Score: 8
"pretty nice but..."
date: April 2, 2008
im gona be a bit different from the other reviewers and give u somethings that i reckon cud of been changed with it...
i no there were drums somewhere in that first melody and second melody, but it was rly hard to hear them over the main melody, bass and kick. i can say thats its a nice strong beat with good melody, with good bass but that kind crowded out the drums...
and it was a quite repedititve pattern and beat... cept for a bit of change in the middle, even if the song did or did not go like that. Oh and the lead into the second chorus :S that seemed very basic and maybe in sum cases unoriginal...
all i can rly say is that this song needs to be mastered alot better... with a better lead out for the whole song, since it was very ubrupt. the main synth was good with the sawishness, but had a little too much high endness in its notes, also with a little too much reverb imo. it would of also been nice to hear another attacking melody in the backround (something that played the same style as the main, but with different notes and more variation).
so overall i must say its a good song, just needs better mastering and more variation of instruments and styles. Oh and ^_^ good job on making it quite ravie!
April 3, 2008
Author's Response:
thx for your review, about your critics, I've to say that it's just an Edit and that I've not made any leed or drums to it, I've cutted it and enhanced the speed and pitch, but about the reverb (that many criticize xD) it's something that fit my speakers/headphones, cuz the ecolizer here isn't very good, but for my musicplayer it's very good, I've also made an equalition on the track, for different reasons (better base or more attack)