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Score: 10

"Sweet!"

by: maple369

date: April 16, 2009

Nice song man gg!

Score: 7

"Pretty good!"

by: OutofLine

date: May 16, 2008

Nice work on the guitar and bass, especially in the middle with both playing at the same time.

Unfortunately, although this song has some potential to be a really good tune, some parts sound empty and incomplete, not to mention it's just too short.

Just add a little more to this song and it could be so much better.

Score: 9

"Nice"

by: Andrea364

date: May 13, 2008

I recognize some of the guitar from Mixcraft, but I do see where you added some awesome harmonics too. Good job, just needs EQ'ing and compression.

Score: 9

"I Like It"

by: dudethekingofdudely

date: May 13, 2008

I liked what you could do and everything, but this sounded more like a jam session to me. A kick ass jam session mind you, but still a jam session. I'd really like to hear more of your stuff later on down the road though. If anything, in my opinion, this sounds like a trailer of what's to come. Well, at least I hope that it is.

Score: 8

"((VOTED4))"

by: BlackPlastic

date: May 13, 2008

The guitar playing was really great and so was the bass but something just seamed not right here. It sounded like two different songs put together if you ask me. First part being guitar and second being bass. The guitar really made a great intro so defiantly save it for a future, full length song

If the bass was supposed to be an outro, then you probably started to early for a song as short as this. Also you won't want to end the guitar as ubruptly as you did and just go right into the bass play. The transition sounded pretty sloppy if you ask me. Also you'll want to do something about that blank space at the end.

All in all, there was definantly a lot of skill in this song. It was just presented in not the best way you could. Just try to add more to the middle and try to spice up the outro a bit because it didn't sound to good the way it was now.

Score: 7

"No consistency"

by: riccomadboy

date: May 13, 2008

There are some good riffs present, but it all seems really disjointed. Maybe that's what you were going for, I don't know, but it doesn't sound quite finished. There's too much stuff NOT happening if you know what I mean.