i love it

its awsome

Has potential...

Out of curiosity what kind of amp do you use and is it the amp distortion or a pedal? The EQ could use some work so if you let me know i may be able to help...

great

awesome guitar, dude
strong... nice rhythm
I like the ending...

\m/

I like the riffs, they are pretty catchy and the rhythm is good, too. But overall the sound quality is too thin. The drums are too quiet, so that one can hardly hear them - and unfortuneatly the sound of the guitar is very bland, too.
Also, the song gets quite boring towards the end, but that's the problem with nearly all instrumentals. There are very few instrumentals out there that keeps the listener interested the whole time.
As a final remark it can be said that you've done quite a good job here, but you have to improve your sound quality a whole bit.

Give me a break!!

that dark styled music was very good man keep that good work