Score: 10
"~Cubie's Luv~"
date: April 25, 2008
Great song. The only thing I would change is the instrument introduced at 1:22 that carries on until 3:26 (it sounds like some version of Acid). I don't feel that it was in keeping the tone the rest of the song creates. Perhaps try a saw, bells, chimes, just play around with it =). Another thing is that the introduction seemed a little long, so perhaps cut 4 measures from before the percussion is introduced. Other than that I thought this song was pretty awesome. It was nice, mellow, and fun to listen to. It has a quality that makes feel like it ought to be used in some sort of games. Great job on this one.
April 26, 2008
Author's Response:
Thanks for the advice, lolz i was thinking of sum weird ass game when i made it tho, and yea after i posted i thought i needed to cut the intro too. but thanks for the feedback