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Score: 6

"Good song, but I'm growing less enthused by it."

by: Bezman

date: March 31, 2008

I did really love this the first time I hear it, but having just heard it for the 3rd time (over the course of a week), I find myself growing weary of it.

The intro is great and I loved what sounded like a little bit of speedy improvised fingerwork.

Throughout the song, I felt the drums were a bit too repetitive.

The whole thing kinda seemed a bit flat after the 1 minute mark. If you'd had more energy in the drums and some more variations generally, I'd have probably preferred it.

The lyrics were kinda funny. I liked the use of stereo effects for the guitars.

It's a good song with some great elements, but I just felt the whole thing failed to live up to the promise held by the guitarwork in the intro.

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Score: 9

"Great Tune"

by: Coop83

date: March 30, 2008

I like this piece - the guitar is well played and the drums work alongside nicely. penning the lyrics on the comments is a nice touch, so you can have the users singing along with it. Certainly a candidate for a music video in this piece.

Could have done with a drum solo / bridge, but other than that there isn't really much else I can add.

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Score: 9

"Excellent"

by: Shanus

date: March 30, 2008

Brilliant song, maybe a little too metal like to be in general rock though. The guitar work was excellent, truely impressed. THe lyrics were good and your voice suited the song completely. I'd also like to praise the guitar work again, really really good. Great job

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Score: 9

"Very Cool."

by: Shadow-1409

date: March 29, 2008

I like rock, i like rock alot. And this is the sorta song that makes me like rock more. Theres sweet guitar riffs at the start and i love the way it kicks into a solo right at the beginning of the song, i really wish more songs would do that. The singing is pretty cool, makes me think of a drunk guy with a cowboy hat and brown beard, has to be brown. The drums are cool but are overshadowed by the guitar a tad. It not repetative because of the guitar variation so thats very good. The lyrics were clear and cool too. Very good track dude.
Maybe work on a variated outro is all i can say. ^_^

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Score: 9

"Pretty Nice"

by: Little-Rena

date: March 29, 2008

Sounds like a pretty good song here, everything sounds pretty good and well played, the singing really fits with the whole music and adds something to it, though maybe the intro lasts for a while, it still seems to work pretty well as it's not too repetitive. The singing sounds to be pretty clear to me and everything, so that's very good to hear.

I can't hear any problems with the overall peice, it all seems to be put together very well which sounds very good. The ending is pretty nice too, so that's good, though maybe it could have done with a bit more singing or something, there are gaps with just instumental and a fair few amount of gaps to, but otherwise good work.

5/5

<3

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Score: 9

"\m/"

by: Haggard

date: March 28, 2008

I like the vocals. They sound a bit like Sprechgesang, but it fits really well together with the music here.

The rhythm of the song is great too. You used some great riffs and some very cool melodies in this track. However, the main riff gets a bit repititive during the song, as it can be heard literally everywhere. During the verses, during the chorus and during the bridges. A bit more variation here would be nice.

The lyrics are somewhat strange, but they are nevertheless quite cool ^^.

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Score: 9

"use some fine tuning"

by: darktaint1

date: March 28, 2008

i think u could have made the guitars a little higher in pitch just up maybe one or two notes
the voices are rather bad u need to work on them they dont fit in at all if u made the voices different pitchs that woudl work better and make them both a bit higher and sing the lyrics not moan them

Score: 9

"can use some work"

by: bio-man5

date: March 27, 2008

different voice pitch and ittl be great

Score: 10

"YEAH"

by: yugyug04

date: March 27, 2008

hey i really liked the guitar, you have a tanlented person. i liked the lyrics but not liking the voices.

Score: 9

"may i suggest something"

by: MusicIsBliss

date: March 27, 2008

the mixing in this was rather well done, i would have eqed the guitars a little hhigher at the beginning, just to hold interest, but the main part of the song is great

you need to split your vocal track into 2 channels, and have one eqed higher and one lower. take off the some chorus on the lower one and add some reverb to the lower one

for the last part of vocals i liked the panning, and the reverb, but the volume was lacking in parts, and could use more chorus in the highs again

keep up the good work, im impressed with the rest