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Score: 7

"Not badddddd"

by: Viridis

date: July 13, 2008

Its a good track seems to lack a certain something though, it needs to be filled out more, an extra beat or melody in there wouldnt ruin the song at all ya know. :P
I thought it did get a bit repetitive, though. Adding another melody to this probably wouldn't hurt, just to mix things up a bit.
Its a pretty good track though overall its got a cool beat to it, something i can dance to!
*Dances*

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Score: 7

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by: Haggard

date: July 12, 2008

The track sounds quite good, but it's missing a part that really stands out here.

The parts you have here fit very well together and it's nice listening to this song. But I wish something more would happen here. A brigther main melody would be good. The whole track seems to be quite "dark" and deep, so a slightly higher main melody would sound quite well, I think.

Also, the ending is so abrupt, so it might be nice to loop this song, as Coop already suggested in his review.

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Score: 7

"Lacking"

by: Little-Rena

date: July 12, 2008

It sounds to be lacking quit a lot in terms of beat, I think it could do with a little more, especilly in terms of the backing here, it doesn't really sound like you have a whole lot in this. What is here though does sound good, which is nice to hear and it all seems to come together pretty well, although on a whole, it is certainly quiet, so make it a little louder maybe.

Anyway, other than adding more backing and making it a bit louder, it is pretty good, the length is decent and the ending is also pretty good, though I would consider working on the opening, it doesn't quite sound all that good, but keep working at it.

3/5

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Score: 7

"Perpetual tune"

by: Coop83

date: July 11, 2008

I quite like the way that this tune seems to carry on. It's got the up and down of a tune that is having a bit of a change of beat and tempo, but it doesseem to keep giving itself nice impetus.

The only way that I'd improve this is to make it into a perpetual loop, which would greatly improve this aspect of the tune. Losing 5-10 seconds off each end of the tune could change it quite a bit though, so be warned.

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Score: 8

"Good Work"

by: Metal-Therapy

date: July 11, 2008

Nice, I really enjoyed this. It had a really pulsating feel to it, it got a little headbang going with me while writing this review. :P
The melody was quite upbeat and fun for the most part, but the little interlude in the middle sounded very dark in comparison. That contrast was very cool, it didn't sound out of place at all and it was a great addition to the song.
I thought it did get a bit repetitive, though. Adding another melody to this probably wouldn't hurt, just to mix things up a bit. Or maybe a solo-y type part toward the end, just to give the listener something fresh to really make the song complete.
Overall a good, fun track though. Good work!

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Score: 8

"Very nice."

by: TheBellmaker

date: July 10, 2008

The intro could have used a bit of work, but it was ok. The drum were awesome. The bassline flowed very nicely, too. This song makes me think of a robot army marching around the streets. Very job.

Suggestions: I did not detect any major melodies. Maybe you could create one, so it would make the song way more interesting?

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Score: 8

"Very nice"

by: Shanus

date: July 9, 2008

A cool, calm and collected song. With very nice grooves and a bass line to hook even a hard line skeptic. But I wouldn't really class it as indie. More dancy than anything else. But very nice loved what you did with the synth at the end too. Great work

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Score: 7

"Not bad."

by: Fro

date: July 8, 2008

Too bad you can't turn up the volume without distorting it because I had to put my volume all the way up to hear it. Oh well, I heard it is all that really matters and you do say to turn up the volume in your author comments. This gets very repetative, so maybe some variation here and there would help your score.

C52

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Score: 7

"Like from a machine"

by: phantomlassuk

date: July 7, 2008

I liked the introduction to this piece clubby ,with an electro beat im surpised it indie music.

On the tune the clubby eletro synch vibe ,is cool i like the use of sounds in the background. The whole track had clapping feel to it. I liked the start and the difrrent uses, of sounds put together. The beat stays much the same ,but gets a few drums sounding. Which makes it fresh, and good to listen to plus it fairly short.

The problem with the sound is that it gets quite repetive, because of the constant same beat not changing much. As i said it not much of a con.

Overeall a good track but a little repetive.

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Score: 7

"Problem I had..."

by: AnalPenguinFarming

date: July 6, 2008

This was a song with a decent beat, but I don't like when the songs are faded out because it should be made loud enough for me to not have to turn up the volume. Another thing was the song got fairly repetitive. You had a few nice sounds going on in there to change it up a little bit, but I think you need to spice it up a little bit more with all kinds of different sounds to make it sound less repetitive. It was a good beat, but needed more to it. Good luck!

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