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Score: 5

"LOL"

by: Shanus

date: May 19, 2008

I found that quite amusing. I didnt like it. But I could see what you were trying to do. But it didn't really work. The main problem Ihad was the fact it kept pausing between bits. IF you'd done a smooth trasmission between each it would've sounded alot better. Also I don't know why you made it so loud, some parts were too loud to actually enjoy. I didn't like this thefirst time, but I kinda got into it's main groove after a while. I think back to the drawing board is in order :D

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Score: 1

"Bad"

by: Shadow-1409

date: May 18, 2008

This was very bad, teh tune is weird and distorted, very unpleasent to listen to, the breaks in the middle of the song are very bad and it has no structure, it needs to come together better. Needs work

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Score: 1

"Harsh"

by: Little-Rena

date: May 16, 2008

This is very hard to listen to, the huge breaks in this sounds bad and much of the tune comes across as too distorted, it's not really clear what's going on in this, there are some parts where the sound is kind of clear in a way but then it's broken up again and that really lets it down, if you remove that and have some clear flow it would sound better.

You have parts that sound like they would sound good but they just don't come together very well, you might have had a decent idea by making it random but it's broken up a lot and just comes out as a total mess to me. So yeah, much could be improved.

0/5

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Score: 0

"\m/"

by: Haggard

date: May 14, 2008

Okay, I just listened to the original to get an idea what you were trying to do here. But I have to say: I really don't know. This "stopping and starting again" was really annoying. At first I thought my boxes are broken, then I realized that it was intentional.
At first I hoped it wouldn't last for long, but sadly it did. What's also annoying with the stopping/starting is, that there's always a noticable clipping sound.

Also, this doesn't really seem like a "remix" to me. For a remix you should add some own parts and not just rearranging the existing parts in such a bad way...
A remix requires you to have ideas of your own and to put effort into it. Just randomly adding together various parts of the song doesn't require any effort at all.

Sorry, I didn't like what you did here.

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Score: 0

"Formless Dirge"

by: Coop83

date: May 14, 2008

I've been here for a long time and I've listened to plenty of tunes on this site. Sadly, there has to be at least one, but this is the single worst tune that I've ever heard on Newgrounds.

The way that it keeps stopping and starting again is horrendous. These parts are supposed to blend together for a flowing tune. At least it suited the AngryFaic visualisation.

Aside from making my ears bleed, I think that you've got a lot to go on with - producing a backing tune and then adding more things to it, like rhythm, melody and counter-melody.

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Score: 1

"That is not clear"

by: phantomlassuk

date: May 5, 2008

Sorry that was tuneless and not very clear. I like the way you thought of the remix ,and in places it sounded good. The problem was the way the tune went up and down it, sounded really bad as the sound went from quiet to noisy. The fact is was meant to sound like this was a shame ,as it sounded bad. It was out of tune and i thought it went on for to long. Half the beats were out of tune. I like the backgrounds images sorry for the low score maybe you could try to keep the tune clearer.