Score: 8
"Hmm..."
date: September 13, 2007
Hmm...you got a three...not sure why, this deserves a four. Its good, that new age?/bell combo(?) that you used throughout most of the song was nice but it did seem a little bit loud at points, which kinda threw the rest of it off (not bleed the ears loud...but a piercing loudness at points).
You want a couple tips here?...
Double up on the drums...
Clone the new age/bell track(s) and move the entire track forward and around a bit till you find something that fits and sounds good. The dings (what? XD) sound good...but I think that they would sound better had they had more beats overall.
Longer my friend, longer...maybe double the length with additional variety.
You know...its not that bad^^, its not bad at all,
-AJ-
September 13, 2007
Author's Response:
Te dings (no homo) are from the same sound and if the notes go higher you won't be able to hear them. And like I said...I may do more to it but i'm not sure...oh and thx for giving it a four and I'm glad you like it!! ^_^v