Rosenrot is my favorite song of Rammstein so this is very nice for me

yeah

the melody sounds pretty robotic when you repeat short notes to make melodies that would probably sound better at a faster speed or as chords- cause this way, it sounds rather bland. I like the syncy sweep on one of the synths. Sadly the song keeps the same way waaaay too long. I'm kinda bored of listening to the sae stuff all over- wait there is some sort of other melody with the syncy sweep synth. Pretty random and off but strangely it works.

Ooh so there's a new part here- that choir makes it sound pretty dreamy, which is cool in a song like this. You choose some strange way of going from one part to another, suddenly it just drop and then it catches up- it's quite interesting. Anyways man, it sounds interesting and original, but there's lots of improvments that could be made.

review me back lololol