Score: 10
"gotta write a nother one."
date: June 7, 2008
i see a soldier withe his assault rifle standing at a gravestone when his commander comes from behind him. "marine! lets go!" the commander shouts. "Yes sir..." he quietly says as they get on the spacecraft and they take off.
the whole time he just sits there looking at a picture of his brother.
"family?" the marine next to him asks. "yeah...he is my brother...he died in the very war we are going to fight." the marine quietly says. "ouch...well, i hope you avenge him." the other marine says. oh, dont worry...i will." he says as he holds up another picture of the leader of the enemy army...his dad. they are 10 minutes from their destination when the ship starts to shake uncontrollably. What happened!" the commander shouts at the pilot. "Sir! our engine has taken a hit! i cant keep her up for much longer! we are going to have to make a crash landing on the nearest planet!" the pilot shouts in return. another hit to the engine. "we're goin' down!". "so this is it huh?" the marine asks the pictures of his dead brother and his hated father. the ship crashes on a supposedly abandoned planet. the only ones that survived out of 45 were 3. the marine, the commander, and the pilot. "marine goe search the area!" the commander barks out the order. "yes sir!" the marine says as he starts to walk away. he has been walking for a while when he hears a crunch under his feet. he looks to see a skull...a human skull. "oh shit...what is waiting for me..." he says to him self as he keeps walking. he is walking when he stumbles right into a camp they raise their guns and other wapons at him. thesse guns...they are like nothing he has ever seen. "i mean to make peace." the marine calmly says. the leader walks up a strange looking man-like creature with a scar on its eye wearing a cloak and an orange energy blade on his wrist. "if you wish to make peace...drop your weapon terran." the leader spoke in an unmoving hard-toned voice. the marine complies and drops his weapon. "why do you want us as allies?" says the leader. "we wish to gain an upper hand in the war we are fighting." the marine says as he stares straight into the leaders face. "that stare... i recognize it...are you by chance related to jim raynor who led the terran revolution so many years ago?" the leader asks in an inquisitive voice. "yes...that was my grand-father, i am jim raynor the third." the marine says. "hmmmm...my name is zeratul...and you have just made a new ally with the protoss." zeratul says as he shakes the marines hand.
thats kindof what i get from this..if i find something that gets ny attebtion from maestro ill continue the story.
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