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Score: 10

"nice"

by: RizzenAlive

date: June 4, 2008

nice start..keep up the great work.

Rizzenalive

Score: 10

"woot"

by: blaze077

date: May 23, 2008

i can't wait till the full version keep it up!!

Score: 10

"Woohoo"

by: DJ-Martcore

date: May 11, 2008

Sounds awesome make the full track!!!
keep it up!

-DJ Martcore

Score: 9

"This is a ReVIew"

by: S3C

date: May 10, 2008

Good track man. I pretty much agree with what milk said.

=The Good=
-Good repetitions for being a progressive trance, I believe this style needs some type of repetition for being trance, but you didnt overdo it. Lots of good builds.
-Transitions are good
-Really like the percussive themes around 0:33, it gets real nice
-Pads are very well crafted
-I really like the ending with the swelling synths and the cool catchy melody
-Mixed quite well
-Very danceable club tune

=The Bad=
-might want to EQ a bit more mid-bass into your kick (or maybe not, wow I'm in a nitpicky mood)
- open hi hats rhythms could use some dynamics
-I say this a lot, so feel free to ignore me here. Maybe its against the style, but dont be afraid to break the 1-2-3-4 kick pattern. In a transition, you can do something like a 1-2-3-4-& rhythm.
-I would eventually introduce a more powerful, apparent bass

Ideas: 8.5/10 Diversity: 8/10 Clarity: 8.5/10 Overall: 9/10

Good stuff so far, really nice track and let me know when its done.

Score: 9

"Somethings cooking"

by: Mrmilkcarton

date: May 10, 2008

Very progressive. It has the professional build ups that are long and enduring that you hear all the time in progressive. The only thing you need watch out for when you do a progressive track is you need stop for a moment and ask yourself if its to repetitive.

Instead of going back to building up even more, you could of introduced some epic melody around 1:10 that filters in. Though as you go on it sounds like that will happen at the end. It sounds great as is though, great job so far.

Score: 10

"Cool"

by: PrEmoEffect

date: May 8, 2008

I think the melody in the end is really nice, but i dont like the whole idea of progression with just drums. The push pull of the dead bass, with the drums. And you should, instead of cutting it off, make the melodoy continue when the person says dream machine for the first time. Sounds ALOT like DJ Scott Project, im sure thats what ur aiming for right? =P