good song but........
remove the electric guitar part from this song and make it into a seperate song.
Author Comments
remixed levels and effects, and changed a few parts at the end. let me know what you think
its a basic progression, fairly unvarying. on purpose though, the point of the song is a calm simplicity, and i feel that that feeling gets across if you take the time to listen and let it sink in.
also, as amazingly simple as the solo at the end is (not the tapping, the actual lead), as basic as it is, i think its the best one i've ever played/written. not just of what i've submitted, i'm working on about 5 other songs too. just in general i love the solo in this one, i've been writing the lyrics for this one as i gather the thoughts, but my guitar here said so much more and described better what i feel about this song than any combination of words could ever portray.
enjoy!
BazookaZombie responds:
eh, it just needs a smoother transistion.
Nice!
I really like this. Mellow background stuff. I actually quite liked in when you brought in the electric guitar. It didnt start off great but it wasnt terrible either. Good ideas. Keep up the good work!
BazookaZombie responds:
yeah, the transition does need work.
man, oh, man.
just beautiful. but im sorry 2:38 ruined it for me it almost feels like you spliced two songs of the same message but not the same style. Maybe if you split them and made them two it would be better. The solo was phenomenally moving... it's like cross -roads music, if that makes any sense at all...
BazookaZombie responds:
yeah, gotta work on a something better, its part of something much longer i wanted to do. but didn't have time, so it just got forced in.
Fantastic.
Good music is hard to come by nowadays. This song was truly amazing. And i totally agree with you the simplicity of the solo just made it so much better. Great song.
BazookaZombie responds:
awesome, thanks alot. glad you liked it.
Great Work!
I Got to admit, the beginning really hit me,Big Time! that was absolutely fantastic,but i have to go with Bearkillr, the end kind of got me a bit, but good overall. Great Work and 10 stars!
BazookaZombie responds:
yeah, i'm currently thinking of ways to tighten up that transition and the ending.
thanks for listening.
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4.64 / 5.00
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- Classic Rock
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- 4 min 34 sec
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