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Score: 4

">:P"

by: TheBellmaker

date: July 7, 2008

Well, this song had sorta a riff going on. NIce rhythm, too.

Suggestions: I really couldn't find any coherence in this track. Very unorganized. And the tune would flow kool for a bit then all of a sudden a bad chord would kick in an ruin the moment. Try again.

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Score: 3

"An uninteresting experiment"

by: Bezman

date: July 6, 2008

With a 3s pause at the end, it's not a loop. Not enough happens for it to be a song.

The first 7s doesn't seem to have much to do with the remainder of the track. It is full of slightly dud-sounding notes. Could have worked in a different context, but not here.

I think the 8s-16s part would make a decent loop for a fuller song.

It just seems like an experiment - an unfinished WIP. I suggest you keep going and resubmit when it sounds more like a whole song.

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Score: 2

"Em..."

by: Viridis

date: July 6, 2008

This was pretty bad, ive heard far worse but this was terrible. You had loads of instruments all going at once, with no direction on structure to the song. You need to pace it more and think carefully about what instrument or sound your placing where.

Better luck next time.

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Score: 3

"Needs Improvement"

by: Bomber1337

date: July 6, 2008

This needs some major Improvement dude. Like not making it blow up my ears but it was a good try.

Score: 2

"Just Rock Off"

by: Coop83

date: July 6, 2008

There were so many things worng with this track that I don't really know where to start. It's difficult for me to be so unhappy with a tune that was only half a minute long, but hey.

There were bad notes in this tune from start to finish. Either you've not tried to edit this tune or you're tone deaf. The volume is too high, as the track experiences the beginnings of static like feedback over the speakers. Turning it down a little would give you a more crisp sounding tune and you need all the help you can get.

Finally, the track needs to stop dead at about 25s. Maybe that way, you could turn it into a loop and give it some greater purpose.

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Score: 3

"Messy"

by: Little-Rena

date: July 5, 2008

This doesn't really sound to have any direction to it and just doesn't really sound all that great overall. The whole thing sounds out of tune and just thrown together randomly, the large pause at the end is also a waste of time, it doesn't make it loop all that well, just sounds really bad. You could remove the pause and try to make a loop out of this, if you wanted to.

You could really improve on everything here, there isn't really much here that is worth listerning to, the whole thing just sounds like a mess, you have a change early on which doesn't go smoothly and the ending is just too sudden, as well as this being far too short.

1/5

<3

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Score: 6

"\m/"

by: Haggard

date: July 5, 2008

Sounds to me as if you are still practicing to play the guitar. At the start it sounds very out of tune and a bit later (at 0:20) it seems as if you were either bending the strings or you used the tremolo arm.
Those kind of things only sound good if you are playing a little solo. But they should be avoided if you are playing riffs (like you did in this track).

Also, the end is just cut off and we are left with 5 seconds of silence. So the track doesn't loop...

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Score: 6

"Hmmm"

by: Shanus

date: July 4, 2008

Very very strange song, has potential but needs alot of work, the guitar sounded out of tune or using too much vibrato. And the song doesn't even loop, it just cuts out at the end, but I could see if you cleaned it up, the song being very good, keep trying

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Score: 4

"Needs Work"

by: Metal-Therapy

date: July 4, 2008

This whole thing had a really raspy sound to it. The guitar in the beginning almost sounded like it was being played out of tune, it was kind of hard on the ear.
You have some good beginnings here for something good, I think, but you need to put a lot more work on this. It needs a chorus, a bridge/interlude, just more parts to the song in general. Also the quality needs to be improved by quite a bit.
You might have something here if you put some more work and effort into it, keep it up. :)

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Score: 3

"Sorry but..."

by: HeavyTank

date: July 4, 2008

...the melody was horrible and the track far too short to give it a decent rating..

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