Score: 8
"good, but you've done better..."
date: April 18, 2008
I've heard you do better songs... no offence to you personally. :S This one kinda lacked a bit of imagination. Its sounded good and all, but it would have sounded better if you put a bit more contrast into it. Most of the time it was in your face and upbeat... dont get me wrong thats not a bad thing but somewhere in the song you need to tone it down a bit... bring in some soft strings and make it feel like you are flying. the only times i heard that was in the short blurbs in the beginning and end.
The song was great, but it didnt move me if ya know what ahm sayin.
4/5
8/10
do some experimenting... looking forward to your next song!
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