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Score: 8
Haggard

"\m/"

date: July 14, 2008

I like what you did there. So, boredom can be helpful to be creative, I guess. ^^

It sounds a bit rough here and there, but I guess you didn't put that much effort into the mixing (at least that's my impression when reading your description).
Some of the instruments are a bit too loud (like the drums), so they are overpowering the main melody.

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Score: 8
Viridis

"Sweetness"

date: July 13, 2008

Its pretty good! I like how the main beat sort of started straight away, no waiting need at all. :D, it kept me interested throughout the track with the variety of beats and different sounds you used which i thought were really cool, it all flowed excellently as well, good track my man!!

Also i was kind of expecting a half finished piece due to the title, but the ending was good. Overall it was a really cool track and im hoping to see more from you. :D

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Score: 8
Coop83

"Reminds me of Eurovision..."

by: Coop83
date: July 13, 2008

A good tune, with a riff that sounds a little like 'save all your kisses for me', which won the Eurovision Song Contest back in the day.

Good use of the keyboards to take it away from the start. You've put some good effort and variation into this piece. It's a shame that you didn't give a bit more variation to the latter part of the tune, as it could have used just a little more on the variation side - when it did come in, it was a little too late for my liking, added maybe as an afterthought.

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Score: 9
Little-Rena

"Pretty Good"

date: July 12, 2008

This is certainly a pretty good tune, although I'm not too keen on some parts of this myself, much of it does sound very good which is nice to hear. You have a decent opening and the thing ends well too, which are both good things to have, but I would have had some build up at the start, it might have worked better than going right into the song as you did with this.

I hear no real problems with this though overall, I mean it all does come together well so I can't really say much there, just some more build up on the intro part I think would be good to have but other than that, I can't hear much that needs improving.

5/5

<3

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July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(

thank you very much for the suggestiong, i guess ill make another version with a more built opening or a buildup since its quite forward the one we have here :P, and ill notify you when its uploaded :D thanks :D

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Score: 8
Metal-Therapy

"Sounds Good"

date: July 11, 2008

I really enjoyed this. The melody was quite funky and it really matched up well with the percussion. This long song really featured a ton of different sounds, but it managed to keep the same central feel throughout the whole track up until around 3:45. That transition seemed kind of abrupt and the whole song seemed to get so much lighter there, or something. It sounded good, but seemed slightly out of place in comparison to the rest of the song.
The track sounded really good, overall. I really enjoyed the listen.
Good work!

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July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

i guess the 3:45 its the experimental ending , i have another version without that ending ill upload it one of these days, im glad the song end up being liked hehehe, glad th perc worked too cause took me a while to arrange it :D, thanks :D

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Score: 8
TheBellmaker

"A review hot out of the oven"

date: July 10, 2008

The intro was pretty kool. The ahhh in the background added to the atmosphere quite nicely. Very nice solid beats. I liked how you kinda switched around from genre to genre. I really think this song isn't too bad. Good job man

Suggestions: I think this song could be a bit more refined. Balance some volume levels. add some effects and stuff like that. Then it would be finished.

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July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

ill give it a check on the levels, they might need some more equalization work , saddly ive been short of time but ill give it a shot, on the effects part, what do u suggest? like sweeps and stuff like that?

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Score: 7
phantomlassuk

"Does not feel unfinished."

date: July 10, 2008

Interesting track you have various genres of music ,none of which is the same. So its fun guessing, what is techno dance etc.

The actual track is good the diffrent variety of music on offer is impressive. The start is good then later, around 2 minutes its changes to more music. The genre i cant work out but all together, its cool. I think the beats are nice a good track ,which has a cool ending the clapping is nice.

The tune is a little boring a times with the drums beating ,and it takes a while to get going, but on the whole its a nice mix.

Overeal nice track

July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

at the begining i didnt know if mixing the two types of melodies would work, because the first minute its soemthing completely diff from the rest of the song but i said what the hell its an experiment trow it all in lol, so it was all experimenting, and im considering on making some other song with this arrangement maybe something good might come out of it hehehe
thansk again for reviewing :D

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Score: 8
Shanus

"Good Story"

by: Shanus
date: July 9, 2008

Its pretty good! I like how it kicked in straight away sort of, it kept me interested throughout the track with the variety of beats and different sounds you used which i liked. Also i was kind of expecting a half finished piece due to the title, but the ending was good. Nice work!

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July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

thanks for reviewing shanus, well the song its finished, its just the name lol wich is not finished lol...
i guess this experimental track came out better than expected hehe im not quite convinced with the ending but i guess its good too:D and it was not repetitive w00t!:D

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Score: 8
AnalPenguinFarming

"Not as bad as you think..."

date: July 8, 2008

It definitely wasn't as sloppy as you made it out to be in your Author's comments. I actually found it to be quite impressive. I liked the way it was a bunch of sounds mixed up because that means one thing for the song - it isn't repetitive. Once you try to aim for a certain beat that builds up throughout a song, you always have to worry about boring the person listening. This song you didn't have that to worry about at all. In fact this at no point got too repetitive. However there was a buildup at one point, but in the end it turned out great! Even the ending, though it sounded different from the rest of the song, fit in great! Nice work!

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July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

you are completely right, i guess i killed it on my comment T_T, well i was kidna hyper and since it was something experimental .... im glad u actually liked it hehe the ending still im not quite convinced with it, i did another version with an alternate ending to this one, i guess ill post it to see what you think about it . thanks for reviewing it :D

im glad its not repetitive hehe:D

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Score: 8
Fro

"Not bad."

by: Fro
date: July 8, 2008

It was something a little different, but I really did enjoy listening to it. In my opinion you had a lot of variation with different beats and everything. The title suggest that you are going to make a better or newer one of this same one if I'm correct. Make sure to post that new one in the review request club so I can come back and review it.

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July 13, 2008

Author's Response:

hello my friend, i apologize for the late response, as ive been busy lately with college :(.

I guess it is something diferent, i was experimenting there, i decided to leave some sounds with no filters and just the pure dry sound hehe so i guess it was a big crazy mess lol, well the title, was something i came out out of nowere i guess because im considering remastering it with some more tweaks because it was experimental :P and some kind of more techno version of it hehe, ill post it when its ready to be heard lol :D thanks :D

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