Author's Response:
I'm glad I read both reviews before I responded, because I felt a little strange sitting there thinking "do the cello's really sound like brass?! Have i raped them so hard in this fashion O_O!?"
But it makes much more sense now.
You're right I could have beefed up the low end, the trouble with this one was the percussion. They literally dominated my low end and because I don't use these kind of drums often I was faced with many situations I wasn't prepared to handle. I'm glad you were honest enough to point these errors out, because I was wondering if I should spend more time in the future on mastering, or learn that on the side while creating.
I will definitely have to work on equalizing and the such.
As for the Brotherhood piece, I fully agree, there is a great nostalgic value to the piece, the first image that triggered it however was that of brotherhood, and so to give credit to the starting block I named it as such.
Thank you for both reviews, greatly appreciated. I'm glad you liked them.