they are, and brothers they will always be, but on this day, family they were not.

Stalemate, so many of my battles go down that road. Either they don't kill each other, or they both die in a large blaze of glory. Of course win or lose, narrator will always win >:)

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

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Score: 10
fillup0

"Another story"

date: October 21, 2007

A man has been captured, his family are famous warriors. he is tortured for months. The begining part is him trying to struggle as he is bought closer to the torture rack. When the last drum blast comes in before, that is the finla strap being tied to his leg... As the music gets calm, behind doors you can hear the screaming of that man. As 01:12 kicks in, family members blast through the door. As their henchmen take everyone hostage, the mans borther is standing there, shining armour and cape blowing in the wind as the light blinds him and everyone in the room. The man has no clue who it is. Until he gets closer. He takes him off the rack and carries him to the chariot. 01:42 sees the sunset going in as the chariot rides off as millions of others ride off with henchmen.

Simple story which matches the savage nature of the intruments.

This piece is incredible!

October 23, 2007

Author's Response:

a torture scene! Hmm, a very impressive thought indeed, I did not even fathom such a possibility! Living this story for myself, was quite an experience, thank you for sharing that, and it fits very very well.

I like the shining armour and cape blowing in the wind segment. Classic, but proven to work!

Thank you for the review, i'm glad you liked it!

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