Ouch my ears!

this wasnt completley bad...but u composed it rly anoyingly...to my ears it was just noise and some guy from Lord of the Rings...and u did say its ur music look at "Author Comments" it clealy says "my music"

Not Good At All...

You would think for a stolen beat (I'm not accusing you, I don't know the circumstances... However it does sound IDENTICAL to the song the guy below me linked to.) You think you would steal a better one (Not saying you did steal it, for all I know he stole from you, or you are him, or whatever the situation is)

I just think this doesnt sound good regardless. It tries too hard to be epic, it's been done to death, and no offense, but it sucks. As an instrumental it sounds tired and cliche, and it's much too loud for lyrics to go over it.

Awful, simply awful. You need to create/steal/sample something much better than this if you want to be a respected artist.