Score: 5
"Mm..."
date: December 27, 2007
The "chorus" vocaly aah thingy in the background was kind of cool, but was a bit abrupt with the note changing. I was hoping at the start that the "chorus" would somehow fade out while a much lower note faded in, which would make a cool intro. (This intro was actually used by one of my friends in some incomplete song, but it has probably been used more than once. Besides, it still sounds cool.) I guess I would have preferred the note changing of the "aah" sound to be a bit more smooth and slidey, too. The bass was OK, though it came in a bit early for my liking and was a bit too quiet. The drums were cleverly sliced, but were very unoriginal. Don't worry about it, though. :) One of my early songs used that same drumloop a lot worse than this did, in an imitation of Pilchard. (I'm not saying you did a bad job of the drums, though.) I would try using mixer effects, such as filters, distortions and the likes to improve on the drums and other sounds. Bring more effects in! Also, the drums should probably vary a bit more. I quite liked the snare that came in, which made a nice punchy effect. Anyway, what this song really needs is some breakdown into a heavy, powerful, uh... breakdown. It got too repetitive after halfway through; it didn't change much. It could have been a bit faster, too; it wasn't exactly Drum N Bass speed. Good work, but there are a few things you could improve on.
... You said it's not a big deal. I seem to be making a big deal out of this, but that's just me. :D
I gave the song 5/10.
Good luck for future music,
ND